The storytellers on the street told the story of the Wuyue Sword Sect's battle against the Sun and Moon God Sect, the Fuwei Escort Agency from Fujian told the reputation of the Seventy-Two Paths to ward off evil spirits, and the Yandang swordsmiths clamored to compete with Longquan Sword Master.
The past cannot be traced back, traveling through the age of thirteen.
It is better to simmer wine in a small boat and soar into the sky with a jade sword than to cut off this extremely hypocritical world and cut off the fame and fortune pursued by mediocre people.
Reader comments
It is quite an excellent martial arts novel. It does not forcefully divide the realms. In addition, the description of martial arts moves is very elegant, as well as the ancient charm of the language description. The writing style is quite excellent. The author consciously feels that the opening chapter is not attractive enough, but I think it is more fascinating to focus on the plot, and it is more interesting to use the plot to shape the characters. Three-dimensional, so the characters are all different in their portrayal, and there are no too brainless characters. This is a novel that transcends the platform level. The problem is that the protagonist is a bit too genius. Although there is no problem in the shaping process, I am a bit worried that the protagonist will be pushed all the way, and the magnificent world will not be able to be written.
I feel that AI is getting more and more involved, especially in the latter part of the story about the feelings of family and country. The large sections describe patriotism psychologically, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In addition, the protagonist's time travel is too ancient, and the characteristics of time travel are not written. Things are too honest, and the quality has declined a bit.
The author has superb writing skills, a proficient understanding of martial arts, and a sophisticated understanding of the world.
There are also many places in daily life that are very well written.
In terms of martial arts, it is already very amazing.
It's definitely at the level of grass jelly.
The only shortcoming is that the plot is too compact and the timeline is too short.
You can fast forward a little, and pig's feet will not start entering the plot until after he is 20 years old.
Don't get into the plot so quickly in the early stage. After all, the pig trotters are too small and they are still children.
You can write more details about the practice.
The author's writing is pretty good, and the image of the talented protagonist, Lu Chengfeng and others has also been established. The location is Taihu Lake, which is a place where the conflict is not too violent, and it also reveals another side of the world. However, there are conflicts when martial arts novels are based on real history. The establishment of a dynasty is based on the fact that there is not much difference in force between people, and martial arts breaks this boundary. Let's see how the author comes around, or downplays the influence of the court like Swordsman.
The Chinese pen in Tomato is very good! The protagonist in the novel is not pretentious, cunning or cunning!
I didn't expect there to be such excellent traditional martial arts works in Tomato. Come on, author, don't stop updating. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development.
Well written, unlike those mindless and cool articles
Well written! Speak eloquently, smoothly and naturally
Is it possible that Yi Jian's masterpiece of martial arts, the writing and story are carefully polished, but in today's fast-paced environment, it may not be suitable, but it is still a good martial arts. I am tired of watching the return of the fantasy urban dragon king, and want to read the recommendations of the ancient martial arts style.
I have my own ideas, which are currently much better than most of the tomatoes.
There are currently 56 chapters. It's well written. I'm starting to get in touch with the court. I don't know if I can control it in the future. Come on.
I'm not going to lie to you guys, this is really good-looking, it's a genius, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, the writing is smooth, the main line is clear, and it has a Jianghu atmosphere.
To be honest, I think it's very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low. I'd like to send you a five-star encouragement. The author must not be a eunuch.
It's great. 🍅The works in Xiaoaowen are very good. It's great to suddenly find such a good book to read from among the pile💩
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The writing is sharp and the plot is great!
Good writing, with a martial arts style
Vivid and beautiful image
Plain and straightforward, worth watching
Nice! ! I hope it's a single heroine
Not bad, is it a harem or pure love?
The book is good, but I want to ask first, single, many, or none?
No, this writing level is better than 99% of books on Tomato, but it only has a score of 5.5
Such a good book, the rating is too low
It's good to read. It's not easy to find a high-quality book.
I want to know how you call your master. Now master, now master Lu, now father, now father, you changed four names in one chapter.
The writing style of classical martial arts has the taste of a published book, not bad, a little bit literary, the original work of Xiaoao is very strong, a new bottle of wine, the shell is from a film and TV series, and the inner bottom is still the same as that of Jin Yong's martial arts
Gentle and elegant, the handsome gentleman, Lu Xiaochuan
I've read the first ten chapters and feel good about it, so let's read on.
