The Redemption of the Band Girl

The rating is B+, which is considered to be a superior fanfic. Xiangzi washes well and is very soft, glutinous and sweet. People who like Che Xiangzi may be disappointed (what a bloodthirsty giraffe), but this book has a rare Che Chuhua link, and the car is very reasonable. It can be balanced by everything. Based on some small changes in the original plot, the gods were directly transformed into humans, achieving what WSD failed to do in the two seasons. The writing is good and comfortable to read. The characterization is quite natural and the protagonist is not cheating. The big hand inside was unexpectedly very pure, well-behaved, and reasonable. It was a test for the son-in-law. In addition, Lao Deng just wanted Xiangzi to come back. It would be difficult to find poisonous points if it were not for the purpose of improving the author's skills. The author's basic skills are quite good and his logic is self-consistent. The author is a very strong surfer and can read paragraphs and comments and answer questions. Is he a new author based on his level? With such a good attitude, it should be better and better, but the income here is indeed not very high... But speaking of being high-minded, it is indeed easier for everyone to see here. It can comfort more people of Akaishi, and also allows more people to see the author's words. As a reader, I am very grateful to such a tomato writer who is almost generating electricity for love, suki~ I watched some parts while disconnected from the Internet, and the duration may have been a little short, but I have now finished watching it all. The B+ rating is mainly because there are not many innovative plots, but some people in the fanfic are not willing to read too many original works. My evaluation criteria are quite subjective, and I am very cautious in giving points. Unlike other monthly readers who are very generous in giving A+, my A+ has not yet given more than double digits. I really enjoyed writing the book review today Well done, the ending is very good, making this work a perfect conclusion, not to mention there will be a sweet side story to watch! It's rare, it's rare, to be able to end a work decisively while the work is still good. Now the author has a clear conscience. Finally, I wish everyone and the author who reads this book seriously, you must be happy.

The author's writing is very good, really respectful, and very real. He is not like other harem stud books, where the male protagonist only has naked desires, and some characters are just pieces of merchandise without flesh and blood. At this time, no matter how good the plot is, it is difficult to watch. Most of Xiangzi may be ridiculed or insulted, and there is not much that I really like. But after reading this article, I probably figured out how Bai Xiang died. , What overwhelmed Bai Xiang and she was willing to commit suicide (not death in the real sense, but something like strangulation), was exactly that life composed of moments. Xiangzi has always had no way out. I feel a touch of sadness in my heart when I write this. Just like my name, Xiangzi is the aloof person who needs a guide even when wandering, so the author, please come on, let Xiangzi have a place to go, she is really too tired (●'◡'●)

First of all, most band fan fiction is about selling characters, and the characters in this book are very distinct. In addition, the single heroine is also a highlight. In most cases where the harem is used, a book like this can be published. The emotions are also very delicate and it is worth reading.

The text is comfortable, the psychological description is just right, and the characters gradually become fleshed out with the plot. It has both the beauty of the Bondoli world and the inescapable realistic factors that bring just the right turning point to the plot. The delicate thoughts of the boys and girls make people feel happy and sweet, and they can't stop watching the subsequent plot. I look forward to the author's twice-a-day updates every day, which reminds me of the wonderful feeling of watching the hen cards with everyone every week - this happiness from the heart is the highest praise I can give! No matter how it ends, I think I will never forget this time. Come on!

Definitely give it five stars. As a fanfic of mujica, first of all, it perfectly fills in all the pitfalls of the original work, and also maintains the five characters of mujica, Lao Deng, and Zhongden. There is almost no OOC, and it completes everyone's psychology and logic, unlike the original work, which is not as thin as the plot. Secondly, the narrative rhythm is orderly, 400,000 words, although the text sometimes drags on, but overall, the rhythm is not draggy. The most important thing is that it completes the theme of the original work and truly expresses what it means to follow this arduous journey and finally reach the stars. It is not like the original work where only the title can be read, and the content is just a play for young ladies. In terms of setting, cut off the most ridiculous multi-headed wooden man so that Xiao Mu can be fine. Then, as for the story, it is not that amazing, but it is not dull either. It can be said that it is a novel that can be read one by one. All the holes I dug have been filled, and the holes in the original work have also been filled, and the logic of the story has not been broken. Generally speaking, it is similar to the first hot review. There is nothing particularly shortcomings in this novel. When it comes to problems, I can only give suggestions for the author to write better. The only bad thing is that the plot of Chu Hua is missing. But everyone who has read the original novel knows what Chu Hua is like. The choice here is right, because I have written other chapters before, and writing a few chapters of Chu Hua will be delayed. To be bold, remove the protagonist's role, assign the protagonist's character to Xiangzi and Chuhua (any second female lead will do), and then create a script that can completely replace mujica. Even if it is completed according to the author's thinking, mujica can be regarded as a new mountain for the band. But I can only imagine, and I don't know what the mujica writer's brain is. I feel that it is better to change the name of the second season to Ku Lei Xike, talk about the situation of Xiangzi's family, deepen the character of mygo, and finally reconcile.

