Villain: the Younger Brother Becomes Invincible After Plundering the Male Protagonist's Luck

This book looks good so far, with more than a hundred chapters, but it is still a little bit toxic. For example, when Ye Lin taught Xue martial arts, he touched the sensitive area of the waist, and when Qin Lang came back, the author deliberately described Ye Yao hugging Qin Lang, and also deliberately wrote about listening to the heartbeat. Although Qin Lang regarded Ye Yao as his sister, this feeling was still a bit poisonous. After all, who in Shuangwen likes to see poisonous points, this is just a Some of them are more poisonous in my opinion, and there are some smaller ones, such as the other male supporting characters holding the heroine's wrist in more than one place. By the way, the author's writing language may be a bit poisonous in some places. For example, when the male protagonist and the school beauty pretend to break up and confess their love, the school beauty mistakenly thinks that the confession is that others feel moved, etc. There are too many minor problems, and the rest are basically no major problems. This book might be a bit too much. Overall, this book is actually quite recommended. If the author could listen to his advice, the rating would be higher.

Why is the score so low? This is pretty good for what I've seen these days.

Don't let the author of this book go, the plot is really enjoyable💥

It's very interesting. I haven't seen such a beautiful book in a long time.

In ancient martial arts, the cultivation from low to high is divided into Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Hua Jin, Qi Jin, Gang Jin, Xiantian and Grandmaster.

The logic is clear and the writing is very good, but the system is not very useful at the moment. We will see the progress later.

Apart from being a little frustrated, it's actually pretty good.

Let's accept Han Xinyi as well.

It's so good-looking and so funny, hahahahahahahahahaha

After identification, it is not an AI article

The storyline is good

Good, good, good

The joy of poison is not as good as the joy of common people

So beautiful, I can't stop

Okay okay thank you

Such a wonderful novel, why does it only have such a low rating?

Very nice, good luck to the author

So far, it seems to my liking. I hope the author will give me more information [laughing][laughing]

Very nice, I like it, come on

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Not bad, good, cool article

Good looking, recommended by old book fans

The plot is better than average

Yes, I like it

Okay, here are some more women

Very good, keep watching it

Very good very good

I want to read it all in one go

Not bad, tastes great

Very good, good content