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It's completely different from Zaijiu's book. Although it's a copy, the actual plot is different!!! (Some people in the ratings, can you take a look and rate it again? The fake ranking is just a bad thing for Zaijiu. What should I read if the author of the fake mine removal doesn't write it? Even if you read a copy, you will know it's not the same...) The copy is different, the game is different, and the characters are different. What's wrong with you? There are more excellent novels with more female channels... The advantage is that all the important characters are female, and the younger brother was also killed by the female protagonist. (The heroine killed him when the game caused chaos.) I don't think the An family sisters are cowards in the plot. They are still directors and diplomats after all. If they don't doubt at all, then the world is really doomed and they are just waiting for the heroine to save them. The heroine's behavior at the beginning is in the eyes of the authorities. It's just that people are suspicious of it... The supporting characters can't be clueless... The heroine in the Penglai plot only cooperates with the official to sell wine. The actual plot is not much. It's good to watch, but it doesn't feel that exciting. It's not exciting enough, but the plot is smooth and the book is interesting.

It's so heartbreaking. I wrote about a hundred words and accidentally quit without saving [crying] Overall it's pretty good, but the wording is rather neutral. The author listened to the advice and changed the usage of "young man" several times after seeing the comment section. Most of the supporting characters are women, which makes them very comfortable to watch. Regarding the characters, the girls have very diverse personalities, which is great. The heroine has a big setting that she likes yin people, but I think all aspects of her description are quite sunny and upright. This yin is a bit labeled but is mentioned repeatedly, and there are other characteristics as well. However, such emphasis in the text does not leave a deep impression on me, but I often can't react to it. In terms of plot, the heroine killed her brother neatly and neatly, which is a super bonus point, without any inexplicable pulling and pulling. The biological father stayed a little longer, but he didn't have the chance to be estranged from others for too long. I think the author writes about friendship very well. I can't get enough of the warm or hilarious daily life, and the memories are interspersed without being abrupt. I look forward to seeing my sister return, and I also want to know what big news they have caused them to pay so much attention to. Come on, author~

Overall, it's okay. I like the protagonist's character and his interactions with Xiao Lizi and Canglan. But it always felt like it was copied from the Xunge book, and the battle with the mirror monster was a bit crude. The heroine inexplicably understood the skills, and it didn't make me feel the feeling of being forced into the soul fire wave of the ultimate mirror and comprehending it. Although I think the writing style is not as good as Mao Da Da, the content is not the same as Xun Ge, and the author has also written refreshing content. I believe that the author's writing style will get better and better, and so will Yu Nian's. Finally, Xunge is great! No need to say more!

The biggest mistake in this book is probably the name of the heroine. It is too similar to another more popular book, so they were compared together. In fact, the basic settings of Rebirth and Game Invasion are similar. As you read on, you will know that this book has its own ideas and characteristics. The style and plot development are different from that one, and the writing is getting better and better. Come on, author!

How should I put it? Although the author has some ingenious ideas of his own, he obviously borrowed the contents of some books. I started looking through her bookshelf, and there were more than 70 books, including many books such as Xunge, Sanfu, and Qi Xu. After I said it in the comment section, the author deleted it from the bookshelf. It's not very bad at the moment, give it some encouragement points. Well, the author still has a lot of his own ideas. It's true that she's a coward, and it's also true that the heroine didn't have anything to strive for in the beginning. He does have some ambition to save people. I have to say that the official content of this article is very disgusting, entangled, and has no sense of boundaries or emotional intelligence. (At this point, the official here is not as good as the official one who carries the wine)

It's a very cute article, hahaha. Unlike Lone Wolf, this article is quite heartwarming, but it doesn't have many scenes of daily interactions, so it won't be annoying to readers. The plants that appear at the back are also very cute. I feel that Nian Nian's house will soon turn into a kindergarten [face covering] The awakening of talent skills is a bit sloppy and awakened without in-depth description. This seems to be too easy to awaken. The last name is the same as Xun Ge, which makes people think of it (because the surname Yu is not used many times in Tomato) and the little bear that appears is also similar. I hope that I can have more of my own content without the influence of other authors. The whole book is a bit too gentle (there is no danger, everything goes smoothly). The characters are basically kind-hearted and have no calculations. Nian Nian is also a naive person. I hope it can be more cautious, because after all, it is the playground of the gods. Even if the gods do not intervene, they will not only want to watch harmless/uninteresting content. It will be more enjoyable. If If you want to set up a conflict, you should portray the gods in a bad way, so that you can write a small highlight when you gamble back your sister's soul later on. I hope Nian Nian will be more cautious later (you can refer to the protagonist of Sweet Home, you can see the maliciousness of the opponent and Xiao Jiujiu's kind), and also revise the introduction [face covering] [face covering] Now this one is a bit [face covering] inappropriate. If you want to write something more tender, you can also mark it. I quite like the tender type.

The tone of the story is quite good, but the style is different from Xun Ge. It has a refreshing taste that you won't get tired of. Seeing that the only problem now is that self-created skills are too worthless? The s and ss ones seem to be wholesaled to the heroine. Skills are awakened during times of crisis and not too critical. Later, I feel that these things can easily become disposable items that will only be used once or twice and will not have a chance to appear.

