A short essay about the master-apprenticeship in the years of master-apprenticeship.
[Hello everyone, I am wearing a book. As a person who is well aware of the tricks of writing, I learned from the mistakes of my predecessors, just to avoid master-disciple romance in my later years, and to protect my sexuality as a straight man. I worked hard for many years to stay lonely, and finally I was with the male protagonist.
A well-behaved, straight-ball player who can act like a spoiled brat (master only), apprentice attack × too many setting elements, loves to complain about master shou, Lu Wanzhao × Shen Changting.
The complete text is included in the first chapter.
Reminder before viewing:
1. The master has a special setting, but he does not have children.
2. First love, Shuang Jie, apprentice is not a typical male protagonist, he likes to pretend to be pitiful
The first volume is about the two people from acquaintance to falling in love. There is no dark link. It is an innocent and funny little sweet story.
The second volume is about a young couple who have been married for many years and use another book to help torture a scumbag. They won't feel aggrieved and will only feel happy. Please read it too.
Reader comments
First! ! ! ! ! I really like this book. It's so well written. Why hasn't anyone read it? This book is written in the first person, but it is not awkward. The relationship between the master and the apprentice develops very quickly (no conflicts). The plot is very smooth. If you have anything to say, I will tell you directly. It is very comfortable to read. Ah, I don't know how to describe it, but it is very beautiful anyway (forgive me for being uneducated). The author must insist on updating, this book will definitely get better [Sending Hearts]
It is rare to find a novel that can be read by people who are not used to reading in the first person. Volume 2 has a very good idea as an anti-"bring the flower of the high mountain to the quagmire". The interaction between the two protagonists is sweet and reassuring. Although there are fewer chapters, the writing does not feel sloppy at all👍
I rarely read first-person novels, and they always feel like narcissism. But this article is well written. The inner activities of the protagonist are described very relaxedly and pleasantly, and the first-person writing is great! The main character is so cute, he will be chased after he starts crying hahahahahaha
Super sweet, a rare sweet article among master-disciple articles. The apprentice is very, very good and has a great personality! ! ! ! It is simply a benchmark in the apprentice world and makes people feel happy. There are no conflicts between the master and the disciple, and any conflicts will be resolved quickly. It is much better than those articles that treat the master as belongings, plot against the master, and imprison the master! ! ! Makes people feel happy and relaxed
A very interesting little sweet article. When the first extra story traveled to another small world, the original character was really pitiful and sad. I had seen this kind of setting in Haitang before, and I didn't think much about it at the time. However, if you really think of these novels as a small world with a low latitude, the characters in them are really pitiful when they are set as rags, especially the forced ones, which are painful and sad to watch. The ending is also slightly sad. The second extra is a modern parallel world, which is funny and sweet. And when they finally returned to their original world to take a look, it also confirmed the saying that the end of death is forgetfulness. Overall, it's a sweet article that exceeds expectations. After all, I don't usually read first-person stories, but this one is very interesting.
It is a pleasant and sweet little article written in the first person, but it does not give readers a sense of involvement. It still feels like watching other people falling in love, which is not awkward.
The timeline jumps a bit at the beginning, but the emotional line in the fantasy world is written very delicately and flows smoothly. And I love the protagonist with a long mouth.
I really like the setting that the world was born because of the activation of Shen Changting. It is Shen Changting from beginning to end. Finally, there is no need to worry about whether the time traveler is worthy of the original owner.
The protagonist is kind-hearted, but not a holy mother. She has very upright views, especially in the second volume, which is vividly reflected. She will always say no to the scum who pulls the mire under the moonlight, and no to the theory of victim guilt.
Rong Jue's extra episode really made me cry. Little Bitter Melon finally has its own little bit of sweetness.
The book makes people feel very relaxed, like gurgling water, giving me a feeling (?) Like when I read those ancient novels (I wrote this review long after I read it, so I only have a rough impression)
It's very heart-warming. The original owner of the second world is simply Yu Ru'e himself. When I watched it, I felt that he was so miserable. He was originally aloof, but ended up being sacked. The most disgusting thing is that he was killed in the finale. Watching this is equivalent to seeing someone help him take revenge.
The main CP is sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, so sweet, so sweet! ! ! Although the deputy CP is quite sadistic, I really like this kind of redemption story \(//∇//)\! ! !
The content is good and the writing is worth reading. Rong Jue's story really speaks to my heart. QJ means crime and viciousness. It is not allowed to use love to beautify and package any crime.
I love it so much. I don't know what to review, but this is the first time I've reviewed it so seriously on Tomato. I love this book so much.
Can the author give me a signed copy of his next book?
It's really good to watch hahahahahahaha, very funny, there's nothing cruel or cruel, there's nothing about being short-tongued and causing misunderstandings, it's just a very light-hearted cookie.
It's very interesting, the logic is online, and it's a rare sweet article. I kept laughing while reading it. The sweet article healed my soul.
Although it's in the first person, it looks good [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]
Go ahead, the content is really good! ! ! ! ! The first person perspective is super exciting! ! ! !
Relaxed and good-looking [laughs]
Very good looking, highly recommended [Adoration]
The emotional line is very sweet! Nice
Okay, cookie.
It's quite lighthearted and funny, very nice to watch.
