My Immortal Lord Is Obviously Super Strong but He Just Wants to Lie Down

I've been following it for many days, and I would like to make a suggestion: use less psychological descriptions of the female character's relationship [face covering] The plot is actually quite interesting, but sometimes I see it caught off guard, like eating sand in the bread. The apprentice princess imagined that she wanted to marry the protagonist, the daughter imagined her master and the protagonist, the anti-inflammatory template heroine fell in love with anti-inflammatory, and the master has a crush on the protagonist... Obviously, he can also write about normal women, such as his daughter's crazy mother. •ᴗ•💧

At first I thought this book was like that one, about the secluded life of one person and one cow [face covering] I actually wanted to see my daughter coming over, but how can I put it, this book is very interesting, a perfect book about recruiting disciples... The only flaw is that the little daughter's role is too small [crying] It only plays a role in promoting the development of the plot... But other than that, the author's writing style is good and the writing is really good! When writing an article about cultivating immortals, the most taboo thing is the issue of combat power. There is nothing wrong with what the author wrote, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed. Also, the author has a great advantage in not listening to the interference of some readers. It is very important to be able to write according to your own inner thoughts! Novels written in this way usually have an outline and an ending. Very nice [sending heart] [blowing kiss]

To be honest, in my personal opinion, before the incarnation came out, I could get a perfect score, at least around 95 points. The reason why I didn't read it was just because I personally dislike the incarnation. The other minor issues can be ignored or skipped, but after the incarnation came out, I'm sorry. I'm just representing myself. The book is pretty good, and it scores high points in a subject where the protagonist is the only one who doesn't know how powerful he is until he incarnates outside his body. The reason why I stopped reading is because I personally don't like avatars and the like. Do not spray. Glass heart. Come on.

Everything was fine up to now, but in Chapter 216, I suddenly felt extremely poisonous. How could I make the protagonist look like this? [Awkward laugh] Five-star reward, keep up the good work

It's good to watch. It's the first time I've seen this perspective of a boss. The protagonist's father is also a very interesting personality. The father is a waste of money, but the protagonist is just clinging to it all the time. The polarity is reversed [laughing][laughing]

It's not a brainless novel. The character creation is also very good. Mingxin Monk could have written better, but it has been very successful. It can be seen that the author is seriously shaping the characters. I have to say that this article has many problems, but it is already well written. Some suggestions are to kill the first monk. There is too much nonsense. It feels like the plot is being dragged out forcibly. It is also found in other places. Then there is the issue of the emotional line of the male and female protagonists. Subtle Love is well written, but it can be more interactive between the two. However, this suggestion is of no use since I am already married. The writing is already great. It is not a very powerful writing, but it is not a pure novel either. To sum up, the biggest problem is that the plot is dragged out and there is too much nonsense. It is okay if the protagonist is a little cowardly. I have finished watching Dragons back then, so I will not criticize the plot. The writing has flaws but is great. Every character is good.

Good looking, but a bit lacking. Overall it looks pretty good so far, no plot issues. The plot is complex and changeable, with the warmth of father and daughter, the passion of online novels, the cruelty of the world of immortality, and some funny plots. It is worth watching.

Chapter 190 is full of toxins, watch it if you can resist it. Those born in the 190s are all poisonous and will not stop at all. Get rid of the invincible flow.

Overall it's pretty good, but there are a lot of problems. The author's narrative skills are very similar, the only problem lies in the content. The realm is stagnant and has not reached the peak, giving people a feeling that it is just a little bit behind. The protagonist is not a virgin, but it cannot be said to be decisive in killing. Some people may complain about why they don't kill them all. Personally, I don't think the battle is exciting. Some places are poisonous, stuck in the realm, falsely invincible, rewarded with experience cards after exhausting tasks, signing in and practicing for more than 12 million years, only 3,000 can be used, and most of the rest are used as consumables, etc., But for me I have long been immune, so it is harmless. In summary, it's pretty good in my eyes, but if you feel that you have a weak ability to withstand poison points, you can take a closer look. I think it's pretty good. When I watched it, I didn't feel anything too poisonous for me to accept. Of course, the final feeling depends on the individual. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers. The author is great. I think his writing style and narrative skills are very good, but there are some problems with the content. Maybe it's because the author has a few chapters a day that the content isn't polished very well. But at this update rate, it doesn't matter if the content is a little subpar, I agree with it anyway. Give me five stars to encourage you. I feel like your writing is better than mine [Chigua]

