Shh! the Zombies Outside the Door Are Picking the Lock!

The writing is okay. I don't have the feeling that I can't even understand the writing after reading two chapters. The plot is indeed compact, but it's too compact and I feel it's a bit too much. You can follow it. It's more than enough. I suggest changing the title of the book.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that except for the sister of the person in the protagonist group, the rest is okay. It creates conflicts and conflicts. The intention is good, but it is recommended not to use the old routine of the Holy Mother. First, most people will be upset when watching it, and many will deliberately give low scores. The subsequent development can also be roughly guessed. Comparing it with Mo Qianfan, I feel that it can appropriately reduce the impact on the environment and infected people. Description, add some such as character monologues, dialogues and psychological activities, because after reading the first 30 chapters, I only felt that the environment was very three-dimensional, but the characters were relatively rigid (it may also be that I haven't seen the back yet). Of course, Lao Mo's is a video, which naturally has an advantage over text, but there are some examples, such as the Burning Chapter: The Blind Girl, there is no video in the whole process, only text, but the atmosphere is very good. Of course, the above is just a suggestion, not an order. I personally feel that this modification will give other readers a better reading experience. I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but the score dropped a bit ridiculously. Although it is not outstanding now, it is not just 6:00, so I decided to give it a five-star support. The author's writing is still very good, keep up the good work.

The writing is very good, and it fully embodies the sense of despair in the apocalypse. The protagonist repeatedly struggles between being trapped and escaping. During this period, some people help others and some add insult to injury. In short, it is a good apocalyptic novel [heartfelt]

The writing at the beginning is good and immersive, but later on I feel that the protagonist group is too reckless. Is this the world of Blood Cross? ! I hope the author can come back to the point later, come on. [Exploration] It's finally finished, overall it's pretty good. [Sending Hearts]

The apocalyptic atmosphere is well portrayed and the emotion of despair is well rendered, but the logic of some plots is a bit stiff and the early pace is a bit fast. Overall, the flaws are not hidden, and it is still a masterpiece of apocalyptic survival worth reading. (By the way, everyone in the protagonist group can carry the Hungry Emperor😂)

The writing is very contagious, and the content is full of ups and downs. It can be seen that the author has borrowed content from many other works, which ensures the interest of this novel to a certain extent. However, the various difficulties encountered by the protagonist group seem a bit too deliberate. Perhaps I did not see much content about the growth of the protagonists in it. Instead, I saw a man who had been hungry for several days running wildly, saw that the members of the protagonist group seemed to have no thoughts of their own, and saw the protagonist group giving up on themselves in the apocalypse. These are mainly because the difficulties encountered by the protagonists were too many and too deliberate, and the original meaning of the plot was lost, which made people feel that this novel was not very real.

It was pretty good after reading it. Although it was a little difficult to read in the middle, I still persisted in reading it in the end. As a new author, it deserves encouragement. The plot is a bit stuck and jerky. But the lucky thing is that I don't have CP, and living is just a luxury, and I still deal with the useless ones. Bai is very realistic and I quite like him. It's a pity for my brother and father. They tried their best to protect the people they cherished most. There are also many things that are not human, and the same kind of back stabs are even more disgusting. I hope the author's work will be more mature next time I see it

Looks great, keep updating! It will definitely become popular, but it may be a bit late. There are too few chapters and it is estimated that it will take more than 200 chapters to become popular. It is very interesting and the book you wrote is the most interesting among the zombie books. There are no fake millions of supplies and no rebirth system. The characters are very unique! Zombies are also very unique! So pretty! ! !

[Laughs] Damn, it brings back the feeling I had when I watched Doomsday Cockroach ten years ago. It's so exciting, my heart can't bear it. Hahaha, I haven't seen such high-quality doomsday writing in a long time.

The content development story is quite compact, and the final open ending is quite good, but I always feel that the protagonists seem to be troubled by not having resources such as food, water and medicine on the way to the destination. Not to say that there is no description, it feels really light. With a pen, I basically have to pass or pass by somewhere and then cause a fight between the two sides. If it is too difficult to survive and cannot be fought, someone will sacrifice (it is not that sacrifice cannot be made, but sacrifice can only happen in this situation). Overall, the writing is OK.

The following are all personal evaluations. I would give a four and a half star rating, but the platform does not have this option. I think this book is worth reading and recommending [Like] I think both the protagonist and the supporting characters are well portrayed. I think the rhythm is quite good. Maybe it is because I read the text that everyone suggested that the author should revise in the future. [OK] This book is very immersive. I saw more than 50 chapters. , I thought this was a novel without ambiguity, but in the end I still couldn't escape it. There was a short paragraph of ambiguity [Shock], but you can read it even though I don't recommend it. [Eat Melon] In fact, I didn't understand it. Even if Peng Li's brother beat Pengli, he wanted her to go to a better school [Petrochemical], but my brother was having an affair with the male protagonist when he didn't know whether he was alive or dead. [Like] [Facepalm] The male protagonist's design is also very unreasonable. Earlier, because his teammates were infected, the male protagonist's teammates were bitten because of his hesitation. Although he was not infected, I also felt that it was quite illogical. [Shocked] Although there was something blocking the clothes, the people who were bitten screamed in pain. Doesn't this mean that the bite was on the flesh! [Shocked] Then it can also be seen here that the male protagonist is a person who is not decisive but a little affectionate, but his teammates are ambiguous with his sister when they don't know whether they are alive or dead [face covering] I like Lao Mo of the protagonist group better [Like] I think he is a person with IQ, reason, and not a holy mother [like] [eat melon] and meet When it came to Gu Yiran, the unidentified high-IQ infected person, he also had doubts [salute]. In fact, some people said that this ending was not good, but I think this ending is quite good [face covering]. Some people said that the child in the protagonist group in the early stage had no effect. I think this child may be a foreshadowing effect. In fact, when it comes to this, I think Speaking of Pengli, when her brother went to save her, she climbed down from the window bravely, which also shows that she is a brave and intelligent person, but why she started crying and whining later, and then she changed when her brother was infected [face covering] I think the author's imagination is also very big, there are skinners in it, no features. It's good for someone with an infected IQ [Sending my heart] It's the first time I've seen this type of article, I feel pretty good [Laughing] Actually, I don't have any suggestions [Thinking] I just want to tell you what I think is unreasonable and good, so that next time the author writes this type of article, he will know that it's better [OK] [Salute] I almost forgot to mention that after Peng Li's brother became an infected person, he protected Peng Li twice [salute]. I also read a lot of people's comments and saw that many people said that the image of the protagonist group has not yet been reflected. In fact, I think it has been reflected in the first half, but it is the protagonist group that has not grown up [face covering] and then it is also there in the second half [laughing]

