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Another good pony book. Why are all the good pony books in Modo written by high school students?

I have just finished reading the second volume. To be honest, although the author's writing is very good, it is a bit uncomfortable to read. The author's previous emotional descriptions are too good. Although I know that there will be a plot of the nightmare horse turning back into Luna, it is still difficult to accept it after seeing it. Unlike the nightmares in other fandoms that only focus on banishing the universe to the moon and turning the world into eternal night after returning, this nightmare and the protagonist have intentions to manage, and really treat themselves as normal rulers. Both of them are trying to do their best, and there is no excessive behavior, even when dealing with rebels. But what is the result? Let's not talk about the fate of m6. After all, it is destiny, but the universe princess has always been silently controlling the overall situation. She is enjoying life while the protagonist is working hard, and has arranged everything for the protagonist and his sister. The whole process gives people the feeling that if you struggle casually, the result will be the same anyway, making the protagonist's efforts seem so insignificant. The most unacceptable thing is the part in the hospital where Luna told the protagonist to let go. I insist that the person who accompanied the protagonist on the moon for 1,000 years was the ambitious, arrogant but gentle nightmare, not the Luna who returned to her sister's arms. She said she had let go. For her, it was very happy to return to her sister's arms. It was also good for the ponies to have another princess, but what about the protagonist? He lost everything, the goal of his struggle, the object of his longing. Everything in these 1,000 years seemed to be meaningless. He still had to return to Ponyville, follow the orders of the Space Princess to take care of the M6 that destroyed everything about him, and at the same time, he had to walk in the name of a villain in front of other ponies. Anyway, this is the only plot that I feel uncomfortable with so far except for the novels of Sun Corona and Bai Ju. If it were me, I would either choose to leave all this and fly away, or I would find a way to increase my power (such as borrowing the special weapon of King Comet Duo from next door) to usher in lightning-fast revenge.

Uh, did the author forget about Ye Qi? I feel that Ye Qi is an important force supporting Luna. Well, I read that there are several fans who are worthy of winning over if they want to rebel against the eldest princess or carry out reforms. Because as a subordinate of Luna, the year before Luna was exiled, she was ostracized due to various reasons.

The characters are very realistic. This book feels even less long. It can be seen that the whole book is written around Princess Luna, but she is about to get married before she is even fifty years old. This obviously reduces the main plot to a certain extent, and it can only be written about daily life if it is longer. If possible, I would like to see this book expanded to more than 400 chapters.

Good. The writing and plot are very good, especially the plot, and there are very few CPs that are Luna. Most people are attracted by this, but very few people can be retained. I have read Little Marven for so many years. You are the only one who makes me feel very beautiful. The last one that looked so beautiful was Beihai. I feel poisonous even when I draw the stars.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Different from other fan fiction, the characters in it will be different, but generally they will not deviate from the characters in the animation. This allows me to separate it from other fanfics in my memories and avoid them being lumped together. But it just feels like the main line is a bit unclear. Whether the main line is a love story with the Moon Princess or a friendship story with M6 remains to be discussed.

I finished reading it. To be honest, I originally read it for the cp with Nightmare Moon, but later I found that there was actually very little interaction. This book is more like the protagonist's exploration of his own existence. After thousands of years of early planning, she was finally awakened by a cannon shot from the Rainbow Cannon. This was actually not bad, after all, Sunset Shimmer cried bitterly after being shot by a cannon. In the mid-term, I lost my ambition. After all, Nightmare Moon had disappeared by this time, and I began to gradually find out why I should exist. In the middle and later stages, especially from the end of Queen Chrysalis, it feels like it has obviously sped up and a lot of the plot has been advanced. Interspersed with discussions of desire and life, the style begins to become heavy and depressing, which is really uncomfortable to watch. Finally, to summarize, the book is a good book, but the background of this book is ponies. If I had to do it again, I would definitely not read this book.

Tsk, so how does the author want to deal with the Luna/Nightmare Moon problem? If it is not handled well, it feels like Nightmare Moon is used as a springboard, and it may also become a poisonous point in the future.

The titles of the first few chapters are obviously Yinfu style, I like it very much, and the logic of the article is also online. In addition, my first criterion for accepting Xiao Ma's novel is that it is not time-travel, and there are no OOC characters so far. In order to encourage the author to persevere, I will increase the rating and give it a five-star rating.

