Elf World: My Collection Illustrated Book

Very good, Luo Guang is like a little sun, shining on his teammates. The two teammates may have a little awkward personalities, but they can still sit down and talk after encountering setbacks. There is no intrigue, it is warm and healing, and it is very comfortable to watch. Let me add a comment. I feel that I am too restricted by system tasks. Whether it is because the task is to destroy other people's relationships, or because the task is to get involved in the leader-level game, just do it when the task is issued. The previous illustration system feels like it has become a mission system. I didn't unlock the illustrated book very much, but I did a lot of trouble-making tasks. Ever since I left school, I feel like I have started to participate in all kinds of intrigues. First, there were overt and covert fights in various war zones, and then there were secret games between multiple cults. The key protagonist was just a junior Karami who didn't have the strength yet.

Take a look at the comments and tell me some personal pros and cons. The advantage is that the daily descriptions are very natural, and the early stage mainly focuses on the protagonist's ability improvement and daily life. It can be regarded as a genius flow. The system accelerates the ability to redeem, rather than directly instilling it, and there is a process of action. The disadvantage is that some people think that the protagonist is led by the system, assigned a task to gain points, and makes someone angry at will, eh? As the teacher's best friend, I actually find it quite interesting. The author set up such a task through the system, and I enjoyed it very much. On the contrary, it is a small advantage, because the main line is clear, which is the characteristic of system flow. If you don't want to read system flow, just read mortal flow or novels without system.

It's pretty good, but the first few panels are a bit messy, but the rest are okay. How can I put it? After reading more than a hundred photos, I feel that the five-star rating is too early. After joining the military region, my level has continued to decline. First, I had all kinds of troubles for no reason, and then I was used by a big-headed soldier to use a senior intellectual as a death squad hero. At the age of 14, it was fine that the country did not protect him, but he was used as a death squad. He was asked to do all kinds of dangerous things by himself, and he was asked to check himself when he discovered the danger. I really don't understand

The writing style is unexpectedly appropriate to the world of elves. This is a novel that needs to be read with calmness and patience. It is incompatible with Tomato Short Ping Kuai. After refining the writing style and climax points, I feel that I can go to the starting point to preach. To be honest, the two official mission plots are not good-looking. They are equivalent to a natural and harmonious painting style. The sudden insertion of Iron-Blooded Call of Duty seems very fragmented! The elves themselves represent freedom, harmonious life, and a strong sense of mission, as if falling into the apocalypse to survive. It is recommended to reduce the military plot in the future and strengthen the invention of evolutionary potions and daily life stories. The two official plots are basically skipped. It cannot lead the development of official forces and cannot turn the tide. It is really useless. In those sensational plots, the protagonist can't do anything, which not only seems incompetent, but even more unpleasant! It gradually became clichéd later on, with a bunch of vests, a bunch of titles of savior and disaster star.

The writing is smooth and worth reading, and the number of words is enough. The descriptions of the elf, apprentice and daughter are very cute. I personally feel that the interaction with the heroine is less, and there is less interaction in the early and middle stages. Besides, there is no need to read the last few chapters. The ending of this book is biased toward a dream ending. Although it takes into account everyone's wishes and reunion, I still recommend not to read the last few pictures. There are two points that can be used as the end of the book. The first point is when they enter a new world and a new era, and the second point is before they obtain all the gods and become the creation gods. Overall, this is a nice book. In terms of attributes, it is elves, different worlds, systems, multiple female protagonists in the later stage, semi-invincible, and by the way, part of the plot has about a dozen chapters (the full text has more than 1,000 chapters). There is content about women's vests, which can be adjusted to taste, or you can just ignore it. Looking forward to the author's new book.

Overall, it's okay, but the emotional scenes are uncomfortable to watch, especially when the system makes the male protagonist and his teacher's best friend jealous. It looks like it's forced by the system. If the emotional scenes were deleted, it would still be a very good novel.

