A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Can Bring Treasures Out of My Dreams

Not bad. Although this plug-in is not used very frequently, it needs to be used every 10 days. But it can be considered that I have been using it. However, some of the skills acquired in dreams take a long time to be used. For example, the skill of being a cook seems to have been learned very early, but it was only officially used in the most recent chapters. There is also a fishing skill, I don't know when it will be used... 😜

Why is the rating so low? I just read Chapter 22 of Redemption. I couldn't help but burst into tears. I feel that the author's plot and emotional promotion were so good. The beginning was full of ups and downs, and he suffered unforeseen disasters and was imprisoned. The dream concept itself was so clever. It entered the dream of Liu Shiyuan, the great monk who built the foundation, and solved the current misfortune. It also described it very profoundly. With that kind of bone-gnawing hatred of missing out on family ties, Liu Shiyuan nonchalantly ate the steamed bun that his sister saved for him despite being extremely hungry, which ate his conscience. When he wanted to condense the golden elixir a hundred years later, he wanted to find his conscience and break his inner demons, but his sister was dead and his conscience could never be found again. So well written It's tied again~ The author would like to give you more encouragement! The writing is really great. The point of entering a dream is very strange. I have read it for the first time after reading so many books.

Good. So far, the suppression of the protagonist has been a little too much.

The story is good, the plot is engaging, and worth watching.

This is quite interesting to watch.

The writing is quite good, but this level of cultivation is too slow. If you write like this, I estimate that it will take you tens of millions of words to reach the realm of transformation 🤦

Chapter 20 The protagonist deceives the old man 🙂 Temporarily 5 stars for encouragement Uh-huh, how should I put it? After escaping from the sect, the rhythm has changed. It looks uncomfortable It's like driving and suddenly comes to a sudden stop. It's not that poisonous There's just no rhythm From more than 20 chapters to 100 chapters Do two things in total, make fish Entering the ghost realm and exiting the ghost realm But there is no strength improvement in these 100 chapters. It feels like the main thread of the entire article is gone. It doesn't show up even when hanging up It's not that it's an unsightly place. Uh-huh, it's about chapter 20 I thought the main plot was the classic routine of the protagonist improving his strength and taking revenge. But the entire 100 or so chapters feel like they have become ordinary text. In other words, the protagonist is so awesome, (You can enter other people's dreams, you can bring exercises, immortality and various arts, cultivation, items, etc. From dreams) But there is no improvement in these 100 chapters, and the level has not been improved. He is still a young monk who has just started practicing qi. It feels like you have to get out of the car and push the cart even though you have a good car.

The author's writing skills are first-rate and he has a deep understanding of the separation between immortals and mortals.

There is a lot of writing, which is in line with the struggling situation of the low-level monks. Hurry up and let Goldfinger be more awesome and take off.

I give it 9 out of 10 points, mainly because of the deduction for spiritual roots, the plot, etc. Are pretty good.