Street Loaf's 100th Book

The new author mainly offers advice. If you encounter any problems during the reading process, you can tell me and I will not refuse if I can correct it! If you don't like it, please don't leave me a negative review, just leave it. When I see negative reviews, I fall into severe self-doubt and can't write a word for a long time! The child would like to thank all the adoptive fathers who showed mercy! I wish you good health, smooth work and all the best! Of course, I am not completely blind. If there are any problems with my writing, please give me an honest evaluation and then point out the problems. That's better. I will carefully analyze the problems you pointed out and avoid them in the future.

This is a very gentle and delicate book with well-written characters, but it is a bit too bitter and hateful. After the middle period, there were a lot of poison spots, such as my girlfriend was kidnapped; my girlfriend was kicked by a roadside gangster, which led to a miscarriage. I went to rescue her sister with my reserve girlfriend, but ended up leaving her sister alone and was directly wiped on the neck by the enemy. There are also endless stories of foreign messenger girls who are about to be stuck in a wall and save people. Having a wish coupon is not a reason for you, the author, to go crazy writing randomly.

The three views are correct, the plot is correct, the account opening is correct, and the logic is passed. One problem is that the heroine is a bit fast to wrap up. The emotional line is reasonable and just progresses quickly, but it's okay and good-looking. If you like Huang Pian, you can watch it. The author, please do more updates. Readers, please try hard to read.

The anti-Japanese Liu Beiwen was delayed by the title of the book. The plot is okay, the meat is really edible, and it is not too supervised.

I love watching it, the emotional lines are very good, and the stories of the heroines are very good. I especially like Rena and Tamamo Mae. I feel that the content of Tamamo Mae's wish is a foreshadowing.

Except for some minor details and occasional brain twitching, everything else is fine. A place that is as good as rice flower (confident)

Why 😢 Why didn't I discover this book earlier 😢 Why good books don't last long, but bad books are left behind for thousands of years 😢 It's a very enjoyable novel. The heroine is really clean. There is a special feature and setting in the later stage. Basically, everything that needs to be removed is removed. There may still be some uncomfortable aspects in the later stage, such as the lavish use of props. However, there is indeed no shortage of props in the later stage. I can see that I can continue to write. Unexpectedly, I still died. I hope the author can be well and live a good life. But it would be better if I have time to write something and talk about it later.

There is absolutely nothing to say about this [note]👍

The book is a good book, but I later joined an official organization, so I might not be able to accept it.

I want to know if the author is male or female. This article is so well written. . . .