My Little Pony: the Fishing Novelist Doesn't Want to Update!

Four stars, the protagonist is successfully portrayed and can give readers an initial impression. Integrating into the world is not stiff, and self-pleasure is reduced. It also adds emotional description (like a female channel closer?) Compared with other novice Xiaoma's novels, it is superior! So overall, +1 star (By the way, there shouldn't be a harem, right...? There should be less solicitation!)

Author, don't think like the main character and run away halfway through writing, this book is absolutely beautiful. [Almost crying] There is no ending, there has to be a process...

Immortal product, you can eat it with confidence (?) The atmosphere and inner feelings are really well portrayed. It is just simple words and sentences, but it makes people's hearts ripple. The emotions written are simply very representative. I rolled and twisted on the bed while watching, shouting: "This is a gift from God, an immortal product, it is simply an immortal product!!!"

Why doesn't the author update Ponygirl's Knight from Heaven? Can you tell me why? It's really beautiful, why didn't it suddenly stop updating? [Crying] (Looking for the author's reply)

How should I put it? The writing style is good, the article is logical, and there are some jokes. It is considered to be at the top of the fan fiction. As for why I gave it four stars and updated it every three days, is this a human being? I almost want to get a three-star rating [smile]

"But I still want to tell you. Chenxi, I like you. It is not the appreciation of teachers for students, nor the care of elders for younger ones, but the purest and most serious love from one soul to another. I want to watch next year's flowers bloom with you, I want to hear you tell your unfinished stories, and I want to... Stand by your side. It's just me, not anyone's teacher. " "I know this is sudden." "I have lived for a long time and have seen too many flowers bloom and leaves fall. As spring passes and autumn comes, I thought my heart would be as silent as the bottom of the lake. But after meeting you, I discovered that my heart can still beat so fast for a pony." "In the past ten years, I have been very happy to watch you grow from a timid boy to a novelist who can stand alone. But what makes me even more flustered is that this happiness has long been mixed with other things - the urge to smooth your brows when I see you, the corners of my mouth that can't help but raise when I hear your laughter, the feeling of... Wanting to stay by your side all the time. What you did during this period made this feeling completely explode, and even I couldn't suppress it anymore..." "You don't have to answer me in a hurry. I just want you to know that this love is not a whim or the wind blowing in summer, but something I said after a long, long time and careful consideration." "I know that there is a long time between us, and I have traveled more roads than you have seen, but because I have seen so much, I understand better how rare it is to have a heartbeat. In the morning light, I have seen the snow fall for thousands of years, and heard the wind roar for thousands of miles, but only when I look at you, I feel that this long life has a moment where I really want to stay. " "I have written about many affairs, but I always feel that those feelings of love at first sight are too pretentious... So I prefer those sudden touches after being with someone for a long time." "I respect you, always will." "But now, I want to tell you that my love for you... Has also become like me." "Thank you for these ten years." "Thank you for appearing in my long life, like a light, illuminating the dark night I have seen too many times." "It's me who should say thank you. Thank you for being willing to come to me and tell me this. Thank you for letting me, this young light, illuminate the years you have passed." "Thank you for loving me without hesitation... I didn't know what this feeling was, but I suddenly figured it out later... I want to get close to you. The gentle smell exuding from you makes me want to hug you involuntarily. " "But I know very well that this kind of thing can only be done between lovers of the opposite sex... That's why I thought, I want to love you." "When I touch you, a different kind of impulse arises in my heart that I can't control." "A real throbbing that I never dared to think about." "My love for you should be the purest appreciation and protection." "I didn't want it to be tainted with the secular love between men and women, but... But I can't deceive myself..." "I want you to love me, so I would rather get involved in worldly romance, because I really don't want to, don't want to see you holding another girl's hand in the end... Chenxi, I love you." " "I understand, you don't have to worry about these anymore... You say this is secular, but secular life includes spring cherry blossoms and autumn osmanthus, summer cicadas and winter snow, fireworks-scented breakfast and warm sun. I want to experience these with you. "

The pace is good and the characters are great, but it's too slow. (Also, will it be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? I hope it will be a single female protagonist)

It's very good, but maybe I haven't read this type of novel for too long. Anyway, after reading it, my body had a slight reaction, but my tear ducts didn't react. It's pretty good. I agree with you, author.

