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I think back then, I accidentally obtained the "Nine-Star Tianchen Jue" in "Douluo Dalu" and reached the peak of "Dzi Bead Transformation". I thought I was "invincible". With the power of "Martial Arts", I single-handedly challenged "Mad God", "Son of Light", "God Lord", "Shura God of War" and "Immortal King". I wanted to create the feat of "Zhu Xian" single-handedly, but unfortunately I lost and lost all my martial arts. With the help of "The Kind God of Death", I came to the "World of Immortality". The "Alien Martial Star Lord" saw my "god-level talent" and accepted me as his disciple. He gave me an artifact "Cun Mang" and took me to "The Avenue of Heavenly Fire" to obtain the divine pet "Coiling Dragon". I met the "School Beauty's Personal Expert" by chance in "The Tomb of Gods", and with his help, I successfully broke through, gained the power of "Fights Break the Sphere", became the "Great Master" of "Covering the Sky", and embarked on the road of "Full-time God Cultivation", and saw the "very pure and warm" thing happened between "Shura God of War" and "King Han". After I returned, I personally issued the decree "No Evil" and wrote an autobiography called "Warcraft Creation of Saints and Miracles", in which there is a famous saying - My name is Lingtian, "I want to seal the sky". And left a legend for the world - "Legend of Liquid Sky". Later, I came to "Spirit Realm", but a "Star Wars Storm" blew up on the way, but fortunately I was not in danger. After arriving, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Piaomiao Journey" and entered the "All Heavens and All Realms". I met the "Killing God", also known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "God Seal Throne" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After I recovered from the injury, they said goodbye to me, and then recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I played the role of "Underworld Special Forces" in "Peerless Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky" and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. That's where I developed Final Intelligence, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix drinks. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unique World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I embarked on the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I practiced the "Immortality" divine body. ", I used "Tian Zhu Tu" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power, and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the Yuan Dynasty of "The Wild Era"~~~ Alas | I am old and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update! (I don't know about the others. They kill decisively and take revenge. Anyway, I enjoyed watching them)

(Up and down) Excellent++/8.5 Points, mark,,, Good sense of immersion, excellent plug-ins, good settings, good writing, and brevity Excellent performance, good imagination, good character design, good main plot, and excellent logic Show. Extra points: none Personal feelings: It's a very standard pirate fanfic, and its biggest feature is that it's about working and having fun. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. —————————————————— 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Additional deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, allocation Angle, time, geography, knowledge. (5) Evaluation: ①Excellent (+4), ②Excellent (+2), G Good (+1), ④ Fair (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ extremely poor (-3). Taking "lower than average/four stars as good/7 points" as the center, the evaluation score is based on the first nine items. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, as expected) Exceptional excellence): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, with more than 1,000 updates): (18) Five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) Five-star quality/9.5 Points+, (22) Five-star quality +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (a good book with rigorous and self-consistent logic, a book that does not meet your taste) Good book): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/ 8.5 Points+, (16) five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) five-star Excellent/8.0 Points, (10) five-star excellent +/8.0 Points+. (5) Lower-middle (works with average performance, no outstanding highlights, No major problems): (-5) Three-star rating is poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star rating is one Average -15 points+, (-3) three-star average 16 points, (-2) four-star average +/6 points, (-1) four-star good -16 points+, (0) four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four stars good +/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, the contents are: (-15) Two-star extreme difference +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme difference/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extreme difference -1-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++1-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing and far below expectations) Personal experience): Unknown Samsung/x points. (9) Inferior (Novel that is unattractive to read, no review Price): 2 stars unknown/0 points.

