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The first copy is quite nice. The second copy felt like the main line was unclear. I don't know what he did to get into the second copy. Is it just to kill time? There was no communication with the ghost cubs either. There was no communication with the teacher. I was confused, and then I entered the dungeon. The protagonist's current identity is a strange cub. I wonder what the protagonist wants to do in this copy? Speaking of bad taste, I don't see the main character having any fun pretending to be a player. In order to improve his strength, I didn't see him enforcing his own rules. The protagonist has not even figured out his own rules until now. Well, it stands to reason that the second dungeon should be about slowly figuring out the rules of the protagonist that were not explained in the first dungeon, instead of just talking about this in more than a dozen chapters. A boring game of house. People watching are very anxious. Originally, I was still very interested and motivated to read it because of the first dungeon and its settings, but then my senses plummeted after the second dungeon. I decided to keep it up again, and when the second copy is completed, I will take a look at it again. I have been looking for a meal replacement for this type of food some time ago, and finally found one. Come on!

It's quite interesting to watch so far, and the player's personality traits are also quite distinct, without the feeling of being templated or having no personality similar to game NPCs. Some are smart and some are stupid. Then, the scene dialogue between Weird and the player in the similar books I read is more like the traditional rules of Weird Talk, except that the perspective is Weird's and not the player's.

The author feels like a newcomer to me, and some of the writing is a little awkward, but overall it's good, keep up the good work! [Shy]

Looks good! The world view is complete, the logic is good, and the pace is not laggy. Big cheers for the author!