Pony************

The writing is quite good. The protagonist is simply a supporting character, Pony Bulldozer. On the contrary, M6's favorability is not as high as that of the supporting character. However, I am looking forward to Shura Field in the future [laughs crookedly]. However, I feel that the rhythm of the plot can be refined and refined. Many places do not need to be written in such detail. They can be summed up afterwards. In short, this is a good Pony fanfic, and it is worth recommending!

I thought it was pretty good after watching it. The only twist is that the protagonist is a bit "awkward" (I know m6's character but I am worried that I will be hated by them because of the secret of my body). You must know that leaving hidden dangers is much more serious than being hated. What should I do if the pony is hurt? So the logic is a bit strange (hiding obvious threats for the sake of stability). However, I think the rating is on the low side (it feels like it should be at least 8 points), because too few people have watched it. But I like this book very much, good luck to the author!

It's a standard drama-like fanfiction. If you look closely at the whole story, you can see that the author was probably inspired by other works. There are too many things he wants to write, and the blending and transition are a bit difficult. For example, in political writing, too much space is used to describe some unimportant scenes and preparations, which makes it a bit boring to read too much. You can briefly mention it in one stroke or write more details, but it is still okay to intersperse and add emotional lines. Of course, this pair of new authors is very good. It can also be seen that the authors have read the fanfics of F Station and Tomato. The writing has a certain style of F Station and Tomato. Usually, the articles on F Station are more serious. I still like this kind of fusion. Keep up the good work.

It's pretty cool. Come on. There is a question. Every time the protagonist solves a crisis, does it weaken Yami? If not, wouldn't Yami have no concern when doing things? After all, it has no impact on myself. (By the way, has the author considered expanding the world in the future? For example, the world of the Fallout Pony series?)

Personal review: It looks good, but maybe there are some typos? Forget it, I hope this book ends! [Blowing kiss] There are fewer and fewer books to read recently. I hope the author can update a few more chapters! Then it will be over, right @lovablelittlepony? OO

Kougua! Don't die, the author is great. You are one of the authorities on Xiao Ma's books on my bookshelf. Don't give up just yet [crying] [crying] [crying]

I approve you, let's see, how many are there?

Another good book, please give it a thumbs up to the author. I want to read Shura Field [laughing]

It's beautiful. If you want to watch it, you have to watch the blood flow like a river.

It's good to read. The pace of the whole book and the portrayal of the pony are quite good.

A very good My Little Pony fanfic, one of the best among the My Little Pony fanfics I have read.

Very pretty. I just hope that the anchor can interact more with m6 and the two princesses. The supporting characters now interact more. Decided to raise one. Come on, author! Wow, I see there are so many plots with supporting characters. M6 almost didn't appear. There were only three princesses and a little scene, and the rest were all supporting roles. The relationship is quite good, but it's not suitable for me. If you don't want to watch the protagonist, you can watch it. I hope the author writes better and better

As a harem pony flow, the writing is still great.

A little more brutal, I want to watch Pony 40k

Good news, but why are you like [what]

Is there no other way, author?

Very well written, keep it up＾0＾~

Come on, take a good rest too

Not bad, I like it very much

Does the author have a female protagonist? If so, is it one or more?

It looks great. When will we arrive at Shura Field?

There is a bit too much political drama, I hope there will be less in the future. It feels like this book is written with politics as the main focus and around politics. [Thinking] If that's true, then that's my problem. I can't read this book.

It's pretty cool, I hope I can stick with it

You are the author with the richest emotional lines and the most abundant themes in Xiao Ma's novels that I have ever seen. You must give it a five-star rating. If I can hold on to more than 200 pictures, I will give the author a big brush.

The author writes very well, I really like reading it! Just hope for more updates! In fact, the author, if you maintain this quality and update more, you will have more opportunities to recommend, and the number of people will increase! Anyway, cheers for the author, I love reading it anyway and support you [please read carefully]

It's a pity that I'm in a dark room. When the author writes those plots next time, if it is easy to get blocked, you can actually take a screenshot and send it to the final comment area. At least it will not be easily slapped by the review and readers can rest assured. If the author does not open a second book, it will connect the plot of the first one [Please update] [Add one to the bookshelf]

Love watching Save the World

I hope I can bring Xiaodie with me [laughing evilly]

It's so beautiful. I hope the author can give me a happy ending.

It's pretty, I just hope the heroine is Twilight