Traveling Through Pirates, I Can Have Seven Abilities

Should I kill Ace in the top war, and let Whitebeard meet the little humans in Chapter 259? Is he asking the little humans to treat him?

Grab the door fruit. I have read a book before where you can create an invisible door surrounding yourself. When you open the door around the enemy, especially the lower three lanes, any attack that hits the door will attack others. This is awesome.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. As a short film about pirates, it is quite good. There is no problem with the logic and there is nothing wrong with the plot. (It is a pity that Robin and the Empress were confirmed at the end, and there is no emotional content in the whole book.) I finished reading it in two days. What I am most concerned about is 1. There are no Straw Hats scenes. The opening of the finale has something to do with the Straw Hats, but not much. 2. The devil fruits and strength of the protagonist group are well written, but the values ​​expand a bit quickly (also a limitation of the short film). There are two places where the combat strength will jump. 3. There is a place in the middle that says "Control Caesar", but I didn't mention it later or go to the technology tree. I don't know if the author forgot it or something. 4. Every time there is a team battle, the author will write down who the characters of each protagonist group fight with, how to fight, and what the result is. It is a micro-group portrait. 5. When it comes to the ending, it feels like a fatal rhythm has been triggered and the writing is getting faster and faster, but it can be considered a stable ending with no unfinished chapters or interruptions. In summary, if you have no objection to group portraits, you can take a look at it. There is nothing bad about it, but there is nothing outstanding about it either.

The setting is very good, most of the members of the Evil Generation are gathered together, and the second set of devil fruits are also very good, and it can be regarded as a group portrait. The characters are relatively full-bodied. However, the plot development and combat power system are a bit unreasonable and difficult to reconcile in my opinion. But the flaws do not hide the good points, and it is a rare and beautiful work. [Laugh]

Protagonist Oster Kutcher Seven Stars (Quick Slash, Ghost, Fortress, Thunder, Piao Piao, Artificial Blue Dragon, Darkness) The Evil Generation Pirates (1. Kutcher (Five Emperors) 2. Rob Lucci Animal type leopard form ability, and a magical pigeon 3. Hawkins is 25 years old, Superman type straw fruit 4. Drake Animal type fantasy beast species·Dragon Fruit·Fire Dragon form 5. Pazeru Natural forest fruit, 6. Kidd, Superman type magnetic fruit 7. Trafalgarro, Superman type surgery fruit 8. Kira, phantom beast species·rat fruit, sickle and weasel form 9. Crowe phantom species, cat fruit, cat and cat form 10. Akin, superman type strength fruit 11. Robin, superhuman type flower fruit 12. Drew Yanaka, the strongest defense barrier fruit of superhuman type 13. Kuina 14. Bebo Fur Tribe 15. Shaqi 16. Pekin 17. Zoro 18. Yixiao Superhuman Type· Heavy Fruit 19. Tama 20. Garrot 21. Nami 21. Empress Hancock Sweet Fruit 22. Ice Wolf Yamato Dog Fruit· Phantom Beast Species· Big Mouth True God Form) Finally, the New Government and the Balance of the Five Emperors' Territory

To be honest, it's not that good, but I'm afraid you won't update it. Keep updating, you deserve four stars. After all, the unit price of fanfiction is very low, and many of you are doing it for love.

Time Travel·One Piece·Seven Stars·Seven Devil Fruits The protagonist of Time Travel Pirates is rescued by Robin, and then begins the story of becoming stronger and adventuring together. Chapter 30 The protagonist's IQ is online most of the time, and his attacks are relatively simple. A little bit poisonous, but not much impact An above-average fan, worth a look

I have to say, this is a perfect piece of pirate writing. It has been tested for poison and is rated as non-toxic and edible.

I've finished reading it, it's very good, gathering together the extremely evil generation (when they were young) can change the original history, haha,? The protagonist becomes emperor before Luffy even grows up! Even the ancient ruins were taken away! I am, I am, they are all Aodi! At the end, poor Luffy is still being beaten, haha, the truth has changed! It used to be that Im (alien) and Joey Boy (native) fought for power, and Joey Boy lost! It's up to the latecomers to come first! This is a pure fight between snipe and clam, and the fisherman wins. Originally Pluto, Ocean, and Uranus were one whole! They are separated here and fight against each other!

Don't mess up, write it well, it's pretty good

@ Amazon river just started to cheer Nico Robin's flower fruit can grow hands, eyes, and ears, which can completely achieve the effect of changing the face, which is similar to putting a human skin mask on the face. This is a lot more convenient, a little development tip [laughing awkwardly] What's up with this rating? @Amazonriver

Who else can remember this once most glorious archaeological holy place in the future, and who can remember the omniscient tree that recorded the most knowledge? After arguing for his hometown angrily in his mind, Robin secretly turned over with a hint of rebellion and took out a pen to mark O'Hara on the map. If you want to completely erase O'Hara, I must let her continue to leave traces! Very true and in line with the scholars who were destroyed

Damn it, this book is okay. I found that as long as it's not the time when I went to sea with Wang Lufei, the timeline is no more than ten years. After all, Wang Lufei has been training for more than ten years. If the protagonist just passed by, he would still be an ordinary person.

There are definitely some shortcomings, but for me it's okay. I can read the latest chapters. There aren't many good books about Pirates. I'd like to give you five stars to encourage you.

The author writes well and it's very interesting.

Gather Lucci, Basas, Ajin, my loyal brother, give them powerful phantom beasts, Zoro, Nami, and the black-bearded gunman, awaken and beat Luffy,

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad. Check it out in Shuhuang Uh-huh, snatched Perona's fruit. . .

Is the author recruiting Enirou Van Okarafic?

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Come on, come on, come on, come on

So far, the plot and everything are okay. It's considered a pretty good fan work. I'll give you a five-star reward. I'll try to update 20 times a day [please take a closer look].

Five stars for you, come on It's not easy to create. There are a lot of fan fiction writers that are pretty good, but they can't keep going without traffic [face covering]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Not bad, good cheers, author,

Beautiful and well written

Good, good, good, good

It looks good, support it

Chapter 14 The biggest cheat appeared a little late

I still miss the past, but I no longer miss it