Harry Potter: The Weasley Family, Two Plus One

The www written by Baobao is great. I really like the description of GGAD. The description of the twins and the younger sister is also very sweet. ⁄(⁄ ⁄ ⁄ω⁄ ⁄ ⁄)⁄However, there are some deficiencies in the handling of some details, such as the step-by-step recovery of sister's memory and other plot aspects (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`). Some places are not very coherent... You can try to delete and add some descriptions and plots to make it coherent! (Rubbing hands together) (´▽`) I look forward to your baby's continued progress! I will always support you (blowing kiss) (///▽///) @ wansuifenglai

The first Twin Sandwich book I read! Obviously I was shocked by this. What shocked me was the writing of this book. It was very good. I felt that they were getting along very real. It seemed that I could empathize with them. I felt as nervous as them as if I were around them. Ron invited Hermione to the Christmas party of the Triwizard Tournament. It really made my dream come true. Although the world view is huge, it is really beautiful, especially the feelings of the three of them, the twins and the heroine. Love, and family affection sooooooooooooooooooo, Weiwei An didn't like him at first but didn't expect that he was really miserable. My dream came true and all the dead people came back. At that time, I was still wondering if Theodore's mother was also back. She is really amazing and well-written. It is worth reading. What I like the most is the daily life of the twins and the heroine. Thank you to the author for letting me see such a good article that I will never forget!

Beautiful, beautiful! There are a little few scenes between the twins in the early stage, but the plot is quite interesting and the heroine is a heartthrob. This is the first time I've seen a fanfic that describes Harry and Ginny's emotional lines in more detail. The two of them are so sweet, which makes up for their emotional lines in the movie version. Looking forward to the follow-up development

Very nice article! The author's amazing imagination creates a unique world in the magical world. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) The characters are three-dimensional and full, each image shines with the multi-faceted nature of human nature, and the interweaving of good and evil is handled flawlessly. The combination of the background of the magical world and mythology has both romantic core and mythological fantasy, giving the story a profound flavor. This book is completely publishable. ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡ The logic of the whole book is tightly closed, and the plot advances smoothly. I especially want to praise: the smoothness of the plot, and the smoothness of every foreshadowing. As a reader who is loyal to the finale of "Making Dumplings", the ending and extras of this book are deeply loved by me. ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥ Finally: Big job to the author ♡ Thank you for bringing us such a wonderful article.

It's nice. The author's emotional line is well written and very delicate. It's very comparable to Si Jiao's CB line. But the heroine is really miserable, so miserable that some people may not be able to accept it. But I think these miseries are caused by the heroine fighting for herself, rather than purely abusing the heroine. I don't think it's outrageous. But there is also a point that is surprising. This kind of unrequited love plot that is not a heartthrob and has obvious CP and has no impact on the main plot is really unnecessary. What I'm talking about is Seidha. It's different from Sri Lanka's little heartbeat. Said is completely awkward. Then the world view is indeed a bit too big. Later, I can feel that the author almost couldn't take it back. But overall it is still good-looking. There are still too few twin stories.

It's beautiful~ It's the first time I read a story about Gemini Sandwich Biscuits, and I feel it's very novel. Many of the interactions between the Gemini and the heroine are heart-warming😳. But the further you look back, the more you can feel the unique charm of each character. There is no pure good and evil, and a very grand world view. The group portraits of the final battle show all living beings, splendid and heroic. There is also an extra if line. Although it is a dream of the heroine, it also fulfills my fantasy as a reader about the heroine's childhood shortcomings💕 It's not a loss if you invest in the stock ~ It's a pity that the author quit the industry just after writing this book. The writing is really good, many scenes are described as if you are actually there, and any AI-generated picture will be a beautiful picture ~

So beautiful! 😢Excellent! When I read it, I had a lot of emotions and thoughts. Now I have to write a book review in a big box, and I can only write it now. Everyone writes well, I think. The Weasley family is so warm. He raised his little sister, who was as ignorant as a toddler, from a little bitter melon into a little sugar melon. My sister's past was really tearful. When I first learned about her biological mother's behavior, I was very angry, but after seeing it later, I felt very understanding. It was a devastating experience, and I had someone I knew and loved. But because a love brain liked her, she was destroyed by the love brain. She is a bright and brave elf who works hard to defeat the evil. In this way, he was pulled off the altar and fell into the quagmire. (But what she did to her sister was really too much😢, damn love brain!) Every character in this book, the Weasleys, Harry, Snape, and Dumbledore are outstanding! Arthur and Molly love children so much😢Ginny in this book is very well written, and her and Harry's stories are particularly different! Harry's growth is also obvious! Ron is brilliant even though he can be awkward at times, and so is Percy, who is not as rigid as most novels, and Bill Charlie, who is not brushed off like many fans. The combination of ggad and the little exploration of a two-hundred-year-old man makes people feel a little bit sour. At first, Dumbledore would definitely be wary of his sister, who suddenly appeared. He was seriously injured but recovered so quickly. He had too many things to consider with his heavy responsibility. But later on, I got along better and better with my sister, and the two of them became friends year after year. Because his younger sister, ggad, started to interact with her again, Dumbledore was like a person hiding in a shell. He no longer believed the other person, so he could only test whether the outside of the shell was safe. Grindelwald waited patiently outside the shell, not advancing step by step. 😢 Snape's writing is very lifelike, and getting along with his sister went from being disgusted with each other to becoming a best friend! I'm even a little skinny in front of my younger sister, hahahaha. But I don't think it's OOC. Instead, I think he is like this and he can live in the light! Looks good! Recommend!

The author's writing style is very good, and the emotional lines are beautifully described. In particular, the setting of the twin sandwich cookies is very attractive, and the relationship progresses very quickly and sweetly. The characters of the twins, who are a bit white and sometimes black, are also well described. The author also added a lot of plots to promote the relationship between the secondary characters Harry and Ginny, which gave the pair a lot more emotional foreshadowing than the original work, so it is more reasonable. But the heroine who needs to be protected from lightning is the setting of the heartthrob Mary Sue. The heroine is an immortal inhuman, her father is Merlin, and she is already more powerful than Dumbledore in the third grade. However, under such a powerful golden finger, the heroine's personality is more like a child, so sometimes it feels a bit inconsistent to watch the heroine deal with things. In addition, both Draco and Cedric also liked the heroine. And I personally feel that Dumbledore and Snape have OOC characters. The most unacceptable thing is that Snape actually likes the heroine later on, and even Voldemort has OOC, and there is no B character in the description. In addition, Vivian is completely unnecessary. It will look better if this part is removed.

🤔 The content in the plot is really beautifully written, warm and delicate. But the more the heroine's identity and background are expanded, the bigger the pit becomes. It would be great if all the villains except Lao Fu could be taken away in one go... Maybe I just like to read sweet stories, and those complicated sadistic ones in the back are really disturbing to me...

It's beautiful. It's super invincible and beautiful in the early stages. No one can compare to the love between the twins. But in the later stage, when the war started, it didn't appeal to me anymore. Just watch it slowly. It's very sweet. The heroine has been tortured for thousands of years. 😢😢