Valorant's good brother🤓🤜🤛🤓 A must-listen song for Da Wa🥰🎶 No matter how awesome the other party is😱😱 I will definitely capture you👊🏻😡👊🏻 Teammates' signals are closely linked🤠🤝🤝🤠 The release of skills cuts through the universe😤🗡️ No matter how tough the enemy is🤯🤯 We must kill it without leaving any trace behind🤬💪🏻💪🏻 The fanfic of Lao Mo is very well written. The male protagonist perfectly fits the original fanfic and vividly restores the author's ideas. It is a rare excellent masterpiece on Tomato.

It can be said to be one of the best MyGO fanfics on Tomato. The writing is excellent and the writing style has a somewhat youthful feel (the author loves to read it) It's very comfortable to read, it doesn't feel perfunctory, and the characters are very realistic. In short, it is an excellent fan work. It is also excellent in the entire fan book list. I look forward to the day when it becomes popular. It's well written, but it's a pity that only ice type single recommenders can get this book.

It looks good and is worth a try for everyone. I hope there will be sweeter interactions. By the way, I will cut it with the hen card [eating melon] [eating melon]

Love to watch! The single heroine Saki is great! It seems to be a really good fanfic at the moment, and it totally deserves a higher score than the current one＼(`Δ')/so after reading it, I couldn't help but rate it first. The transitions between the characters' emotions are delicate and smooth, and the writing is also good; it can be regarded as the highest rated among the hen card fanfics I have read so far. After the original work became such a monster, it is really rare to see such a normal work without venting emotions... I hope and wish the author to continue writing smoothly!

This is the Mygo novel that sticks out to me the most in Tomato, and I haven't found any other one to compare it to it. The emotions are quite delicate. There are very few female protagonists in girl band stories, so the author has to spend a lifetime writing about them, Modo Modo [Adoration] [Sending Hearts] A smooth and happy ending, a new beginning full of hope. Finished spreading flowers! Thank you to the author for not disappointing any readers. Xiaoye and Xiangzi must be happy forever! [Sending Hearts][Admiration]

I have caught up with the latest chapter, and I can say that it is good (laughs). Overall, the book is beautifully written, the plot is smooth, and it has a feeling of being young. The meeting of the male and female protagonists, and the formation of the band all have a natural feeling. The author has integrated his own thoughts and feelings for the characters into the book, which is very precious. Overall, this is a rare Mygo fan, worth reading

After reading it, although the process was a bit bumpy, I was relieved by the final scene. It really filled the gap that the original had left for me. This is the best hen card fanfic I have ever read, and it is comparable to the sense of redemption in YJ's linkage plot. Really, it's worth seeing, really

I like you! What a sweet and sweet Saki. The plot is logically self-consistent and the language is very comfortable to read. Although some plots are a bit awkward, it does not affect the overall perception. If it were not for this book, I would not like Saki so much. I like the soft and waxy Xiang so much. Saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki Sauce 😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙ saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki Sauce 😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙saki sauce😭▜▜▙

It's a good MYGO show with Xiangzi as the single female protagonist, Xiaotang Shui. Xiangzi's character design is well controlled (although as a Xiang + hope chef, I feel that Lixi's writing is a bit thin...) It's very rare to have a well-written article with Xiangzi as the protagonist at this time. Come on.

I'll give it five stars in the early stage, four stars in the middle stage. In the middle and late stages, after the disbandment of Hen Card, I basically followed the original work. I wanted to give it three stars, but as I looked further back, I realized that I actually wrote my own stuff in the later stage. Overall, I give it five stars. In the era of AI, there is no AI polish, the writing format is also very comfortable, and the content perfectly suits Xiangchu. Whether it is changing Xiangzi's awkward personality, or making dumplings, or the lessons learned after the cat dream fried dough, or the sweet plot, it all constitutes a rare masterpiece in comprehensive comics. My taste is very different, but I am still willing to give you five stars.

