I Just Broke Up, and Now I'm Speed-Married to a Top Succubus. Does That Make Sense?

Overall, the overall story is pretty good, but the writing is more professional and the ideas are so wild that when I read 3/2, I couldn't help but wonder if the author had written out his imagination and game-playing dreams through the novel. In situations like Tomato, most of the novels tend to be fast-paced and labeled with love, and the introduction also tends to have love elements. It is expected. I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the early stage is just a cooperative relationship, and the male protagonist is more concerned about the relationship. However, I think it may be better for the author to infiltrate emotions into daily life or write more frequently in the early stage, because this can retain readers, and most of the articles are about games or professional entrepreneurship and actions. Not many people may understand this, so it is naturally easy to dissuade readers, but it does not hinder subsequent writing. I was amazed by the emotions, the writing style is quite good, and then every operation of the so-called "Rain God" is really too sci-fi. He can no longer be regarded as the kind of person who understands high technology. It is like a random ability that defies the sky. I think this is a bit sci-fi, not like a normal person. Although it can be classified as a genius, but those who don't understand computer code should know that there is no such person. Just casually. Everything was investigated and it didn't take long. Also, I felt that the identity confession was a bit late. It felt like the author didn't know how to write it and just created another crisis. The male protagonist felt that there was no real growth from the beginning to the end. It would be better to just write that the male protagonist is the kind of person who is handed a glass of water when needed. (The above is purely a personal opinion)

The author is still too short, can you work harder?

This is the novel I want to read. 😠😠😠😠😠😠

Please recommend, are there any books with a similar style? I found that I really like this type of book, it is not so sweet.

In fact, I can write more about daily life. I haven't progressed in daily life for a long time.

Very beautiful, worth pursuing

It's okay, remember to correct typos

Good-looking, good-looking, still good-looking!

Good, good, good, good

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