After Disbanding Due to Arrears of Wages, the Reorganized OPH Won the Championship

Good to see the explosion! ! ! In fact, there are many second stories in OPH that describe Luka as a dishonest person. When I saw it, my mother's eyes darkened🆘In PV, Luka is the King of Seven Hundred Stars! This book is super well-written, and Denden Stopwatch is so handsome to me... The description of the game is also very detailed. I literally picked out a game and put it in front of me in slow-motion text. The detailed description and character arrangement are also very good. Seeing the mfly team was a surprise to me! Liu Chundong has been a professional commentator for 100 years ( Author, you must be good. I am really looking forward to this bite of food every day😭😭😭I won't be short of rewards. It's so beautiful😭😭😭A fairy wrote it😭😭😭

I declare this to be one of the most beautiful Identity V fanfics in the world! I chased for a whole day from Chapter 1 to Chapter 86 and tied it. Every time the captain played a game of saving people, he was so cool. Every sentence of the ancient god "I'm coming" is very reassuring (when will my ranked OB position be like 711!), Luka is worthy of being the god of electricity! Then Lily's words seem to be a bit of a weak point for OPH, but judging from the foreshadowing, I think she will improve in the future! In short, I look forward to the performance of the OPH team entering the league in this book! I am also looking forward to the story line of Qiu Ke (it's strange why his speed of light declined after winning the championship before his comeback, which seems to be a foreshadowing). In addition, I think the author said that he will write about Abyss 8. I am curious about whether the noise of Qiu Ke who pursues the slaughter of the ceiling or the sheep is more powerful in the article (?) Thousands of words are condensed into one sentence, come on, author!

I would call this the fifth most powerful e-sports fanfic. The writing is very smooth. There are no awkward dramas but very delicate group portraits. Every character is taken care of. The appearance of the lone wolf is even more unexpected. Hahahaha [blowing kiss] Boss, please be my oph for the rest of my life. I will do anything [crying] [crying]

Nice! I don't follow ivl, but the description of the field is very specific and detailed. It's the first time I've seen Luka in the command position. Cheers, teacher. Press it for points ()

The teacher's writing is really good. I have really paid attention to e-sports. Each chapter of the game description is like watching a real game. It is different from the traditional tomato novels that are smooth and enjoyable all the way to the end. They will make mistakes and failures in reality and on the competition field, but I believe oph can do it. Come on, teacher, I rely on you for my good night material.

The author really understands the game, just like an e-sports worker retired to write articles, and he has brought the characters to life. Each person's own small characteristics and personality are vividly displayed, which very well stirs up the reader's mood. I am particularly worried about OPH now. Although I know that they will definitely overcome difficulties and break the rumors, I still feel sad π_π

Good looking, really not OOC, this is the real Luca

It's very interesting. I feel that the author's description of the event is really detailed, so I think people who don't watch the event can understand it. Oph's description is very relevant. It's really a rare and good article. I hope the author can stick to it!

The writing is very consistent with the characters, and the plot is very reasonable. It doesn't have the kind of kindergarten writing style, and at first glance, it looks like someone who often watches games.

First of all, don't misunderstand. The purpose of giving four stars is to reduce the score. I think there are really many advantages, and it feels like being there when you watch it. Different from other Identity V e-sports novels (there is no intention to disparage other Identity V e-sports novels), the characters in this book are all alive, and all the characters are CB-oriented. This has defeated many pitiful fanfics whose main plots are love plots and have little e-sports space (I am not saying that love plots are bad, I am a chore person). When it comes to e-sports space, this is another highlight of the teacher. Yes, the priority is very clear, but when e-sports takes up a lot of space, a small number of daily plots are used to establish a flesh-and-blood OPH. The teacher is also very good at shaping characters. The role of the coach is a self-created character. If the character is not established, it is easy for the whole book to end. (I tried this when I was writing a book in school, especially for important characters in the plot.) But the teacher used some small fragments to establish the character of a kind coach. I have to say that there are many highlights in the plot. The funny plot like Liu Chuntong's professional host prevents people from quitting the e-sports article because it is too boring (I won't quit the book anyway). People who read the e-sports plot are excited and want to jump into the rankings and compete immediately. I have finished praising all the teachers (not that I have finished praising their merits, but that I can't think of any). Can you quickly fake the corpse and resurrect it? Please give me my heart [sending my heart] Is there anyone who will join me for a second review and try to push the author's book Dada to the recommendation list again? More people read Dada's book, and maybe Dada will have more chapters [Sending my heart]

First of all, after watching it for so long, I found one place, which is the official PV. I participated in Abyss 7 after the reorganization. (Actually, the PV was quite messy, OPH was okay, but then it was messy when I saw blk, but it was a big OOC.) Generally speaking, as long as you are not afraid of interruptions, you can accept it. Now let's talk about my feelings. When the teacher stopped updating, I looked at other fanfics, but I couldn't find the feeling of this one (I didn't say that the others were bad) because it was labeled as e-sports, but they were all about religious CP love story backgrounds. (Actually, I'm quite disgusted with Lalang CP's forceful addition to the e-sports worldview.) But this book is different. It's about friendship among all members, and there's no romance at all. It's just a pure e-sports article. (Daily training is included in most game plots) It greatly refers to classic events and prototypes, and it can be seen that it has a great understanding of the event. Finally, no matter what happens to you, you will wake up one day and look forward to the day when the flowers bloom again.