Not bad. Can be used as a small dessert.
It smells good. The author will continue to produce food.
World 1 is quite boring, World 2 is okay in punishing scumbags for others, but the parallel world teacher-student line is more interesting in comparison
I rarely read first-person articles, but this one is really nice and cute.
Very nice! Very beautiful! Why are there so few people watching! ! !
First! ! ! ! ! I really like this book. It's so well written. Why hasn't anyone read it? This book is written in the first person, but it is not awkward. The relationship between the master and the apprentice develops very quickly (no conflicts). The plot is very smooth. If you have anything to say, I will tell you directly. It is very comfortable to read. Ah, I don't know how to describe it, but it is very beautiful anyway (forgive me for being uneducated). The author must insist on updating, this book will definitely get better [Sending Hearts]
It is rare to find a novel that can be read by people who are not used to reading in the first person. Volume 2 has a very good idea as an anti-"bring the flower of the high mountain to the quagmire". The interaction between the two protagonists is sweet and reassuring. Although there are fewer chapters, the writing does not feel sloppy at all👍
I rarely read first-person novels, and they always feel like narcissism. But this article is well written. The inner activities of the protagonist are described very relaxedly and pleasantly, and the first-person writing is great! The main character is so cute, he will be chased after he starts crying hahahahahaha
Super sweet, a rare sweet article among master-disciple articles. The apprentice is very, very good and has a great personality! ! ! ! It is simply a benchmark in the apprentice world and makes people feel happy. There are no conflicts between the master and the disciple, and any conflicts will be resolved quickly. It is much better than those articles that treat the master as belongings, plot against the master, and imprison the master! ! ! Makes people feel happy and relaxed
A very interesting little sweet article. When the first extra story traveled to another small world, the original character was really pitiful and sad. I had seen this kind of setting in Haitang before, and I didn't think much about it at the time. However, if you really think of these novels as a small world with a low latitude, the characters in them are really pitiful when they are set as rags, especially the forced ones, which are painful and sad to watch. The ending is also slightly sad. The second extra is a modern parallel world, which is funny and sweet. And when they finally returned to their original world to take a look, it also confirmed the saying that the end of death is forgetfulness. Overall, it's a sweet article that exceeds expectations. After all, I don't usually read first-person stories, but this one is very interesting.
It is a pleasant and sweet little article written in the first person, but it does not give readers a sense of involvement. It still feels like watching other people falling in love, which is not awkward. The timeline jumps a bit at the beginning, but the emotional line in the fantasy world is written very delicately and flows smoothly. And I love the protagonist with a long mouth. I really like the setting that the world was born because of the activation of Shen Changting. It is Shen Changting from beginning to end. Finally, there is no need to worry about whether the time traveler is worthy of the original owner. The protagonist is kind-hearted, but not a holy mother. She has very upright views, especially in the second volume, which is vividly reflected. She will always say no to the scum who pulls the mire under the moonlight, and no to the theory of victim guilt. Rong Jue's extra episode really made me cry. Little Bitter Melon finally has its own little bit of sweetness.
The book makes people feel very relaxed, like gurgling water, giving me a feeling (?) Like when I read those ancient novels (I wrote this review long after I read it, so I only have a rough impression)
It's very heart-warming. The original owner of the second world is simply Yu Ru'e himself. When I watched it, I felt that he was so miserable. He was originally aloof, but ended up being sacked. The most disgusting thing is that he was killed in the finale. Watching this is equivalent to seeing someone help him take revenge.
The main CP is sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, so sweet, so sweet! ! ! Although the deputy CP is quite sadistic, I really like this kind of redemption story \(//∇//)\! ! !
The content is good and the writing is worth reading. Rong Jue's story really speaks to my heart. QJ means crime and viciousness. It is not allowed to use love to beautify and package any crime.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I love it so much. I don't know what to review, but this is the first time I've reviewed it so seriously on Tomato. I love this book so much. Can the author give me a signed copy of his next book?
It's really good to watch hahahahahahaha, very funny, there's nothing cruel or cruel, there's nothing about being short-tongued and causing misunderstandings, it's just a very light-hearted cookie.
It's very interesting, the logic is online, and it's a rare sweet article. I kept laughing while reading it. The sweet article healed my soul.
Although it's in the first person, it looks good [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]
Go ahead, the content is really good! ! ! ! ! The first person perspective is super exciting! ! ! !
Relaxed and good-looking [laughs]
Very good looking, highly recommended [Adoration]
The emotional line is very sweet! Nice
Okay, cookie.
It's quite lighthearted and funny, very nice to watch.
Not bad. Can be used as a small dessert.
It smells good. The author will continue to produce food.
World 1 is quite boring, World 2 is okay in punishing scumbags for others, but the parallel world teacher-student line is more interesting in comparison
I rarely read first-person articles, but this one is really nice and cute.
Very nice! Very beautiful! Why are there so few people watching! ! !
It's super pretty! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhh, ahhh
Spreading flowers will be completed on August 11, 2025! It's really beautiful, but it's a pity that there are so few people…
First person, very cute psychological description. Although I don't like the sx setting, it's quite interesting.
Yes, it's rare that it's not so awkward in the first person, and it's quite relaxed and funny.