The author is good at writing, and the description of some magnificent scenes makes people feel as if they are on the scene. However, the protagonist's emotional line is a bit delayed. However, the protagonist's character is destined to be single for a long time, which is reasonable. Now that I see it, I realize that I am a bit off topic. The protagonist does not rely on his daughter. In fact, the whole story is about the apprentice and his daughter relying on the protagonist's shock to develop step by step. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's not poisonous, but it doesn't attract people to watch it. It gives people a feeling of being tired of eating and being too bland.

Although you can guess the subsequent development, the best thing is that you don't feel bored watching it. Maybe it's because I've written a lot of very long-winded comments recently. Now as long as I'm not the kind of person who repeats the same thing back and forth, I feel pretty good😄

I feel that the most attractive point of the novel, for me, is that it describes the trivial details in detail, as well as the arrangements for the descendants of the sect and the descendants of the disciples. The books I have read most before are Tomato novels, such as Swallowing the Starry Sky, which cover the arrangements for the disciples in one stroke. It may be the first time I have come across this genre. It is really fascinating, and it is highly praised [Like][Like][Like]

It's quite good-looking, with good literary talent and well-written group portraits, but some of the small foreshadowings don't need to be hidden unless there are links later that actually promote the main plot. Another protagonist is a bit confused by his relationship. Someone else is about to commit himself. How will the protagonist face it later? It would be good if there were multiple female protagonists, but it is not realistic. Let's work on coding.

Well, in fact, the author's writing style is quite good, but I don't really like the ones with female protagonists, because I read more than 200 chapters, and then I suddenly discovered that he has a female protagonist. (I hope the author will write that there is a female protagonist on the introduction page of the article, because there are some people who don't like reading this type of writing.) Then I want to give up now, because I think you can have close friends in fairy tales. There are apprentices and relatives, but I can't accept the heroine, and I feel that it is very abrupt to have a heroine suddenly. Originally, I thought they should be close friends, but in the end they suddenly became the heroine. I couldn't accept it, so I left first. I hope that friends in the future will like this type and can support the author Da Da. The author's writing style is quite good. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Not bad 😁Hahahahaha Copy and paste: Death in the story is a girl's dream, a swaying swing, a paintbrush returning to silence, chasing the light after leaving the banquet, a kite that never falls, the caress of antlers, a baby's laughter, the long-lost sunshine, a beautiful fantasy, a meaningless retention, and a lonely return home. This book also...

Let's put it this way, there are many poisonous points, many people are negative (including but not limited to comments), and many people are protective. It's just that I don't know if it's a female commentator who stayed up late after reading it for so long. It's a pity.

It's a rare good book. The characters in it are well portrayed. The plot of the doppelgänger's travels is full of chivalry and the love between children. But when you see the protagonist, you feel regret without knowing it. Finally: I just want to accept you as my disciple [get it]

It's super good-looking. The protagonist is really perfect. There's no need to coerce the little snake into cp. The female goose hasn't grown up yet. It will look better when she collects and plays Destiny's Child and the female goose comes out. Everyone is the protagonist in their own life, and the author has polished the plot and writing very well. The core is also very strong. In the future, the incarnation will be strong. If you don't like it, you can change it to another book. If you like it, you can go to other places. It's a slow-paced lyric [crying]

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. I don't know why the rating is so low. If you don't like fighting and killing all the time, you can watch it.

I'm short on words, so this is the right book to read. There's been a book shortage recently, and everything I've read has been tasteless. The plot and writing of this book are both good. As a bookworm of more than ten years, I'm sure it's right. Strongly recommend [like] [like] [like] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

A basic ending, a wonderful Mission: Impossible, a plan within a plan, but many holes have not been filled in. I hope the author can explain Xi Yan and Ye Fan, as well as those disciples and the boss behind the scenes.