It's really beautiful. This dian is very well written. I would like all dian moms to read this. Dian Dian should be such a high-spirited, handsome and talented little genius. . .

It took me about two or three days to finish reading it. I really like this style. I haven't played ranked for several days because of the ranking environment. I haven't watched much of the event, but the author's description made me feel like I was there, and even made me want to play an exciting ranked game now. Judging from some detailed descriptions, it can be seen that the author plays Identity V, and has a deep understanding of it. For example, how to drink immediately after taking a knife, etc. Some also reminded me of the teaching videos I watched before, so I decided to play ranked at noon today! The author's characterization is also very good. Obviously, most of the space is devoted to the introduction of events (let me tell you in advance that I like this kind of large-scale introduction of events), but a few chapters mixed with a large number of events accurately portray the characters. I hope that I can become the Luca in this book who can accurately count seconds and have strong basic skills in the future, or meet such a Luca, but I feel more I should learn from the King of Soldiers how to save people stably. After all, I still play the role of saving people, haha. In the end, everyone is trying to score points, so I will give one less star. But I still like this kind of thing. I can consolidate the fifth knowledge again when I read the novel. I like this kind of feeling of being nervous with the characters and breathing a sigh of relief as the situation changes! It feels like you are there too!

There doesn't seem to be much of a surprise at the moment, but there are still some things to note: 1. Regarding Luca's relationship line, the others are okay and written relatively quickly, but Luca's is particularly slow. After more than ten chapters, I still don't know what I'm writing (?) And I feel very rushed when reading it. 2. The author's writings are all oriented towards CB, but some people will still mention CP in the comment area. If you don't accept the suggestion, don't read the comment area where the character's CP is included. For now, that's all I think [sending my heart]

It's good to see a rising star in the Identity V fandom. At present, it looks okay and very comfortable. There are still relatively few Zhangs at the moment, but I think we can definitely predict the speed of his rating upgrade.

The prisoners in the book are very consistent with the characters, the logic is clear, and the methodical command is very loyal to the image of the strategist in the game. I hope this kind of excellent fan fiction can be seen by more people [Chigua] [Like]

It's really beautiful ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh It's super nice. The author's writing is super good, and the author can be seen as a fifth-level veteran player. A lot of writing about games is great. It feels like you are on the scene. Many game skills can also be displayed. Zhu Bo, as a fifth-level player, has won the A-level toy dealer and the C-level doctor. The C-level lesbian is really very good-looking.

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Everyone's IQ is on the line. The oph fandoms I watched before were either Luca being stupid, or Lily making a mistake that almost led to her being overturned. As a prison cook, I was really exhausted. Luca is nothing... Lily is neither! But this fanfic doesn't have that, it's a very nice mouth! Except for the author who has stopped updating now, there are none of the misunderstandings of the characters that often appear in other fandoms. It's very nice!

One of my favorite eSports articles! ! ! The teacher's description of the fifth game is very detailed and realistic. I think it has a lot to do with the author's serious attitude and his own familiarity with the fifth game (the author is indeed a high-ranking player qwq, both his consciousness and techniques are beyond my imagination). So much so that when I read the competition descriptions in other e-sports articles, I will subconsciously compare them with this article.

Oh my god, it's so beautiful to watch, and the game is so logical that even a novice who doesn't often watch games can understand it! It's really, really beautiful! ! ! [Shy][shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The author's writing is really good. I have been following it. Sometimes I am too lazy to read and will listen to the book. It is really very good. The plot of each chapter makes my eyes shine. I haven't seen such a good writing in a long, long time. I highly recommend it.

Okay, okay, I think the characters are well written, not very OOC, and let us see another life of Lily Luca Naib Qi Shiyi

The writing is so good, so good, so good, Luca is finally not a fool anymore, woo woo woo, every character has his or her own growth line Dear author, please don't give in. This is simply the oph in my mind [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] The author writes so well, she is simply my goddess [love] [love] [sending heart]

I really like the character settings of the characters in it. Come on, boss!

Nice! It's the most exciting one I've ever seen [Adoration]

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It's very interesting. It's the first time I've read an e-sports article from No. 5. The visuals are so strong, it feels like I'm actually watching a game.

There are very few e-sports articles with coherent content and thoughtful content.

It looks good, cheers for the author