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You are such an innocent little boy, do you understand Xie Lin's good intentions? I am always so young and unaware that I am so worried. But this book is really worth reading carefully, Jue Juezi! I've watched a lot of clichés, and I like this one that's not clichéd at all. There are no clichés, and the ending can't be seen at a glance. I couldn't understand mechanical science fiction at first, but it didn't stop me from cp-ing at all. The subtle and sweet plot, with the tenderness of innocence, is different from other clichés. I don't know if anyone understands me. Moreover, each character is very distinct and is not a foil to highlight the character. But can the author make Xiao Che come alive? Poor brother! ! !

There are a lot of sweet scenes later on, why Xie Lin keeps teasing Jiang Li, hahahahaha, it's so funny. Why hasn't the second copy been opened? I'm really looking forward to what kind of copy it will be. Update it faster and faster. I'll update 10,000 words a day.

Although there is no eye-catching plot in the early stage, it is not cliché at all. Especially Xie Lin, who knows about the rare mechanical body, there is a secret sense of taboo! ! I feel like Jiang Li is a real human being whose consciousness and senses have been extracted into the game, right? The image of a good baby is turned into a third perspective and I can't understand the baby's psychological activities. It's a pity. But as an awakened NPC, although it is dull, it is really cute! Xie Lin dotes on him so much!

There is absolutely no cliché, this author is a breath of fresh air among tomato novels. The audience for mechanical science fiction is very small, so I guess many people won't understand it, but I found it quite interesting. But ignoring the sci-fi segments, the emotional delicacy and character creation are also great. Is the author a liberal arts student? Small characters also have big ideas, and they even elevate the concept of the entire novel, which is worth learning from. According to the direction of the plot, Jiang Li will probably become stronger in the later stages and not follow the novice route. The plot is very good and the writing style exceeds that of most authors. It is worth reading if you have the patience to read it.

Su Che and Ye Xiao are in conflict, which made me feel a little uncomfortable after watching it. Can Su Che be resurrected? Although they look the same, Ye Xiao is a replica and cannot be like Qing. Putting aside this point, I feel that Jiang Li's role is a bit lacking. I want to see more of this NPC's little shou whether he will transform in the future. He is really cute and likes blue sweaters. Xie Lin loves him so much.

The author's writing style is very good, and he is particularly attentive to the description of the plot. I didn't read much novels before, but after reading this book, I found it really interesting. It's not like it's tacky. The whole text reveals a sense of joy.

Jiang Li, an innocent little boy, met Xie Lin, the "top succubus", before he saw the world. Hahahaha, he was teased and confused. Can the author sprinkle more sugar on this? I always look for sugar in the text. It is also worth mentioning that the other characters are also well portrayed, especially the pitiful Su Che who has few appearances and even only has scenes of his life. Who knows, he really cried to death and promised to spend the whole birthday with his sister? Looking forward to the follow-up!

The protagonist, especially Xie Lin, is so handsome, and his hand looks a bit like Lan! The scene where Jiang Li is bathing is so charming that you feel like you are immersed in it. The two of them living in the dormitory are having a good time together like a young couple who just got together! The villains are also well described, and the minor characters are also carefully created. At first I thought they were bad guys, but then there was a twist that I didn't expect. When will Jiang Li finally wake up? ! ! I really want to see them talking to each other, but with the author's innocent writing style, can I still catch it? T_T

A Li is really cute to the core. Xie Lin, this jealous person, can you please stop teasing others? But if you have money and good looks, I will forgive you. Be nice to our A Li! Looking forward to the follow-up, saving up to watch it during the holidays

My only request, teacher: bring Xiao Che to life and don't let Ye Xiao become a substitute! ! Xiaoche is such a good teacher, how can you bear it! I love Sister Su Wan so much. Although her appearance is a little miserable, she has the feeling of being gentle and powerful at every step, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. I feel that she will be able to hold back a big move later. And the female elite is a bit like a neutral character. She doesn't have much description but she creates a good three-dimensional character! The teacher described the female characters very well!

It's so well written and literate

I can only say that the author is amazing, and many plots are beyond the imagination of ordinary people.

This book is really well written. Life itself is very busy. This book can help me calm down while taking a break from my busy schedule. The pace of the whole text is just right, so I don't feel tired while reading it.

This book is well written, with little humor in the plot. Unlike the kind of plot that starts with Long Aotian, the whole story is very easy to read. Stop and read whenever you have time

This book is very interesting. Each character has his or her own unique characteristics.

This is the longest book I have followed since I downloaded Tomato. Both the logic and the character creation can be said to be quite good.

The writing is easy and the experience is very enjoyable.