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This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated for you? Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive thanks and praise from readers. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and fluent: When you can update 60 chapters a day, everyone including readers will hear what you say will be fluent. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want!

The character descriptions are relatively detailed, and it can be seen that the author's skills are quite good, and he is constantly improving. Compared with most other novels of the same type, it is much better. It can also be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the plot. Except for the beginning, which is a bit nonsensical, there are almost no poisonous points, but the pace is too slow. What's regrettable is that the heroine has almost no posting sessions. The most intimate interaction between the two heroines, which is nearly a million words long, except for a kiss at the beginning, is actually just drinking blood, not the neck? In the latest video, the attitude of Coconut Juice is just "hope she's still alive" when he doesn't know Lin Han's current situation? ? [What] It's too indifferent. . If you give out more candy, there won't be so few people watching. Pansy, you really need to learn how to write emotional dramas. As a transformation novel, it doesn't have the characteristics of a transformation novel at all. Do you really not know what everyone wants to see? Are you really willing to accept this little achievement for a book of such high quality? The pace itself is slow. If we don't put in some exciting news to retain everyone, the situation of raising books will become more and more serious. But it is still a good book. I hope this review can be helpful. There is hope for the future.

The plot of the story is very good, but it feels a bit awkward when taking missions and switching scenes to advance the main plot. For example, the exchange of information between the Alchemy Brotherhood did not express how secret the information is, so it looks like the protagonist is stupid. It feels like they did not exchange the information equally and the protagonist suffered a loss. Of course, there are advantages. For the subject of sex change, this one has a rare feeling of falling in love. It is not like other stories where the heroine harasses and forcibly joins the story. This book is well written. The protagonist is not the heroine's pendant. They all have their own lives, but they are connected by some small stories. It's worth watching for the subject of sexual transformation.

The plot is very interesting and the writing is already very good. It would have been nice to have more interactions with the princess. [Eat melon] The protagonist won't change back later, because it would be no fun [what] if he changes back.

Wow, what a cool setting, smooth writing and appropriate rhythm. Can you watch this for free on Red Persimmon?

Surprisingly, it's not bad, but the advancement of the subplot is a bit far-fetched. Sure enough, this style is an orthodox sex story (I'm convinced)

Although it occasionally messes up the settings, it is well written. The writing is solid, the logic is clear, solemn but not rigid, and funny but not frivolous. The description is detailed and the details are captured well. As someone who once enjoyed watching "Diablo: Destruction", it seems very familiar. The scenes depicted by the author come alive on the page. In terms of character creation, the author does not directly bookmark his character traits, but chooses to reveal them through behavior, which is in the style of iceberg theory. In addition, for me, this kind of serious plot occasionally has some light-hearted pornographic material and emotional interaction, which really makes me miss the past time. Although this is the author's first book, the author is probably not a newbie in writing, but has been immersed in this art for several years. For me, a 15-year-old bookworm who likes Far Eyes, Scarlet Flame, Fengyue, and Butterfly Blue the most among domestic online writers, this is a really good book. To be honest, after reading it, I realized that the Holy Sword is actually this Holy Sword. The author is a bit wilted.

The best thing about the protagonist being a time traveler is that there are many memes that can be played⌓‿⌓

A good book, relatively slow to develop. The biggest problem is that there are too few posts. The author, please give me more love, Ou Negai. As long as I can write more posts about Lin Han and Yeats, readers will be willing to do anything [crying]. There are some problems but they are not big. Overall, it is worth reading despite the flaws.

When I first started watching it, I did think it was pretty average, but I don't know why the more I watched it, the more I became obsessed with it? [Holds face] It doesn't seem like that kind of exciting article, but it is very attractive for me to continue reading. I can't explain why. Let's read it again, author! Go work! [Anger]

Miss Eel has paid out the deposit! Wow, what a delicious book. The plot rhythm is well controlled, the world view is unfolded, the setting is so attractive, and the author's writing skills are powerful. Huh~ If other AI novels and template novels on 🍅 are classified as B-level works, this one is completely SSR level. In the era of these fast-food chronicle novels, you can see such works, and Miss Eel also has a big guarantee.

The description is very realistic and detailed, and the content is also very imaginative. After reading books for so many years, this book is definitely a rare masterpiece. I read it several times at the beginning, but I didn't read it because of the low ratings. Later, I ran out of books. After reading it, I found that it unexpectedly suits my taste. Please promise me, this book must not be a eunuch. Come on, the author.

