Siheyuan: Collecting Negative Emotions and Making the Birds Cry

The timeline is a bit confusing! The character setting is not quite right either. Didn't Jia Dongxu enter the steel rolling mill in the past five years? Then he took Yi Zhonghai as his disciple. How come it has been sixty years and three years have passed since the disaster? Jia Dongxu has not yet entered the factory and is already Yi Tianzun's apprentice? Is Yi Tianzun still working at the eighth level? And it's not about Jia Dongxu's revenge. It's been more than thirty chapters and it's still those bullshit things. Even Jia Dongxu broke a finger! I was looking forward to it for a while, but this is it, it's not that exciting! Not rigorous

Conventional wisdom-reducing pulling articles. Quite a time traveler like a fairy. Someone wants to kill me? It's okay, watch me passively fight back and give him a massage. Don't call the police, don't hurt anyone, just talk and ask for money Oh, it's so hurtful. Jia Dongxu, who was destined to die, died in the hands of the protagonist again.

The timeline is confusing, the characters are outwitted, the pig's feet are useless, and the unlucky talisman is used to torture the birds 🤮🤮🤮

Is this timeline too confusing?

The timeline is messed up, and key identification of the plot is awkward.

Except for the confusing timeline, everything else is fine

Chapter 23 Rain is wearing a down jacket? Author, are you serious?

One word, messy, scattered