The writing and plot are exciting, not a mindless novel.
The description is sharp, the language is fluent, and the fighting is complex and logical.
It is quite an excellent martial arts novel. It does not forcefully divide the realms. In addition, the description of martial arts moves is very elegant, as well as the ancient charm of the language description. The writing style is quite excellent. The author consciously feels that the opening chapter is not attractive enough, but I think it is more fascinating to focus on the plot, and it is more interesting to use the plot to shape the characters. Three-dimensional, so the characters are all different in their portrayal, and there are no too brainless characters. This is a novel that transcends the platform level. The problem is that the protagonist is a bit too genius. Although there is no problem in the shaping process, I am a bit worried that the protagonist will be pushed all the way, and the magnificent world will not be able to be written. I feel that AI is getting more and more involved, especially in the latter part of the story about the feelings of family and country. The large sections describe patriotism psychologically, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In addition, the protagonist's time travel is too ancient, and the characteristics of time travel are not written. Things are too honest, and the quality has declined a bit.
The author has superb writing skills, a proficient understanding of martial arts, and a sophisticated understanding of the world. There are also many places in daily life that are very well written. In terms of martial arts, it is already very amazing. It's definitely at the level of grass jelly. The only shortcoming is that the plot is too compact and the timeline is too short. You can fast forward a little, and pig's feet will not start entering the plot until after he is 20 years old. Don't get into the plot so quickly in the early stage. After all, the pig trotters are too small and they are still children. You can write more details about the practice.
The author's writing is pretty good, and the image of the talented protagonist, Lu Chengfeng and others has also been established. The location is Taihu Lake, which is a place where the conflict is not too violent, and it also reveals another side of the world. However, there are conflicts when martial arts novels are based on real history. The establishment of a dynasty is based on the fact that there is not much difference in force between people, and martial arts breaks this boundary. Let's see how the author comes around, or downplays the influence of the court like Swordsman.
The Chinese pen in Tomato is very good! The protagonist in the novel is not pretentious, cunning or cunning!
I didn't expect there to be such excellent traditional martial arts works in Tomato. Come on, author, don't stop updating. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development.
Well written, unlike those mindless and cool articles
Well written! Speak eloquently, smoothly and naturally
Is it possible that Yi Jian's masterpiece of martial arts, the writing and story are carefully polished, but in today's fast-paced environment, it may not be suitable, but it is still a good martial arts. I am tired of watching the return of the fantasy urban dragon king, and want to read the recommendations of the ancient martial arts style.
I have my own ideas, which are currently much better than most of the tomatoes.
There are currently 56 chapters. It's well written. I'm starting to get in touch with the court. I don't know if I can control it in the future. Come on.
I'm not going to lie to you guys, this is really good-looking, it's a genius, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, the writing is smooth, the main line is clear, and it has a Jianghu atmosphere.
To be honest, I think it's very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low. I'd like to send you a five-star encouragement. The author must not be a eunuch.
It's great. 🍅The works in Xiaoaowen are very good. It's great to suddenly find such a good book to read from among the pile💩
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The writing is sharp and the plot is great!
Good writing, with a martial arts style
Vivid and beautiful image
Plain and straightforward, worth watching
Nice! ! I hope it's a single heroine
Not bad, is it a harem or pure love?
The book is good, but I want to ask first, single, many, or none?
No, this writing level is better than 99% of books on Tomato, but it only has a score of 5.5
Such a good book, the rating is too low
It's good to read. It's not easy to find a high-quality book.
I want to know how you call your master. Now master, now master Lu, now father, now father, you changed four names in one chapter.
The writing style of classical martial arts has the taste of a published book, not bad, a little bit literary, the original work of Xiaoao is very strong, a new bottle of wine, the shell is from a film and TV series, and the inner bottom is still the same as that of Jin Yong's martial arts
Gentle and elegant, the handsome gentleman, Lu Xiaochuan
I've read the first ten chapters and feel good about it, so let's read on.
The writing and plot are exciting, not a mindless novel.
The description is sharp, the language is fluent, and the fighting is complex and logical.