It's quite interesting. I hope there will be more emotional lines in the follow-up. Also, the protagonist should not change so quickly. After so long, the character has been almost finalized. Don't be like someone who was brainwashed and suddenly loves friendship or something.

After reading a small chapter, I still feel very good about this book. I do know that the protagonist seems to be paired with Twilight Joy (probably), but I have to say that the opinions of many book friends are also very correct. The protagonist seems to be more compatible with Princess Luna. Other than that, I don't have any other opinions. I want to know more. I just read the previous few chapters. Chapter, I found that the protagonist seems to have jumped from a child to a thoughtful and ruthless adult (of course, it may be the emptiness of his soul on the moon that caused him to become like this). I would like to ask the author what will become of the protagonist after he is cleansed? By what means did he clear his name? Do you think your way of whitewashing is reasonable?

Not to mention pretty. The subject matter is novel. Smooth writing

It's pretty good, but author, you have to consider that some people read Chinese translations and still like names like Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle. To be honest, when Twilight Sparkle suddenly popped up, I wanted to know who this was [face covering]

To be honest, I originally read this book for contemporary dining [laughs awkwardly] But when I read it, I found that the more I read the story, the better it gets. It is very original and interesting, especially the emotional portrayal is very delicate. It is a great book, highly recommended! !

The writing is really great, the setting is great, and the protagonist's character is logically logical. I feel that the main selling point of this book is the protagonist's personality changes and Luna's emotional line [Thoughts] I feel like it's not as good as before. The protagonist's character has changed a bit strangely, which is just weird. Come on, author.

I want to read sweet articles! I want some candy! ! ! !

Give me more, I can do anything😭🤲

To be honest, this book is sometimes boring to read, but especially when you read it carefully online, you will find that it is lively and interesting. The interaction between the protagonist and various ponies is very interesting. However, I am not highly educated and don't have good words to describe it. It's just that the protagonist's early emotional scenes are relatively rubbish, huh, well, there are no contradictions. Wrong, things always go in the opposite direction. Let's get back to the topic. This book is very interesting to read in your spare time, especially the battle process between them in Disprologue. That adventure is very interesting and I actually like Teacher Cheerilee. His interaction with the protagonist's friends is quite real.

Beautiful, you are my everything and I am your only one

Conquer the Moon Princess. I'm weird, weird, weird, awkward, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent.

A great pony fan, very engaging.

It's a super, super, good story about Xiao Ma, with novel themes. The more you read it, the more addictive it becomes. [Laughs] Each character is pretty consistent with the original work. [Blowing Kiss] Highly recommended.

After reading it in one sitting, the author has his own ideas and does not follow the plot step by step. Moreover, the emotional description of the characters is also delicate enough, and it has the potential to become a good book.

Sit down, is this a single heroine or multiple heroines? Judging from the current situation, well, it should be a single female protagonist

Very good, I'm looking forward to the story of the protagonist and the princess in the sequel

Give me more quickly! ! Long live Luna's teachings! I already have an idea, thank you ヾ^_^♪

Yes, among the many My Little Ponies I have seen, this one should be considered the best. The various plots are also gradual and do not feel abrupt.

It's a pretty good fanfic, but these pony fanfics don't have enough words. But I am optimistic about you, author, and I have to support you because of your daily update volume of 6,000 words.

Great writing! There are a large number of original plots in the article that are reasonable and not obtrusive, and these plots can well correspond to the details of the original work. Many details from the middle and later stages of the original work are also revealed in the early stage. Although novelty and cliché coexist when writing, in the end they all serve the development of the story well. Sometimes the other elements of the crossover are also very thoughtful, and when the prototype is revealed, it makes people smile without feeling too boring. But sometimes the pace of the plot is a bit slow, and it can be understood that this is because the main plot and branch plots intersect or even progress in parallel. When showing plots in parallel, although it can be clearly judged from the context, it is still hoped that the author will use dividing lines or other transition text to mark when switching perspectives. (Although it may increase the task volume and be detrimental to listening readers) Generally speaking, the layout of the full text is relatively reasonable, and each volume also has its own main content. It is a Pony fan work that has been carefully polished by the author. Looking forward to the follow-up content.

The author's writing is really good~, or in other words, everyone who writes Xiaoma's articles is very good~ This Tomato is simply inferior, on other platforms eh~ In short, the author's writing style is really good, the psychological description of the characters is also very good, and the plot arrangement is also very reasonable.