The character design of this book is very restored, allowing you to know that you are reading a Mygo fan. It has excellent psychological description, excellent writing, and comfortable writing style. There is no poisonous point and it is very comfortable to read. For me, a real-life villain, the two-way redemption process between the protagonist and Teacher Daxiang is really dazzling. My corpse feels warm after reading it. It is the masterpiece of Real Tomato's Mygo fan, and it ranks first in my heart.

Not much to say, friends who like Daxiang can just watch it without thinking, it's so good.

I just noticed that I forgot to rate it. It's a good read. I love reading it. The writing and pacing are both good. But with this amount of updates, I might have to wait for a while before I can enjoy reading it. But let's not rush. Come on, even if the updates are slower, as long as I can finish it. Lao Mo's fanfic is very well written. The male protagonist perfectly fits the original fanfic and vividly restores the author's ideas. It is a rare excellent masterpiece on Tomato.

I finished reading it in the past two days, and this book did not disappoint me. The characters in the book are vivid and the characters are well restored. It is one of the good articles about Mygo in Tomato, The Gospel of Chef Xiang, and those who like to read single female protagonists are in luck. It is a very recommendable book. Of course, it would be even better if the author could tell more about Shinoye and Xiangzi's daily life after marriage. Looking forward to the author's next book

There is no brainless development, no godlike character, everything is so perfect. The friction between one band and another eventually became the lubricant between the male protagonist and Mr. Daxiang. The author wrote so well

The pace is pretty good so far. As long as there are no big problems later, it should at least be called a masterpiece [shy][shy]

It's so shameless, it's just pure love✋😭✋ The thinking is clear and the author is very careful [I understand] The whole plot is very reasonable, and the look and feel is as delicate and smooth as eating Dove [laughing] It makes up for a lot of the regrets of the original work, it's such a great author [crying] You have received rave reviews [like][like][like][like][like] Lao Mo's fan writing is very good, it perfectly fits the original work, and vividly restores the original author's ideas. It is a rare excellent masterpiece on Tomato. ( Xiangzhuoxiang, the one who comes from the group to fix things [laughs crookedly][laughs crookedly]

It doesn't deserve this score, it's more than a 9. The writing is very comfortable, the characters are okay, and the characters are not OOC. It's like a hen card from another parallel time and space. The author is very thoughtful. It's a completely normal daily conversation. It didn't embarrass me once. This alone deserves full marks [shy]

Let me talk about the conclusion first, excellent fan fiction. The plot development and emotional portrayal are both on the standard line, and the rhythm is well controlled. As a new author, this is worthy of praise. The ending is a bit sloppy, but it's acceptable that it doesn't collapse within a controllable range, which is a bit regretful. ——A work worth seeing.

It's beautiful and great. No need to say more. Paste a paragraph of the original text of this novel. "Xiao Mu, you should find your destination soon." Seeing Mu Mu Wakaba who was a little sad, Nagasaki Moyo felt a little moved, but took out a cucumber from the bag in Mu Mu Wakaba's arms and smiled at her: "As a friend, I will accept this gift." "Thank you, Xiaomu."

It's very good. The author's writing is delicate and the emotional description of Xiaoye and Xiangzi is very real. I have already imagined the difficult and warm life of Xiangzi and the protagonist in a cheap apartment in Tokyo. The author will work hard next! ! ! I must write essays for the rest of my life! ! !

Powerful, no doubt about it. "Falling into Fengchuan before Dawn" is really a perfect second creation. I will support you as the orthodox IF with one order. I'm too lazy to write down the points worthy of praise. Anyway, it's better than other books. I like you [Love] 🧊[cry] How can Vadasi survive without you [crying]🧊

As an anime fan who has watched Song Le Doll, the author changed the part of the god-man in the anime to be more reasonable and more like what humans can do. At the same time, the overall structure is not biased towards the development of things other than the original work. The excellent writing style is considered to be a high-quality article among second-generation works. It is worth reading. Putting aside these things: It's too short [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I can't read enough, and the updates are too slow. Now I can read it. After all, it's finished [smile] And the author, please bring me the extra story as soon as possible.

The writing is relatively clean, there is no cheating, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the pitfalls of the original work are clearly filled in. To be honest, thanks to the good habit of reading online articles and only reading the ending, I have never read the Hen Card and I am not involved in the circle. However, many of the messages in the discussions I read feel that Xiangzi Fengjing is a victim. Maybe it is because of this reason that I am half Xiangu. It is also because of this reason that I can't read many chicken and dog related articles from the beginning. After reading this book, I found that there are still some male romances that I can read. This is good.

One of the few Saki novels with a single heroine, it has a good grasp of the character's personality, and there is no poisonous point without breaking up the group. The novel is smooth and comfortable. I want to catch the author and update my mouth (doge)