The Oriental Chess Player at Hogwarts

I really like the original two male protagonists, the counselor and his general, the prince and his knight. They accompany each other to overcome all difficulties. I also like the sub-CP of this book. I express my gratitude to the author [sending my heart]

The writing is really good and very easy to write. Come on, author! It would be nice if the semester could be longer, but it always feels so short and not enough to watch at all.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but after reading these chapters, I feel that the author has a unique understanding of the original work and has done a great job in portraying the two protagonists. I like the author's writing style very delicately and vividly. I like the kind of surprises hidden in the ordinary. Please stick to the end! I will always follow you!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! Completely in line with my inner regret, please note ⚠️, the CPs in this article are Deha, Krum and Hermione, Sirius and Professor Lupin, Cedric, Zhang Qiu, Grindelwald and Albus. The above are all my favorite CPs, especially Krum and Hermione. It is true that these two people are not together in the original book. It's hard to overwhelm. It's very well written. The main plot intersects with the original plot of Harry's savior, but not too much. Every intersection makes up for the regrets of the original plot. For example, Harry finally lives with his godfather Sirius, for example, Cedric is safe and sound, and he is very happy with Senior Zhang Qiu, etc. The writing and plot are all top-notch. The characters in the original work basically have no OOC, they are very consistent with the original work, and what everyone says and does is very similar to what the people involved in the original work would do hahaha. The writing method is more biased towards Western literature, and it is not dramatic at all. Although the protagonist is Chinese, the Chinese magic charms are very arranged with magic. Okay, it's not too exaggerated to jump out of the drama. The love scene between the protagonists, childhood sweethearts, is natural and sweet. Both of them have online IQ and strength. It's very comfortable. I really like this fanfic. The writing, the plot, the characters, and the characters have all grown up in my heart. Author, I will always follow you.

Really pretty! The characters and plot really impressed me! Moreover, there are not many changes to the plot of the original book (such as the Sorcerer's Stone or Harry finding it, etc.). I personally feel that I respect the original book very much. However, it did not deviate from the protagonist and did not describe too much about Harry's plot in the original book. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I love it so much!

It's very beautiful. It's from HP [Sending Hearts] and the couple Ning Hesheng and Pavel are super sweet. The teacher writes it very well. I haven't seen such a beautiful fanfic for a long time. Come on, teacher [laughing]

Shockingly delicious! ! Such a cute little Chinese-Russian couple! ! The plot is also very rigorous. Basically, the plot of the original work has not been changed. The characters are also very full. In fact, when the series was about 20 chapters, I added a bookshelf and waited until it was finished (hehehe). Thank you to the author for writing such a masterpiece! ! We like you! !

This is one of the novels in the HP series that respects the original work more. It focuses on new characters and does not repeat the plot of the original work too much. It does not take away the light of Harry's protagonist group and does not drastically change Harry's growth path. But it changed the original tragic ending of some characters, and I was happy to see that Dumbledore and the others did not die. Except for the CP characterization of the new characters, the CP of other characters is not written too much, so it is not objectionable. Overall, thumbs up! This book shouldn't be rated so low! ! !

Highly recommended. It has original dual male protagonists and an original interlocking plot. It doesn't involve too much in the "main line" of the savior (I've seen a lot of similar hp fics). It's very sweet and heartwarming, and the lightning protection points are clearly written. Another point is that the strength is in line with the age level, and it is not too big, which is good. Recommended

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! What you wrote, author, is really super, super, super great! ! The writing is very good, and the atmosphere in the comment area is also very, very good. It feels warm and cute. The CPs all write very well. I would like to ask if Brace is the CP?

I really like the author's writing style and style. It made me get to know a new and warm "Harry Potter" again. I am very happy to make up for many regrets. I will continue to support you greatly [learned] [learned]

The sweet Snake-Eagle Russian-Chinese couple did not completely follow the main plot. It had its own original plot, and a lot of regrets were saved. However, the villain's final exit was so sudden. The protagonists' combat power shown in the first part was not as good as that of adults. Later, the villain who could cooperate with Voldemort was suddenly killed. It felt like I missed several chapters. But it's really sweet for the young couple to get along! Especially when he transforms into a wolf and hugs people, it's so cute! ! !

It looks good. If you like it, show it to me.

I think it looks pretty

It's beautiful... Why doesn't anyone see it? I beg you, please come and take a look. It's really beautiful. The emotional lines are so beautiful to me. It's the best fanfic!

A very delicious fanfic! ! !

It's a pretty good one, and it's still a fairly average work.

Very interesting book

It looks good, no need to say more

Beautiful, love watching. Pure sugar without knife

It looks good, but I just want to ask if the emotional line at the back is cruel or not.

Beautiful, very beautiful! I strongly recommend it! ! ! The characters are really well developed! [Sending Hearts]

A very nice book with very novel characters

It's good-looking, very good-looking. The author will update it soon, and the setting of the protagonist is also interesting to me [shy]

It looks good, the writing is good, and the protagonist is easy to beat.

It's very interesting. I particularly like this book [Shy]. There are just a few chapters. I wish the author would be better and write more extras, but it's finished⁽⁽(ཀ д ཀ)⁾⁾

Super, super good-looking, very, very supportive [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very delicious- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

Originally, I didn't want to comment on this book so quickly, but the review is too low, and it's really to my liking, so I'll just express my love [get it]

Wow, Pavel and Asheng are so good at each other.