Yes, it just weakens the presence of many elves. It feels like a supreme founding career fantasy life story covered in elf writing? ? Hmm... Not sure, but it deserves four stars, well written, keep up the good work [I understand][I understand]

This is a plot-oriented novel. The author's level of writing does not seem like a novice's, but an experienced one, so the quality is guaranteed and you can watch it. As for the howls of some unknown creatures that don't look like humans, just ignore them.

It's super good-looking. The protagonist is talented and systematic, but he is also very hardworking. The more I look at it, the more boring it becomes.

Is it really not possible to have CP? It looks good, but I prefer the interaction with pets and partners. If there is CP, it looks weird, which is a pity, but I can only abandon it [almost crying]

My family is poor, but not so poor that I can't afford a name. My brother's name is Guang, and my sister's name is Xiaoguang.

A rare piece of original elf writing. Although the settings are different from Pokemon, the core is basically the same. Watching this you can feel the same feeling as when you were a kid watching Pokemon. It would be even better if this novel could be adapted into an anime one day.

Like like like! Cool point, well designed! Although it hasn't involved pet battles yet, the two teammates are really cute☺️The protagonist is also a straightforward little sunshine! Author, we love you! Faster and faster!

After reading online articles for more than ten years, this is the first time I see a protagonist betraying a country with Eastern culture and seeking refuge in a country with Western culture.

This is the pet article I want to read [Like][Like][Blow a kiss] Personally, I feel that the second chapter of this lord story is not very good. I glanced at the back of the table of contents and it seems that it is okay. Let's see how the author handles it [I'm about to cry] The second chapter is also very nice. Maybe it's because the span between the first and second chapters is a bit too big, which made me a little bored. I savored the second chapter carefully. It's really a masterpiece [Shy][Admiration][Blowing Kisses]

Overall, the writing is pretty good, a light and interesting daily-oriented coming-of-age novel. The main character's physique routinely triggers major events when receiving tasks. Those who like to see decisive killings, exciting battles of wits, and flow of data analysis may be disappointed. There are currently less than 300 chapters and no relevant elements have been seen. I can't say it's particularly good, but it's not too bad either. It's just that I started a bit early and the system is very helpful. The current rating is a bit low. I'd like to give it a full score to help stabilize it and see if there is any development potential.

The character I wrote is wrong. The protagonist is a character with great personality and a very good person. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It is a pet novel worth reading, but for the time being, it is based on the improvement of the protagonist. There is less content about pet improvement, and it may feel a bit unrealistic. However, the content of the description is quite interesting. Worth a look.

Not bad, but the author is a bad namer. If you really don't know how to name, why not use AI to name it [making a face]

I love watching it, especially the main character. However, I feel that this book is a little off topic. Now the main description is on the protagonist and his teammates, and there is not much description about elf pets or anything else.

The content is very nice, but there are several chapters missing in the middle. I can't find them. Is there a coherent chapter? Or can you post a coherent chapter name? I'll look through the chapter names one by one @

The writing is beautiful, it's more everyday and there's no intrigue. It's so comfortable.

It's really good to read. I thought it was Pokémon when I saw the title at first. It's actually a beast-control novel, I like it very much

It was fine in the early stage, but in the later stage it felt like it had nothing to do with beast control. Well, I mean there was no such thing as communicating emotions.

Maybe it's the title of the book? It's a very good book, but not many people have discovered it.

It's good to read, but unfortunately I found out too early that it's not enough to read, so I can only keep reading.

It's quite nice, if only it wasn't a harem story.

It's a little slow in the early stages, but overall it's still pretty cool.

I haven't seen something like this for a long time, it's beautiful😋

It's so pretty To be honest, this book is actually quite amazing to me. The friendship between the three little animals, the reflection of reality, and the grand world view are very attractive to me. I feel that this book can actually be written for a long, long time. It is now 700,000 words, but the exploration of the world view route is still in the early stages.