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Just put the poison directly, or let you seal the book with 5 stars [awkward laugh]

Imitate the master, become the master, surpass the master. It would be perfect if it was a little bit sloppier.

Yes, but I don't know how long I can write it. After all, Douluo's copyright may not allow this kind of subject to be too long.

It feels a bit too ideal, what do you think? The horns are used like a bow with beef sinews, and the soul ring is refined. Damn it, there is a soul bone attached to the weapon. There is no consumption in the middle, and there is no talk about the protagonist's ability. It is the power of my thinking.

For your own book, give yourself a five-star rating.

The writing is very good, but Thirteen Chai and Dugu Yan are not lovable

The power in the blood is awakened into a martial spirit through soul power. The soul ring is all the blood, soul and will of a soul beast. If one absorbs the same origin from different sects, the potential of the martial soul will be reduced. On the contrary, the potential will be increased. This is something I personally think is perfect.

666 Is almost poisonous and I [vomit] more than 40 pictures. It is very poisonous from the beginning! Extremely poisonous! [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [petrified]

Good luck, good luck. I remember that there was a Douluo novel in which cells were martial souls, and Dugu Yan was the heroine. It looked pretty in the front and was messy in the back. But this book is so beautiful [Adoration]

The setting and plot are okay, but Poison Douluo looks uncomfortable.

Ice and Fire Eyes, Poison Douluo, Dugu Yan, there is nothing uncomfortable about them. , Everything else is fine

It's quite novel, and I personally feel that the literary style and content are both good.

Except for few words, typos, missing words, and too many words, everything else is fine.

Super giant poison after Chapter 30 [awkward laughter]

Good ideas, good book, but a little out of touch

The writing is good and the ideas are novel. I haven't seen this kind of cerebral Douluo fanfic for a long time. Five stars is the limit of the system, not the limit of the author.

All I can say is that I am getting farther and farther away from people and getting closer to God, brother.

You can tell at a glance at the update time that the author updates at 12-0 o'clock during working hours and after get off work in the middle of the night. It's not easy.

It's pretty good. I also thought about getting one, but I didn't. At that time, I was thinking of giving a kaleidoscope some divine power, and then maxing out its attributes to create a world.

Not bad, the angle is novel

A lot of inner drama

It still feels good.

666, My friend said there will be a movie after chapter 40, but the result is [laughing evilly]

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

It's very interesting. The author is so immersed in his art that he can't extricate himself.

It feels like it was written by voice input. I say whatever comes to my mind, causing a lot of language problems, but it's pretty good to ignore the power of thinking and nonsense from Golden Finger [smile]

There is no system. It is just a book with a Douluo background. It has a new system and creates a new story line. The goddess of life can completely create a new story line and a new idea.

It's a very good Douluo fanfic, but I'm a comic fan and I really can't get into some of the plots.

"I don't know how to play music, chess, calligraphy and painting, I don't know how to dance with a knife or a gun. I can only do it when I pick up a book. When I put down the book, I can just play!"

I can't be the only one reading this kind of book