Rewrite the World Line: Just to Eat the Evil Lady's Soft Rice

First of all, I would like to state that I have read the latest chapter, Chapter 80. There is no problem with the general content and the settings of the simulator. Those who are interested in this aspect can read it. But, there is a very serious bug in reading this book, at least I think so. The story line of this book does not mention education from beginning to end, or there is not much about it. You said that you will awaken the martial arts and magical powers. I won't say anything, but you are saying that a child of a cultivating family has not been taught about character and family concepts since childhood. The heroine has not received unified formal education since childhood. This is abnormal. Another thing is that Lao Mo, who has been alive for who knows how long, can't see that there is something wrong with the blood on the protagonist's body, is there something wrong with Jie Heli? Of course, this is just my own complaint, and it's okay to watch the content for fun.

In the world of cultivating immortals, yandere novels, the female protagonist currently described is much sicker than delicate. The female protagonist is similar to a vampire, changing the male protagonist's physique and turning him into a state between a blood slave and a normal person. In the future simulated by the simulator, the female protagonist can influence the male protagonist's thoughts and behavior. I think the biggest poisonous point is this, and those who can accept this should be able to watch it.

I just watched the beginning and found out that it is a very interesting simulator mechanism. Unlike traditional simulators, this simulator does not have a very long-term perspective, nor can it produce effects similar to rollbacks, nor can it produce multiple endings. I can only reluctantly correct my life direction at a few key nodes. The difficulty is equivalent to clearing the level in one life, and due to the unpredictable bad effects caused by the limitations of the simulator (you only know how to operate to achieve what effect, but you don't know what impact such an effect will have in the future, the danger of the butterfly effect is greatly increased), it may even cause the host to corrupt the game. This puts forward relatively high requirements for the author's story, so look forward to the author's performance!

Well, this book is a bit interesting, but the simulation conditions are a bit confusing. Can it be simulated anytime and anywhere? Maybe it's because I skipped a chapter and didn't see it. The subject matter is good and the writing style is also good. It can be considered a good product. The fact that there is no particularly embarrassing plot is a big plus.

I am very satisfied with it. The unique style makes me unable to read or put it down. It is very addictive. It is a very readable book but it is too short. I recommend reading it until 2 o'clock in the morning. But the author, you delayed me from going to work (/_＼) I don't know if I can get up tomorrow? I suggest you not to stay up late reading like me (இωஇ )

Excellent comprehensive evaluation The early development was relatively fast, and the plot rhythm was a little confusing. But after getting in touch with the eldest lady, the rhythm gradually improved, and the plot and characters were very good, and the heroine's personality and appearance were also very likable. The pace is slightly faster in the later stages, and the love lines between the male and female protagonists are basically completed soon after the engagement. Only one minor flaw (personal perspective) The author likes to set up CPs for supporting characters, so why bother with extra groups? If you are writing a single female protagonist, just focus on writing the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists. Who wants to watch/peep at the emotional lines between other supporting characters?

Good light novel First of all, in terms of the protagonist's ability: it is probably a branch of retrospection, which changes the retrospection in the Resurrection Empire to a simulation and binds the world line of the simulation. It is an excellent creative transformation, saving a lot of unnecessary plots, and an excellent innovative development. Secondly, as far as the plot is concerned: there is not a single line of strong conflict. It can be said that it is just the journey of the protagonist to raise his legs, but as a light novel subject, it is innocuous. Secondly, in terms of the characters of the protagonists: 1. The protagonist is a butler type, gentle, prepared, cautious, more human-like than the protagonists of other novels (the others are either as calm as a god, or as juicy as a pig, or as cruel as a star of heaven) 2. It can be seen that the author likes yandere very much, and everything he writes is about yandere themes. Finally, the writing is good and can be said to be the best for beginners. It reads smoothly and smoothly, and there are no big writing jokes. The overall score is 4.8. I like light novels so the score may be a bit higher. I like the light novel, it's a five-star game!

Go ahead, I'm such a fan of the palace and I didn't write a book review? Sin, sin. It's a good book, I don't think there's any big problems. If I were to rate it, it would be around an 8/8 (I didn't say it would be higher). New books need a little tolerance. Also, I haven't finished reading it, so it's not good to give an accurate review.

This simulator is also very novel. The number of simulations is unlimited and can be simulated anytime and anywhere. The content of the simulation is only some major events witnessed by the protagonist in the next five years. This means that the protagonist cannot obtain details from the simulator. Unless a certain person or thing is specified in the simulation, he can learn more, and it can only be understood from the perspective of the protagonist. It leaves suspense while also avoiding the delay of the plot and the later collapse of the simulation, the biggest problem of the simulation. What needs to be mentioned in particular is that the heroine's journey through the tribulation in this book is the best described among all the tribulations I have read. One tribulation is covered in four chapters, and the description of the thunder tribulation is really shocking.

Author Author Your character, the male protagonist, the Sky Thief, is still too weak. Do you have any recommendations on how to strengthen it? See if you can simulate any resources to improve your talents. Aren't the 54-year-olds ready to separate? The male protagonist can simulate going to the sea of ​​flowers for bloodletting at regular intervals [laughing] Jun Xiyao: The Furnace Physique has been released. My blood slave, please don't do anything sorry for me. I (yandere) can't guarantee what I will do.

The best novel with a single female protagonist that I have read so far, but the slow progress of the real-life main plot is a common problem in simulator novels [face covering] There is a sense of déjà vu in re0. It is rare to see a good book that makes people want to put it down.

A very good simulation article, or very special. The use of the simulator has limited functions. I have not read this elsewhere. Maybe I haven't read enough. In short, it is quite interesting.

Well, after reading the first volume, I felt that the character description was okay, the plot was relatively good, and the plot was relatively ok. Well, the content was also very attractive, and it is suitable for people who can't stand their temper.

No one has said it, so let me tell you, this book is so beautiful, why is the rating so low? [Make faces]

Okay, I read it all in one go. One small drawback is that the writing at the beginning is a bit confusing and I can't understand what to write. But if you keep reading, it will be fine. The description of the relationship between the characters is good, and the description of emotions is also okay. It is a book worth reading.

It can only be said that both father and son have embarked on the same path. Is this fate? (

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You are the author of the first book I reviewed, OK

The simulation method is quite special. It's the first time I've seen this kind of simulation. It's a bit fresh. But otherwise it's okay.

There is something said and written that is really good and has some potential.

Yes, the simulation nodes are quite novel and different from the sameness of other simulations. The plot is good, I look forward to the emotional scenes with the eldest lady.

It's very well written, but it's a yandere sign. I clicked in and read over 1,000 chapters but didn't see anything. I felt like I was deceived.

Xinyi's simulator is more like stopping and briefly peeking into the future. Of course, if you want to see the combat aspect of this kind of text, don't think about it. It's just for self-protection.

I support the author to finish the book. The ideas are very novel and the content is interesting. I hope the author will get better and better.

The subject matter is novel, the details are very good, the plot is very natural, there is basically no poisonous point, but it is too short [Blowing Kiss]

It's quite possible. I'm starting to look forward to what the female lead will be like after the male lead leaves.

A story about a protagonist with a simulator working hard to survive as a servant in a scheming family.

It's pretty good, but even though it feels like the protagonist is always strategizing, it still feels a bit frustrating.

Support the author [Chigua]

My favorite chapter is "The Starry Sky Under the Sea of ​​Flowers"