Immortality: Start with Taiyin Fruit

The world view setting is quite good. This is the real world in my imagination, not the kind of world where the high-level IQ is like the boss of the club and is counterattacked at every turn. Continue to read the latest chapter, it is still okay, it is not the Holy Mother at all, and the cruelty of the world of immortality is also very reasonable. That's how ordinary people are, don't care about the opinions of those guys who read too many brainless cool articles.

The world view is good, the cruelty in the ordinary, the long-lasting view of the peak of personal force, brings an absolute monopoly, and everything is divided up.

The overall setting of this book is very real, and the characters are very three-dimensional. For example, the very annoying character setting is very successful because he is very annoying. He is the senior brother named Yang. He doesn't know how many dishes he eats, but the senior brother who treats himself as an onion is very well portrayed. The overall setting and context of the novel are similar to the setting of casual novels that I feel. My own idea of cultivating immortals is also a martial arts, and the points of each spiritual root are big or small. Small difference, and then I decided that the speed of cultivating immortals is different. This is also the case, and the rhythm of the whole novel feels very moderate, not particularly fast or slow, especially the protagonist of the novel. He has a very clear positioning of himself. He knows what he can and cannot do. For example, now he is protecting himself from the threat of the Han family in a city. I can only say that this author does have something. If he writes well, he will definitely survive. As long as he persists, I will be a veteran reader first.

Okay, it's worth a look for now. I hope there is no female protagonist.

A good fairy tale, but I wish there was a female protagonist

The pace is relatively slow, but there are no poisonous points. The plot development and the protagonist's character are very stable, and there are no deliberately created conflicts. The author will clearly explain the thinking logic and pros and cons of many of the protagonist's actions. Readers who like fast pace may feel that it is normal and not accustomed to it, but this way there will be no brainless poisonous points. The author can just write according to the current writing method. He just needs to add more. After all, you need to make progress in the early stage before anyone will read it. After more than two hundred chapters, you can slow down. Come on.

It's very interesting, but there are too few, not enough. In the author's section, you should think about whether you didn't work hard [laughter] When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. By the time you reach the third watch, minor praise begins to occur and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. [Sinister smile]

It is a rare novel among immortal cultivation novels that accurately describes the rules of social operation and has a certain degree of rationality. The description of the relationship between sects, families, and casual cultivators in the novel is very interesting. The protagonist belongs to the dark blue plus point, dog track development type.

After seeing the latest chapter, there are no unbearable poisonous points in the whole book. The protagonist has medium talents, a mortal style, and focuses on stable development. He also has a golden finger to help him learn alchemy, etc. [Chigua] The protagonists and supporting characters in the book are well portrayed and worth reading [Chigua]

Comprehend the skills and skills, integrate and improve the skills, my favorite cheat is very capable but not embarrassing, that is, the function of changing the attributes and effects of items is not reflected in much other than changing the skills. It doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, and as long as you don't care about the difficult world of spiritual practice, it's fun to watch [Like]

I read the latest novels in one go. Why do Lao Tomato have so many high-quality novels recently? They are all the vests of various big guys.

It can be regarded as an excellent Gou Daoliu novel. First of all, congratulations to the author Qiami, and secondly, congratulations to Tomato for publishing a high-quality Gou Daoliu novel. If nothing goes wrong or the author does not follow up with poison, there should be high-quality products.

It's watchable, but there's nothing poisonous about it, and conversely, there's nothing exciting about it either. It's just mediocre. Goldfinger has been downplayed from the beginning and has not been developed carefully. It is considered to have given up the fun in order to control the plot. Can spend some time

There are basically no poisonous points, and it is a very stable prose. It's just that the update was discontinued before so many people didn't watch it, which is a pity. Now that I have been resurrected, there is only one update per day. Now I can't even update it once a day [laughs awkwardly] fewer and fewer people will watch it

It looks good, I hope it can be maintained. Because it is the early stage, the male protagonist's self-protection ability is too weak to go to the jungle, so the golden finger is used less. Don't break through the foundation building and use golden fingers frequently to cause the game to crash.

In Tomato, this book is an absolute masterpiece in the mortal stream. It has many advantages and few poisonous points. For example, when it is clear that the protagonist has a stably upgraded cheat, some novels also arrange for the protagonist to take the initiative to find opportunities and put himself in danger. The writing of this book is very reasonable. Only when the cheat cannot do something, the protagonist will consider going out to look for opportunities.

The narrative structure of this book is indeed exquisite, especially the passage where Lin Daiyu Q drives EVAQ Unit 1 on a rampage and fights against Godzilla Q, which is full of emotional tension. But it must be admitted that Thanos's Infinity Gauntlet played a role at the critical moment. If he hadn't eliminated half of the Dementors with the snap of his fingers, the egg-fried rice showdown in Hall Q of Hogwarts might not have ended. In addition, I especially admire Liu Bei's decision when the Wall Street stock market crashed. He said into the microphone, "Keep playing music and dance." This shows the stable core of Shuhan Group CEO in the face of the financial crisis. All in all, this is an excellent work that combines Eastern and Western strategic wisdom and multi-dimensional universe narrative, especially since you, the author, actually continued it.

A five-star recommendation from a bookworm of more than ten years. The logic is in place, the social environment is set up well, the character dialogue and emotional scenes are in place, and the protagonist's personality is also in place. After reading about 200,000 words, there is no fault at all. If it continues to be in this state, it can get a nine points.

The writing is really good, the kind that is serious, not funny, and not funny. But the author promised me not to cut it again...

A very good novel about cultivating immortals. The character and behavior of the protagonist are very consistent with the thinking and choices made by normal people under the effects of "extraction" and "sublimation" of Tao Fruit. The story develops reasonably and does not advance for the sake of advancement. I'm so happy to find such a qualified novel.

It's a very good novel, and the author's writing is very good. However, as a slow-burning novel, the protagonist builds his foundation in more than 100 chapters. The author's update frequency is still three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet, and one chapter a day cannot be guaranteed. It is not recommended for follow-up reading. At this pace, it may not be possible to become a Yuanying next year.

Mortals cultivating immortality, one generation after another, the writing of mortals cultivating immortality [face covering] is indeed very good, but I don't know how it compares to the writing style of the founder of the book, I have never seen mortals cultivating immortality. But at least now, this book has been updated and is better than other similar novels about Tomato.

The writing is very good. The world of cultivating immortals according to the laws of the dark forest, and the crystal clear system of college students in sects. The world view is very grand. Just like the picture "Along the River During the Qingming Festival", it unfolds slowly. As long as it doesn't crash, it's a masterpiece. Many other fantasy novels are extremely childish and simpler than Gong Wanwan. I have never understood how they survive in the real world until now.

It's a rare piece of Shu Xin's traditional fairy tale with logic. It's good.

It has a good look and feel, which is different from the current Shuangwen. The characters all have brains and the plot is not cliché, which is quite novel.

A good-looking article about cultivating immortality, with no major flaws.

The writing is very good, the structure is clear, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, and there are no poisonous points. It can be regarded as a very good immortal cultivation novel.

The writing is very good, and it suits my taste, but the output is a bit low, otherwise the rating would definitely exceed 9.0 [Love][Love][Love]

It is a high-quality immortality article on Tomato, but the updates are too slow.

The quality of this book is considered high among Tomatoes. It's good. I guess it'll take some time.