The Smiling, Proud Wanderer: A Sword Rises from Taihu Lake

It is quite an excellent martial arts novel. It does not forcefully divide the realms. In addition, the description of martial arts moves is very elegant, as well as the ancient charm of the language description. The writing style is quite excellent. The author consciously feels that the opening chapter is not attractive enough, but I think it is more fascinating to focus on the plot, and it is more interesting to use the plot to shape the characters. Three-dimensional, so the characters are all different in their portrayal, and there are no too brainless characters. This is a novel that transcends the platform level. The problem is that the protagonist is a bit too genius. Although there is no problem in the shaping process, I am a bit worried that the protagonist will not be able to describe the grandeur of the world after being pushed all the way. I feel that AI is getting more and more involved, especially in the latter part of the story about the feelings of family and country. The big part is a psychological description of patriotism, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In addition, the protagonist's time travel is too ancient, and the characteristics of time travel are not written. Things are too honest, and the quality has declined a bit.

The author has superb writing skills, a proficient understanding of martial arts, and a sophisticated understanding of the world. There are also many places in daily life that are very well written. In terms of martial arts, it is already very amazing. It's definitely at the level of grass jelly. The only shortcoming is that the plot is too compact and the timeline is too short. You can fast forward a little, and pig's feet will not start entering the plot until after he is 20 years old. Don't get into the plot so quickly in the early stage. After all, the pig trotters are too small and they are still children. You can write more details about the practice.

The author's writing is pretty good, and the image of the talented protagonist, Lu Chengfeng and others has also been established. The location is Taihu Lake, which is a place where the conflict is not too violent, and it also reveals another side of the world. However, there are conflicts when martial arts novels are based on real history. The establishment of a dynasty is based on the fact that there is not much difference in force between people, and martial arts breaks this boundary. Let's see how the author comes around, or downplays the influence of the court like Swordsman.

The Chinese pen in Tomato is very good! The protagonist in the novel is not pretentious, cunning or cunning!

I didn't expect there to be such excellent traditional martial arts works in Tomato. Come on, author, don't stop updating. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development.

Is it possible that Yi Jian's masterpiece of martial arts, the writing and story are carefully polished, but in today's fast-paced environment, it may not be suitable, but it is still a good martial arts. I am tired of watching the return of the fantasy urban dragon king, and want to read the recommendations of the ancient martial arts style.

Well written! Speak eloquently, smoothly and naturally

Well written, unlike those mindless and cool articles

It's great. 🍅The works in Xiaoaowen are very good. It's great to suddenly find such a good book to read from among the pile💩

No, this writing level is better than 99% of books on Tomato, but it only has a score of 5.5