The Barrage Is a Carnival for Selling Sex, but I Am the Original Heroine

Finally, someone came to speak out the inner thoughts of us BG people who saw those men who were forcibly attracted to each other on the romance channel. Thank you to the author for your hard work. The author's writing style is very good. It makes people follow the plot without being dramatic at all. The heroine is very charming. I really like the attitude of the heroine. But the author, you are the only one who wants to push for more updates but is afraid that you will be poisoned by those comments and disgusting. But for the sake of my spiritual nourishment, hold on, come on and update! ! ! ! ! !

Teacher, your writing is really good, so great, so great. I hope the world will accept heterosexuality, instead of saying in every drama and novel, "The male lead and the male lead are so good together." Why do women belittle and insult their compatriots? Also, can you please reduce the number of barrages? I'm really excited about reading them. Please update me every day. I will definitely read every article [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The comment section here is just like back home, and Mo Baoshi is so cool. Although I couldn't say I liked him before, I still understand and respect bl. I just like the same gender. Now I'm a little scared. Every time I watch a romance, as long as two men are close to each other, they will automatically swipe. The new NPC is the same, "Oh my God, don't you think these two are a bit addictive?" Actually, 0 points, and those people should stop making mistakes in romance. I still don't understand why the forced brotherhood of the male protagonist and others has to be regarded as love by those people when there is a female protagonist.

It's so cool. I'm so good at writing. I found such a book late at night. It's really cool. Those who have suffered from the evil bl sister can read it. This book is so cool. The author's way of writing some fragments is also very cool. He's so good at writing.

Super good-looking, super good-looking, like it, like it! ! ! ! We need to be female! Baby girls are the best in the world! Baby girls are worthy of everyone's love! But the barrage in the early stage was really outrageous and annoying, but it was also very real because I had seen it before and it made people mad. I hope Chun Bao's love is only for myself (and those of us who love Chun Bao)! Chunbao must grow up well! The suffering given to women makes them vulnerable, so men are written to save them, so that they can regard men's love as a treasure and regard love as the meaning of life. Ahhhh, there are obviously so many important things [punch out][punch out][punch out]

This article is very exploratory. It really tells all the rotten plots of dual male protagonists currently. The heroine saves herself and also saves people who are in the same situation as herself. This article is worth reading, and the author's writing style is also more delicate and in-depth. Moreover, the world structure is large, and the novel written by the author so far is highly recommended. I recommend everyone to read this novel and not read the book reviews. I feel that the discussion in the book reviews is not a very good atmosphere. Of course, there are also good babies. The author and the good babies are both super cute.

The female Tomato channel is now either about metaphysics or cultivating immortality. The subject matter of this book is relatively new, and it also hits the pain point of a female protagonist like me who has been suffering from cancer for a long time. The author is very good at writing, making it easy to read. I look forward to the follow-up, and there will be more to come.

The world has been suffering from rotten cockroaches for a long time! ! Garlic is simply my go-to. What I like most is not only the setting of the anti-corruption cockroach in this book, but also the fact that I can really feel the love that Suan Suan has for the heroine Mo Fengchun. Xiaochun is smart, calm, and retributive. After experiencing many hardships, he remains unyielding and uses his own strength to fight for a way out. The more I watch, the more I am immersed in Xiaochun's personality charm. It is human nature that everyone loves Xiaochun. Guanliuan is also particularly good at describing the emotions and the characters' hearts, and it is sadistic but refreshing. And the writing is also very, very good. The iron-blooded female protagonist ➕ the romance girl is really good in this movie! ! I really want to thank you for taking the abuse and pressure to write this book. Come on, garlic, and protect you forever! ! !

Reading this book is like returning from a rotten and smelly cockroach nest to your own sweet-smelling bedroom. I like it here so much [blowing kisses] The teacher's writing is also very good! Always protect the best teacher!

Great, bg, we are saved. It only took me zero seconds to accept the heroine's female ghost setting. The confrontation with the male partner was also super cool. I missed the heroine and kissed her hard [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The author's portrayal of our Fengchun baby is so perfect. I like it so much. The writing is also great. Fengchun is brave enough to charge at us die-hard fans. We are standing by to see who dares to disobey Fengchun. Just slap him with a slipper. It's great, great. The author must pay attention to the fact that when he is tired, he will update two chapters. If he is sleepy, he will update two chapters. When he is hungry, he will update two chapters. Don't stop. [Sending Hearts]

It's particularly beautiful, and the writing is so right. The feeling of male ghosts and female ghosts rushing forward is very refreshing. Although each character has a big personality problem, this kind of twisted emotion is really exciting in the novel. In the end, I really felt like a cockroach for a long time. Garlic, can you give me 500 more chapters so that I can enjoy it?

