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There are some minor pitfalls, such as the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Their relationship progresses too fast (this actually doesn't matter, after all, you must read the novel to enjoy it), but the male protagonist has always refused to admit it. Logically speaking, he has no worries, which is a bit inconsistent with his status as a powerful cultivator; for another example, as a cultivator, Immortal, let's not talk about the protagonist's lack of methods. After all, there is a saying of returning to nature in cultivating immortals, but the protagonist shouldn't be so careful and hide it deliberately. Again, he shouldn't have so many worries. Although it has changed at the time of my comment, it was still a bit poisonous in the early stage. Overall, this novel is still readable. The plot progresses relatively smoothly. The main reason is that it was a little bit toxic in the early stages, but overall it's still okay.

I don't like reading romance novels, but this book is not that boring and I read it ok. Although the routine is old, the description is very good, and it does not slap the face or abuse the main character, just kill whoever needs to be killed. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that I didn't directly kill the Su family and the Wen family after knowing about the Su family and the Wen family. Please add more [please update]

There are spoilers , , , , Yes, daily articles, daily sweet articles, 89 chapters of kissing, invincible articles will not be ruined. The male protagonist will meet the female protagonist in every life, but the male protagonist travels through time twice. He did not meet her in the first life, nor did she meet her in the second life. She met her in the third life. However, combined with the fact that the male protagonist will meet the female protagonist in every life, the male protagonist only lives one life. This is pure speculation. I've seen Chapter 148. Why does the male protagonist have so few means? Does he have strength or means? Just numerical values ​​are not enough. There must be a mechanism. I suggest writing more mechanisms. I always felt that the male protagonist's emotions were light, but not that light. I must have been confused by reading the book. There are group portraits at the back, so the scenes between the male and female protagonists are compressed.

I have to say that this is the best of all the novels I have read, The Return of the Immortal. The biggest common problem with this type of novel is that it talks about unlimited internships, but does not show the tricks. This is also the case in the early stages of this book. In other words, the number of chapters added by the author is too few, and most people will run away without reading it. It's quite fun to kill the ones in the back, and there are many ways to do it. I feel that the focus of this book is on falling in love. The number of CPs written is the largest I have ever seen, and it covers all genres. It is no problem to read it as a casual daily novel. Come on, author, please update more.

The writing is okay, there are no particularly bad points. I forgot to read the comments before reading the book, otherwise I would have been dissuaded. But after reading it, I found that it was okay. When I read the comments, I didn't know where the bad points were.

It looks good, I love watching it, I hope I don't have a knife [laughs evilly]

I'll give you 4 points, and I'll give you 1 more point after I finish.

Hope it progresses quickly

I really like the current rhythm.

Not bad, good, good-looking

It's beautiful (I can only say it in these two sentences, I won't go into a long story)

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Five stars, needless to say. Although there are some minor flaws, it does not affect the viewing experience.

[Love][Love][Love][Love][Love] I personally think it looks good [Like]

It's really beautiful, please come on

Needless to say classic

The plot is very exciting.

Come on author, it's great

Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie

There is a shortage of books, but it looks okay

Mouthless, obedient, nurturing, beautiful girl [smile][smile][smile]

It's quite healing. I'm much better.

Hehe, it looks good. I like it!

It looks good, cheers, author

Generally, one star is deducted because the author has a lot of inner drama.

If the reader has not commented, the system will give it a positive rating by default!

I don't eat beef. In my daily life, it seems to pass the time.

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What I wrote before was a little mediocre, but now it seems to be getting better and better.

I really think it looks good, but I don't know why the score is so low.