In the early stage, the development was a bit jerky and focused on mindless martial arts. In the later stage, it turned into a combination of wits and wits, driving low and moving high. He killed the cadres of the red-haired pirates and put the blame on the navy, hung up his body to pass on information to blame Araki, and used the power of the navy to kill the entire red-haired pirates and called himself "Momonosuke". There are endless conspiracies and tricks, and the unnatural strategies make people call them unworthy. The disadvantage is that enmity is a bit stiff and unnatural, but revenge is straightforward, smooth and logical. The plot is fascinating, the atmosphere is light-hearted and humorous yet serious, the fight descriptions are vivid in detail, and the characters are perfectly created, especially the descriptions of Luffy, Akainu and others, which makes one wonder if the author dragged himself into the book.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I can't get enough of it This book achieves "Invincible movement speed at the beginning", "Daily humiliation of the protagonist group", "Three sentences that the four emperors were injured for me", "I killed the four emperors with 1% damage in team battles", "Three sentences of armed and domineering women gave birth to my children", "I like to have fun"

I feel that the protagonist is a little nanny to Luffy. The Luffy team repeatedly kills the protagonist, but the protagonist spares them time and time again, and even trains them to become stronger. However, the red-haired pirates were destroyed by the protagonist's design team. It is enjoyable to watch. In the future, Luffy team will find out whether they will fall out with the protagonist. I can't wait for the follow-up plot.

The heroine Arrita?

Good! There is no bitterness or hatred, no hostility and hatred for no reason, the protagonist is neutral and fun. The plot advances very naturally, neither fast nor slow, rhythmic and organized. All enemies must be avenged. There is no need for help or help. Everyone is the protagonist's chess piece and tool.

He is so nice to Arrita, so that she can be the enemy of the whole world, no matter how the enemy is made [laughing and crying] [OK]

I have read many types of pirate novels, and this one is really good. The protagonist is funny and sinister. He does not stick to trivial matters in order to become stronger. He does not have a clear stance like other fans. He is either a navy or a pirate. As long as he can become stronger, the protagonist can do any job. However, the score of the book may not be too high. Too many so-called pirates may not be able to accept the destruction of the red hair. What they are reading is not a book, but a substitute for their own immersion.

Okay, to be honest, I quite like the red-haired group, but the plot of the protagonist is really good. He is a super silver coin. Okay, okay. Anyway, the character design is good. Although it is a novel, there are all kinds of coincidences. The key point is that I haven't read a story in which the protagonist uses his brain for so long. I haven't read a story in which the protagonist uses his brain for so long that I feel a little uncomfortable [laughter]

I don't feel anything from the front, but from behind I fuck the redhead, it's so exciting, but I just don't know how to choose between Luffy and Ace in the future.

It's been a while since I gave this book a high score or added it to my bookshelf. This book seems pretty good so far. The protagonist is completely Jia Xu, a bitch, which is quite good. The various plots are also good. Revenge is real and there are no flaws. I hope it doesn't fall apart in the future.

This book is quite interesting. It is indeed an alternative way of thinking. People in the pirate world are generally quite stupid, but other fans really don't play with their IQs. The part in this book where the main character is considered a dead redhead is quite logical.

Absolutely good-looking, and kills redheads in the beginning.

Unique article, full of passion for reading. When I arrived in Wano, I felt that the nature of the novel had changed, especially the plot of Yamato was polluted. Also, how come the part-time article suddenly turned into a deceptive article? It's okay if it's appropriate, but it becomes stale if it's too much.

He's really a little genius, and the red-haired face doesn't work anymore

It's good, but it suddenly changes and becomes intense again.

It's really good. It's not like others. You've traveled through time and people beat you, but you don't dare to beat them to death.

It's awesome, it's like the ceiling of IQ and strategy in pirate novels. Kill the red-haired pirates, Kobi, beat up the Straw Hats, and get Momonosuke. Incredibly awesome

Why does it feel like the second part was not written by the same person as the first part?

A rare good fan

The author's writing is okay, but I personally don't like this type of writing very much [laughs]

It was so funny that I was swinging on a swing in the primitive jungle.

At the beginning, I thought it was just a disguised tour (there were too many situations where the protagonist's pupils shrank unexpectedly, so it would be better to change the wording), but it unfolded quite nicely later on.

Wc, I thought it was a system upgrade stream when I looked at it earlier, and I thought it was not as good as setting up a spaceship, but things got better as soon as the plot unfolded. It's great, quick update!

More, more, more, I saw it was past four in the morning, I couldn't help it, I went, and finally finished watching it [face covering]

Five stars must be five stars, so I killed a boatload of red-haired people

Good! Hee hee hee hee hee

It's my favorite type of novel

It's okay, it's just a trick.