Madam, it's so beautiful! I watched it in one sitting yesterday. It's very interesting and there are no surprises in the whole process. Especially the setting of the game copy is very interesting and innovative, and it also kills enemies directly. The main line with my sister runs through the whole story. Each character is really rich, and the team behind it is even more in love. The plot is really good, and everything the heroine does is upgraded. Each level is logical and organized, and the monster-fighting and outsmarting layouts in the dungeon are well written. Each race is particularly novel and interesting. Now the plot feels like it is reaching its climax (the protection period is over and the team is formed). I hope the author can work harder and look forward to the fourth dungeon. However, the rating flow is not proportional to the writing and plot (so little [crying]) PS: The 48-hour father, brother, and black boss bodyguards who just came back are a bit too male, but it started to improve after entering the game (there are almost no men, it is an all-female team). There is no entanglement with the father and brother, and they kill very quickly. If you mind, you can start watching the game after it comes. The game is really interesting [Blow kiss] After reading the comments, I found out that it was because of another book. I haven't read that one (I didn't like it after reading more than a dozen chapters), so I wasn't affected at all. Moreover, I think the author's writing style is very good and easy to read, and the introduction can also tell that it is a large-scale production (but the words are a bit too long to explain clearly. You can add some information about the game copy, such as: Eternal Drunk Fantasy ✓, Whale Falls Oasis ✓, Sleepless Forest ✓) (Personal suggestions, there is no intention that the author must accept them) The author has been taking a good rest recently. Sorry for the change. The frequency and speed of updates are great [Love] I noticed that there are no replies to the recent comments. I am sad to wait, but the author's attitude is really good.

Meal replacement with wine is as good-looking as Xunge/[shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving]

It's a bit similar to Yu Xunhuan's book, but I personally think it's pretty good. He has his own ideas and his writing style is pretty good.

It's quite good-looking. Although the rating is not very high (I believe it will improve), it is actually very good-looking. It is considered one of the better-looking books in the Game Invasion series. The plot design and details are very good (although it is not good to say this, but it is very suitable as a meal replacement for the Xunge book [laughing])

It's very interesting, but it clashes with the setting of "Zaijiu Xunge".

The advantage of following updates is that I can read them every day, which makes the author familiar with me. The disadvantage is that it is not enough to see, not enough to see at all, and I spend every day in anticipation (waiting)

No matter, it's really nice anyway. Especially her copy descriptions. It's really invincible and beautiful. Moreover, her race settings and character settings are very interesting. Anyway, it looks good.

I think it's quite interesting, with a compact plot and a main plot that keeps you watching. I feel that the bad reviews are mainly due to the lack of fun and the fact that I like the lone wolf heroine. It's understandable. After all, everyone likes it differently. I suggest the author write this lightning protection on the homepage from the beginning.

Nice! There are no degrading words and there are many female characters! Very nice! Please keep it up! The girl who likes to work hard the most! Great updates!

I write this comment to encourage the author. I saw too many negative comments in the comment area, but I want to give a praise that deserves recognition. The writing style is completely OK and the writing is very smooth. This shows that the author is very talented. , And also go to other overseas areas and fairy worlds, so there will be a steady stream of freshness. It focuses more on the design and plot of the world view. Another thing is that the book does not describe the current turmoil in the country, the discussion in the world area, and the real netizens who really happened. The sky is falling and the end of the world is too little. As a result, the book does not seem real enough and cannot be substituted into this world. I hope that the author will one day write an immersive novel. Don't give up. You are still very talented.

I forgot the first part and the middle part. When I have time, I will rewrite the previous comments... The most difficult, unforgettable, and most regrettable thing is that I can't take my mother's surname. Will there be a chance for the two of them to change their surname together when my sister comes back🥲

Xunge meal replacement~but the taste is different and the same haoche [Like]

It's quite good. Some places are a bit similar to drinking and singing. But the character of the protagonist is much better than that of Drinking and Singing, at least in my opinion. There aren't many flaws and the plot is pretty good. The characters are also very good

The writing is very interesting and novel. I hope the author writes 100 chapters at once and scares us to death [laughing]

It's very interesting to watch. The characters are well created. She emphasizes love and justice. The heroine is not a virgin. She is accompanied by friends. She pays attention to her own development. She is cautious in doing things and does not involve others when things happen. She is a very independent and sober heroine. It is worth recommending. I hope the author will update it more.

The setting used in the original version is well written, and the plot line has its own ideas. It continues the advantages of the original multi-female supporting cast, and has a good character design. I look forward to further expansion, enriching its flesh and blood, and giving more characters a sense of life. It is recommended to use events to develop characters.

Well, I think reading any book has been boring recently. Being able to read a book like this and be interested in it and want to continue reading proves that the author's writing is particularly good. Recommended for everyone to watch

I saw the 3rd dungeon and there was no level in the character. I feel like I can have a 50-50 tie with anyone, and there is no upgrade process. There is no mention of how to become stronger or how to add attributes.

While waiting for the fried tomatoes and eggs, I saw the fried tomatoes with eggs. After looking at it, I found out that it was the special large version of stir-fried eggs with tomatoes and beef. Okay, potential stock, but the early combat power feels a bit too high.

Now that I've heard Chapter 18, well... I guess it's Yu Xunge's replacement. You can listen to it to kill time when you are bored~

It's okay, it's very nice, the author would like to thank you for writing it. It's been three times. Is Little Lizi my sister? Four brushes

I like it very much. I didn't have high hopes at first and just came here for a meal. But after seeing it, I couldn't stop at all. I was completely attracted and stayed all night long. It's very beautiful. I look forward to my sister coming back. I like Nian Nian and everyone! Recommend!

Big cheers for the author! ! Very nice~[Send heart][Send heart]