The following is purely personal opinion I feel that the advantages and disadvantages of this novel are very obvious. The advantage is that the atmosphere of this novel is well rendered. Especially the part in the dormitory really made me feel suffocated, which was very real. But I feel that the character traits of the protagonists are a bit stiff, and does yelling really not attract infected people? It is recommended that the author add some descriptions of the characters' appearance, psychology, etc.

I stayed up until about four in the morning to finish reading it. It feels pretty good. When I read this novel, I felt like crying. These are the symptoms of an infected person. Later I discovered that there were novels and movies like Blood Cross in the comments section. This is also true. It's like opening up a new continent. I had also watched a little bit of Crying Sad before, but I thought it was too disgusting to watch, so I stopped watching it. This novel is pretty good. It feels more humane than a sad movie. There may be no picture. The impact isn't strong enough. But it's fine with me. Otherwise it would be a bit unbearable. The only weird thing is that sometimes it feels like some of the plots are not coherent enough. There is a feeling like hmm? Why are we here again? Overall it's pretty good. I am quite curious about what I will encounter on the island. What will happen next? Another one is. Maybe it's because this novel is relatively short. The images of some characters don't feel very impressive. It's over before I understand each character's personality.

The writing is very good, the description of the environment and the psychological description of the characters are very good, and the monsters are quite dangerous (they can use weapons, actively search for survivors, and even ambush, and have a strength bonus after being infected). I urge you to update more. I hope the author can write more.

It is a very good book, with rigorous thinking and ups and downs in the plot. People who read it will always feel nervous. They like blood crosses, laugh wildly, and cry sadly. This type of book is a must-read, and the characters are also very well drawn.

It's very beautiful. I really like Peng Yu and Lin Mo. I read more than a thousand pages in one go yesterday, and today I only have about two hundred pages left. The author would like to work hard to update it. I saw that there was a half-year break in the middle, and I hope to update it every day [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I can't do it anymore, I can't watch it offline for long [Petrochemical][Petrochemical]

Super nice apocalyptic novels, similar to Madness Cross and Crying Sorrow

I accidentally clicked on a book that kept me awake at night, and my heart changed drastically when I saw the thrilling moments. I can always put myself into the scenes in the book. Support! Follow up!

It's very good. The writing is very good. I hope the author can keep it updated. If there are not many people reading it and you won't stop reading, tell me and I will give you free promotion. Be sure to write it down!

It has the depressing feeling of a real doomsday, and people in the protagonist group will also die. But I feel that the hospital part is a bit off. There won't be an umbrella company or something like that, right? They released the virus, then screened new humans or immune people, and then Gu Yiran was just a defective product that escaped from the hospital? (This part of the hospital suddenly has the atmosphere of a strange story about rules.) But overall it is still good. I feel like chasing a book, and I am curious about the plot after that. Big cheers for the author

Apocalyptic stories about systemless space powers and so on are pretty good [laughing evilly]

It has fulfilled my wish to read fan fiction about madness, but the rationality in some places is not very strong, but it is understandable. After all, Lao Mo's madness world is a bit too desperate. The protagonist and others can survive better if the logic is slightly less logical. I hope the author can continue to work hard and try to finish this book without too many problems. It will be considered a success.

Watching Blood Cross for the first time, I felt that the protagonist was miserable. The monsters in it were too fierce, and the protagonist had no plug-ins. I felt very tired. One point was deducted because I always felt it had a bit of an AI flavor (I don't know if I really use AI, if not, I apologize)

Everyone's taste in reading is different. I can only say that it's not perfect, but this rating is really too low. It's worth reading on Tomato (because it's quite unique). Come on, come on.

The feeling of despair in this work is well written. Although the plot is a bit deliberate, the overall feeling is very good.

It's good to watch, but the events are a bit too dense and I can't breathe. It would be better to relax a bit.

It looks good, I hope there won't be a female protagonist, superpowers or anything like that, not even genetic enhancements or anything like that.

In general, the laughter disease infection has a strong apocalyptic atmosphere, and the risk of infection leads to the risk of mutation for everyone. Moreover, the protagonists are just ordinary people at the beginning, and the number of weapons is not dominant. There is also the risk of mutation. I hope it can give a good ending. I feel really sorry for Peng Yu.

Excellent review. I haven't seen such an excellent book in a long time. This is my first time commenting. Good luck to the author.

I've finished watching it. I was very nervous [I almost cried]. The author's writing is also very good. Every character is very unique. Everyone is working hard to stay alive. It's very interesting. I feel that the rating is a bit low.