It's very nice... I quite like Xiao Lin (I don't have the idea of a lover), but the dampness of my childhood sweetheart's secret pull is too right. Including Lin who was forced to follow the plot in his previous life, it's very painful to love. It reminds me of the lyrics of "The Year in a Hurry"... It's no wonder that the hickeys haven't accumulated into cocoons, and they haven't been able to emerge and become immortals even after hugging hibernation. Including crying, they can only say love Chunchun feebly. Maybe they can't resist the love they can only say in the end. The whole tone is sad, so "If the past is still worth cherishing, don't let go of the past too quickly..." This is the model of love, pain and hate. What I love is that Fengchun has spent so many years together. What I hate is the force majeure of the plot and why I can't resist. That's why I let the sharp blade pierce my chest after the first few attacks were eliminated. Maybe that sword is the Sword of Damocles that belongs to Fengchun and Xiaolin. It's unresolved. So when it finally falls, it can solve the old life and usher in a new life by killing it with one knife. Maybe I just like this one. I liked Qiuqiu in the previous book, and I just love this kind of flavor that we owe each other and we have to be disconnected. But the core of Chunbao is really powerful. Reshape yourself to win the new year. Like a seed of Grain Rain, it takes root downwards and blooms upwards in spring and spring.. We have made different choices in each parallel world. I will always love you very much.

I have found a book that resonates with me. I can get the author's thoughts. Nowadays, the market has become morbid. All the high-profile roles are concentrated on two men. I am a firm female protagonist. I really hope that more and more stories and charm will be focused on the female protagonist, and not let the female characters become more and more marginalized.

It's a very good satirical novel. Who can not be angry when seeing a man in a romance? But I originally thought this was just an article full of satire, which would only make me angry. But I didn't expect that the plot was ups and downs, full of emotions, and all the heroines were involved. It was very satisfying. Ah, I was originally angry when I saw the original barrage, but when I saw the cp that I was so upset about, I went to heaven on the spot. However, these barrage of original works do not show the psychological description of the male and female protagonists, which is such a pity! So many crazy dogs have been missed, alas [shy]

The subject matter of this book is very novel, and it also reflects some problems. It is indeed a bit too corrupt, but it is easy to attract fire and be attacked. Big boost for the writer, I hope the characters will be more delicate and full!

It's great. It's well written. The teacher is so good at writing. Some of the stinky words she wrote made me feel uncomfortable, but the writing is very true. Anyway, it's so beautiful.

It's a very different perspective. The protagonist is a silent hunter with extremely high quotient. He is truly beautiful, strong and tragic, and his unyielding life violently tears apart the path of life. There are also very different ways to choose male characters. Each male character can also gain various xp. The author is very good at writing about the tension and the inner struggle of the character. Gb rises!

The preamble is too long, the writing is very good, the plot is crazy, the setting is very 🐮🍺, it makes people feel happy to read it, such an excellent author enters China, remember the principle I gave is mainly that when No. 36 Concrete is mixed with cheese, it will spiral up into the sky and rush into the corn field to form a huge mushroom cloud. A good heroine and a good child are so generous and generous 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

It's good to watch, but I've been reading it for a long time with its bitter and sentimental content. 😎

The author is awesome! So cool! It simply expresses my thunderous feelings. In BL, women are deliberately vilified, and in BG, the heroine is reduced to a background. We can only know that the heroine is a human being, but there are various male highlights and "brotherhood" throughout the text. It's just that there are too many scenes between the two men now. They are either memories or various separate descriptions to highlight the male characters, and it even feels a bit whitewashed. There is so little description of Koharu, and it is a bit like a background board. It feels like a tool to highlight the charm of the male character. It's so strange, maybe I haven't seen enough? I'll take a look and comment again. How should I put it, after reading more than 300 chapters, there are really too few descriptions about Xiaochun. They are either barrages or stories about various male supporting characters. I can only find the shadow of Xiaochun in the stories of various male supporting characters. It's completely different from the story I expected with a female protagonist.

This is the first time I read a book written by a goddess. It's so delicious! ! ! The heroine is still strong despite suffering a series of pain and torture. Facing the desperate life, Mei Bao's bravery and desperate decision to stab her with a knife shocked me. I have been crying from the beginning to now, not only for Mei Bao's painful experience but also for her living soul. I haven't seen a character who pokes me like this in a long time. I can only say - Goddess! You are my god! , I have never eaten this type of meal, I will always follow the goddess! ! ! Also - Mo Fengchun, since the provider of the word Mo is dead, now is the time for Fengchun! ! ! Baby sister must get better and better and happier! [Love]

The barrage is too realistic and makes people have high blood pressure [laughs awkwardly] The author's mental state is also very beautiful hahahahaha

This book is amazing [crying][crying] The writing is good, and I haven't read many of this type. Some of the barrage in the book really reproduced the pseudo-human beings in reality, and I was so excited to read it, because there will really be a bg on the cheek of the rotten sister (I have been obsessed with the rotten sister for 80 years) bg is the king [cry][cry] And the character of the heroine's baby is also very interesting to me Attractiveness, I have always been exposed to the lively little sun, the charming beauties of the fishing type, and the gentle sister. I didn't expect the gloomy type to be unexpectedly very fragrant, and Chunchun's well-planned, at first glance, he is a baby with a super high IQ (yes, I am a high IQ). I support dog training, boss, you must insist on updating, boss [crying] I will follow you forever boss [crying]

The subject matter is novel, wow, finally someone has written about this feeling, and finally someone has dared to write about it. Dear Fengchun, I hope that from now on you will be in spring all the time.