It's okay, I've finished watching it. Very pretty. However, there are some suggestions: 1. Give your daughter more scenes. Usually when the protagonist's four apprentices chat or do other things together, you don't see the protagonist's daughter at all. It's because the master-apprentice relationship is not in harmony, or the family is not harmonious. And judging from the author's description, it seems that the protagonist's daughter is designated as the group's favorite, but there are few scenes between her and the protagonist's apprentice. 2. Are there only sword cultivators in this world? Why do all four of the protagonist's apprentices practice swordsmanship? Is it because the protagonist doesn't know anything else? ? Advantages: 1. The plot of accepting a disciple is not cliché. Unlike other novels, the apprentice is hunted down, the protagonist saves him, and then willingly becomes his disciple. 2. The plot is light-hearted. Others: 1. External incarnation In fact, I can accept the first incarnation, but if the avatar cannot be solved, let the protagonist solve it. But the main body is cultivated in the Holy Realm, so at least the movement should be louder, and other Holy Realms should be able to detect it even if it is not good. After all, I don't think the protagonist in the novel has any good plans. The second incarnation is quite good. The farther away from the protagonist, the higher the realm. But distance is still an issue. If the protagonist takes action without authorization, it would not be consistent with the character setting. 2. When I saw the description of the three monuments merging into one, I had already guessed that the protagonist would most likely establish a force and then reach the top, and then all the monks would be shocked. 3. I've seen the latest one now, and it's really good-looking. (I think)

It's quite good-looking. Although there are stitches, it's still to the point. The plot is quite interesting, but the update is too short and not enough to read. Please do your best, author.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the author has too many times made a certain section of the article very toxic to read in order to continue the plot, resulting in some plots not being enjoyable at all, but actually making my blood pressure a bit high. 4 Stars for improvement

The main plot is that in the troubled times after the collapse of the dynasty in the lower world, the male protagonist survives and upgrades, establishes a sect, and leads his disciples. The funny plot comes from the fact that the male protagonist feels that he is a little Karami, but he is actually invincible in the lower world, and he is not even a low-ranking person in the upper world. The author has a very good grasp of the rhythm of the unfolding of the plot. There will be no burnout period when reading the article, and people can't help but read it in one go. However, there are relatively few chapters now, so I look forward to more updates.

It's great, it's a system text, also known as a flat text, you can lie down flatly [cover your face], if 1.4 Billion people travel through time, everyone will have a system, 1.4 Billion systems [eat melon]

The early and middle stages are good, and the character creation and laugh points are relatively clear among the books I've read. However, the pacing in the later period was a bit weak, and there were many problems with the details. Maybe the word count was a bit long for the author, and it was tiring to write later. Overall, it's worth reading. The first part is probably worth reading slowly, chapter by chapter. I read the latter part a little faster, and all the holes that need to be filled are filled in at the end. Also, I really don't know what the poisonous points are for so many people in foreign persimmons. I have been reading online articles for more than ten years, but I have never seen so many so-called "poisonous points." If the protagonist is just a little bit, it is considered poisonous, if the protagonist is not invincible, it is considered poisonous, if the protagonist does not open a harem, it is considered poisonous, if the protagonist does not kill everyone, it is considered poisonous, the chapter review and the paragraph review have not stopped in the early and middle stages. However, I can't stand some books that are touted as being amazing. Maybe it's because I'm old.

The plot connects very naturally, and the overall impression is very good. However, a common problem with novels comes in the later period. Many foreshadowings are not revealed. The final chess game feels like it should be known from the beginning what the ending will be. There is no suspense. The final ending is also a bit sloppy, but it is better than now. Those mindless online novels on the Internet are much better. The writing is good, the direction of the plot is good, and the plot points and selling points are also very good. As a reader, I feel the charm of group portraits. I hope the author will make a supplement to supplement the setting. Yuanyuan is sorry. I don't even know who the big boss is in the end.

There are enough routines and counter-routines, and there are currently no poisonous points to pursue.