Very nice. I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I feel that this book is like a combination of light novels and Chinese online novels. On the whole, the author's writing logic is clear, the prose is fluent, the plot arrangement is reasonable and attractive, the setting seems to be quite complete, there are some problems in language expression, but the flaws are not concealed. I don't understand why the rating is not high. Is this author from some ldx who opened a small account? The writing is not bad, and the updates are very stable, but the plot progress is a bit slow and there are not many people watching it.

So far, I still can't imagine how the protagonist can help this country and the princess. Technology will not help. The international situation is full of internal and external troubles, and his own strength is rubbish. There is also a question, will the protagonist change back in the end? If I know how, I will give up. The author will give you a big reminder tonight.

Tomato is a rare good book. The only problem is that there are no explosive points in the first few chapters. It is a bit dissatisfied, but the story is still remarkable after it unfolds. The question now is whether the short-term main line of finding the key will involve two worlds. Personally, I feel that this will be a poisonous point. Of course, it depends on how the author operates.

It's a very good book, a Western fantasy, but the era is an era when steam engines are common. It's the first time I've seen a novel with this theme. It's very interesting. So why is the rating so low? I searched for a long time and couldn't find any negative reviews.

How shameless! It's so right, just look at this kind of unsystematic and highly realistic mouth!

It's a very good book, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and the strength of Xiao Linhan and the little princess is a bit underwhelming. Did the author change the title and cover of the book? It still feels as good-looking as before. It gives my little princess back her mouth and teeth!

"The size of this world depends on how many people you know. Every time you know someone, the world will become a little bigger for you. There are many cities in this world, including Tokyo, Paris, Cairo, London, Istanbul... But many cities are just names to you. You have never been there, and there are no people you want to visit there, so they do not actually belong to your world. There are many, many people in this world, but you don't Know them, and they don't belong to your world. There are many delicious, fun, and beautiful things in this world, but the world that really belongs to you is actually very small, just the places you have eaten, the sunsets you have seen, and the friends who care about you whether you live or not. Whether the world likes you or not depends only on whether your friends like you. Everyone has a few real good friends. If they like you, it means the world likes you. "Now that I think about it, maybe my world is too small. It's so small that I'm like a child. Small toys given to me by others make me very happy. I feel like I've met the best person in the world. But if this toy breaks, I'm so anxious that I want to cry. In fact, this toy is nothing, I can buy another one, but my world is too small and my mind is too sensitive. I want to cherish everything I have, and small things become huge things. Just like I always regard understatement as a treasure and always expect too much from others. In the past, I always thought that when I meet the girl I like again, we can go see the beautiful mountains and water together, eat delicious meals, watch beautiful concerts, do things that I have always wanted to do but have not done, and realize the wishes that I have always wanted to realize but have not. I always project a large part of my emotions onto others, trying to make up for my own lack with giving, so much so that I long for a healthy relationship, always want to meet someone who can heal me, and always want to entrust my most sincere emotions. In fact, I always consume myself in the pursuit of being loved. I am always healing myself. In this way, I will never meet the person I want to meet. Of course I hope that my small world will like me, but in fact no one will come, and I don't have any expectations for anyone anymore.

The quality of this book should indeed be at the starting point. To be honest, Tomato readers have mixed results. Pay attention to this book and don't fold it.

The writing is smooth and original. After reading it, I feel deeply NB.

This book has a female protagonist. I just saw Yeats's marriage episode˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

The book is okay, but it's just as slow as the almost forty-year-old fairy who asks you to spend 20,000 yuan to buy a bag when you first meet her.

Looks good! It's a pity that the traffic is too little. I hope to post more with the princess! 🥰🥰

Gua! It's a beautiful work, everyone, please take a look! [Cool]

The quality is unexpectedly high, it is relatively slow-burning, and quite beautiful. If it can be serialized for a long time, it will definitely be a masterpiece. Also, remind me to update [blowing kiss]

It's not bad, even the people next door can see it. Okay, you'd better be comfortable here

Uh, why is the rating so low? The author's writing style is not like that of this platform, and the story description is quite smooth, but I feel that there are some problems in promoting the story. For example, the next trouble comes before the previous trouble is completely solved, and the next trouble is not solved yet and it is involved in a new trouble. But overall it is really good, give five stars!

Generally speaking, if you don't mind the protagonist being weak and suffering for a long time, but just want to read good writing, you can give this a read