I really like it. I can't like men anymore, and I finally found a great author, Da Da. Blessed are those who don't like romance mixed with corruption. Corruption is absolutely prohibited. Blessed are those who like big heroines. Dirty men will not come to the table. The heroine is calm and fierce, ice-snowy and smart. It's not a bad idea to fall into the trap. Let's take a look!

I have read Chapter 152 so far. How should I put it? What attracted me at first was Xiaochun's personal portrayal. Then I looked at it, huh? Why do male characters account for such a large proportion and take up so much space? Even if the memories are necessary for the plot, I feel like they still account for too much. I feel unspeakable discomfort, but Xiaochun is like the author's bait that attracts me to continue reading. I want to see more of Xiaochun's personal chapters. I don't want to keep eating Xiaochun's charm through the perspective of some male characters, the mood of the male character, and the past charm of the male character. I can only say that this is a very female-oriented book, and Koharu is the best at portraying the male characters at the same time. If my opinion changes after reading the entire book, I will review it again.

Let's describe the heroine more, no matter what it is, let's describe it more. Why can't we describe the heroine more in a negative tone, overtly or covertly? The first few pictures depict Chunchun very profoundly, but then the main object of the narrative suddenly changes. It always revolves around the man's heart and actions. There are various descriptions, which are a bit too much. So what was Chunchun thinking at this time? What is Chunchun planning? There are also those barrages, I really didn't expect there to be so many... And many of them are chatter, and there are also a lot of objective descriptions, which are also very procrastinating. Suddenly the plot gets lost and the system starts to explain... Or the plot is halfway through and starts talking about other things, then one chapter is finished and the next chapter goes back to the plot... These are very consuming. But this type of writing is indeed very novel, so these so-called shortcomings are also advantages in a sense. The idea is very bold and it would be better if the plot content can be well balanced. I am still grateful to the author for the late-night delicacies, and wish the author smooth sailing on his writing journey [OK]

After thinking about it, I decided to rate it. Three stars for Fengchun and one star for what the author wanted to express. Overall, it is a book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Advantages 1. The heroine has a good design, she is very subjective, she is not the type to be manipulated by others, and her positioning is also very clear. 2. The dampness smell is relatively pure, the contrast is sufficient, and the plot is more reasonable. 3. The dishes for the male protagonists are not obviously homogenous, but they still make relatively clear distinctions. Disadvantages 1. The rhythm is not good, and the writing is not smooth. It looks very tiring. I feel that the author did not realize that when writing, the language burden became more and more, and finally it became like this. Especially the description of the opponent's scene is too complicated. I have to jump to read every time it appears, and there is a lot of useless information. 2. Although the character design is clear, there is no writing support for what I want to express. For example, I can't feel that Pei is a high-ranking and smart person, and Cheng I can't feel the way he writes on the character design. 3. In the early stage, the psychology of the ex-husband and his sweetheart was actually pretty good, especially the part where the ex-husband had a strong feeling when he dreamed about his past life, which should be the author's comfort zone. However, this advantage was completely lost later on. The ex-husband seemed too arrogant and had a bad look. This problem is more or less the same in the later chapters. Too much emphasis on character characteristics will lose the deliciousness. Generally speaking, I can feel what the author wants to express. The heroine design is also very delicious, but it is a pity that the writing cannot reflect it. I am too tired to read it, no matter how good the ideas and characters are, I can't watch it. If you can accept the above, you can read it.

The pros and cons are pretty much the same, so I think it's okay after reading it overall. Let's talk about the advantages first. The characterization is very good and the personality is very distinct, especially the protagonist. The two points of locating and killing people at the beginning established this character. I like it. There is no deliberate attempt to beautify any party, even the protagonist shows her gloomy and paranoid nature, and the tangled and contradictory psychological descriptions reveal the underlying charm of each character. The character's behavior is logically self-consistent and well-organized. The shortcoming is that there is too much writing, too much interpretation of the characters and plots through the mouth of the system, and the effective information is shockingly low. This problem is quite common. Many writers like to write down their own thoughts and logic in their articles, but this is something that writers who are not capable of writing bold plots can do. There is no need to explain to readers how exquisitely designed the plot is, and don't chew up your own thoughts and feed them to readers. Some parts have already written quite expressive scenes, so don't deconstruct them anymore. This is no different from saying it again. It is all invalid information output and talking about Cheluluo. You must believe that you have condensed your thoughts into the plot, and be more confident in your writing power. It always gives me a sense of déjà vu like a high school argumentative essay [laughs awkwardly]

Like a good book like chocolate, it tastes sweet to humans but will kill dogs if they eat it. If someone calls me, I will protect the author [laughs]