The writing is very good, just like a crystal clear stream. You can clearly see what the bottom of the river looks like at a glance, but you can also see the fish in the water. When you see the first one, you want to see the next one, and slowly you become fascinated. The writing is delicate and rhythmic, and the content is substantial and not laggy. However, the updates are unstable, and like the protagonist of this book, the book has no ending [laughing] I hope the author can remember to continue writing and take detours without ending, but you have to keep going, right?

The experience of life is an experience, and worldly fame and fortune are not the meaning of life. The Tao and I are one. How I am and what the world is are all determined, so why bother.

Hurry up and update, novels with the heroine Nightmare Moon are not common after all, so when will there be a heroine in Dawn!

The writing style, emotional scenes, foreshadowing, turns, and plot handling are all excellent among Tomatoes. The plot never felt boring. It can be called the top Tomato Pony daily novel.

It's really very good-looking. I think it's not worse than Senyu's book, maybe on par with it. The protagonist and Nightmare Moon (not Princess Moon) really clashed!

The writing is very good, but it is a pity that the preamble is a bit long in order to describe the protagonist's setting. However, this does not mean that the previous part (the plot before the main plot of the animation begins) is not well written. The author wants to proceed step by step and clarify the character relationships and settings for readers. However, it is a pity that some fan readers will quit directly after reading the beginning. They only want to eat fast candy instead of more logical candy in comparison - it is too long (although such fan works test the author's writing skills too much). But at least this one is good, has some sugar, and keeps the logic while shortening the length of the plot. The heroine should be Nightmare Moon.

It feels okay, but I feel a little stomach-ache when reading it. The current topic is how to deal with the relationship between the protagonist and his editor, sister and teacher. I don't know if it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. Twilight Sparkle may not be added until a few chapters later, or she may just be a close friend (of course, judging from the behavior between the protagonist and her, it doesn't look like they are just close friends). However, the author's writing style is good and I can read it.

Can the update be faster? Every time I have a holiday, I only watch one or two and I can't get enough [face covering] I rarely review a work in detail, but this one made me do it. The dawn of the morning sun is always the last light of the bright moon. They witness each other. The teacher-student friendship over the past ten years and the small fights in daily life are the route for nightmares to seek light. The dark side of the moon also longs for redemption. Chen Xi exchanged her own pain for the spiritual freedom of the magic horse, and everything was seen. As clear as this book is, with a clear main line, a clear purpose, witty language, and some humorous elements, it is rare to see a book with a solid foundation, especially in this circle. Stallion novels are just entertainment, not literature. Good literary works should be polished in this way and strive to narrate every plot well. Come on, the author [sending heartfelt wishes][OK]

How shameless! ! ! This is a very impressive novel about Xiao Ma. The writing style is very good, especially the description of emotions and atmosphere. The sense of immersion is superb! ! ! Five stars! ! ! Must be five stars! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good looking, come on author

This book finally has 200,000 words, which is not easy...

It looks good, one more thing, when will the author update it? [Laughing]

It's quite interesting. Unlike other authentic time-travel dramas and non-time-travel dramas, this one is quite magical. Believe it or not.

Delicate emotional lines, original plot, and local protagonist, it's great. This is the strength of female video authors (✪▽✪)

It looks good. If the heroine is clearly stated and the update speed is faster, I will vote for it as a gift.

Who is the heroine?

Five stars because the author is my wife

I haven't finished reading yet and asked if the heroine is Luna! I hope it's a single heroine Luna

My child tried it, it was very delicious and beautiful.

The writing makes people feel comfortable

Invincible, come on!