[Multiple heroines] [System] [Redemption] [The Lord of Dreams' Road to Godhood] [Clear Logic]
Traveling to the world of Mita, I met the strongest existence in this world - Crazy Mita.
But unexpectedly, her madness turned into a soft touch for me, and she even wanted to get married to me.
However, wedding bells are also the countdown to the end. A shadow called "He", fighting with the old and new versions, has brought our world to the brink of collapse. The only way to survive is to enter the cold and ruthless "new version".
"I want to protect not only her, but also them."
With the [Two Worlds Shuttler] system, I came to their dreams: meeting the kind-hearted Mita in the rain, accompanying the hat Mita in the King's Game, going to the snowfield to find the lost little Mita... I saved each of them who were broken, but also made their hearts sink for me.
When they faced her at the critical moment of life and death, I realized belatedly that this gentle adventure could no longer end.
Reader comments
The following is a personal evaluation and analysis of this book, which is subjective. Please read with caution if necessary:
The old rule is to evaluate this book from four aspects: character, plot description, foreshadowing, and update speed.
Characters: The control is just right. There is no deviation from the original work, but it also greatly enriches the characters' personal personalities. The interaction between the characters is also controlled very accurately, and there is no situation where the characters are completely different. Of course, this is not the point. The point is to continuously shape the character of the character in a long novel without making any mistakes. If we want to compare, only the Mirai Diary has more exciting characters than this one, and the other Tomatoes basically have none.
Plot description: To be honest, I have never seen a book on Tomato with a more ups and downs plot than this Mita fanfic. Other Mita fans follow the main line, and at most there are little interludes and stories along the way. Look at this book, what do you mean there are more than 40 chapters in a short story? The problem is that he can smoothly carry out the plot after the end of the short story, so that readers don't feel a little uncomfortable. The control of the plot is simply not something humans have. Also, where did you get so many magical adventure stories? This completely avoids the reader's feeling of weakness in the later stages. The beginning of every story is the climax of the plot. The plot is absolutely wonderful and must be worked hard!
Foreshadowing control: Let me give you an example. I currently understand three types of the title "Walker of Two Worlds": the old Mita world and the new Mita world, the dream world and the Mita world, and the Mita world and the real world. There will be more foreshadowing in the middle, but I won't say it for fear of spoilers. From this example, it can be seen that the foreshadowing is definitely controlled in this area. If you want to watch a battle of wits, you can read this book (
Update speed: two updates a day, which is definitely enough (눈_눈). Also, this is probably the most word-counted Tomato Mita fanfic at the moment. I haven't finished reading it for almost a month. It's definitely because I'm full of it. If you are short on books, you can read this book, it's really good \(//∇//)\
A few extra words: The author's dream story: "Tea·Flower·Painting"
How can I put it, this chapter gave me a completely different feeling from other Mita novels. The narrative is compact and the plot is coherent. It almost doesn't seem to be self-created, but like the original main line of miside. The whole big chapter perfectly depicts the personality traits of several characters. Needless to say, honey, the portrayal so far has been very complete [laughing]. The most important thing is the portrayal of the human-machine protagonist. Unlike other protagonists, the author is very successful in this chapter. It successfully narrates the psychological changes of the protagonist. People have peak periods and trough periods. This is something that other novels usually don't notice and don't describe. But our dear author not only noticed it, but also successfully made up for this shortcoming. This is high-quality Mita novels! [Cry][cry][cry]
I've been watching it for a few days, so let me share my opinion. The author added many of his own ideas based on Mita, and the novel settings and interesting innovations better enriched the story. Using "dream" as the medium, different types of novels are created based on Mita, showing the author's rich inner world and bold thinking creation. The description is appropriate and various techniques are used reasonably to show the author's richer Mita world. I think the description of the stalks is quite excellent. Its frequency and description have grasped the degree, and it is neither frequent and cumbersome nor boring. Although some of the characters are slightly inconsistent with the original work, it doesn't matter. The author himself is also active in the comment area, which is full of emotional value. This is a Mita fan novel that I highly recommend. Come on, author, I will keep following it [Like]
There are not many Mita novels that I can watch for a while without getting tired of them, and the life ahead is not boring at all, it is very interesting and highly recommended.
Even though it has the most words among Mita's fans, it still has no rating. Anyway, I enjoyed seeing it, so I will give you a five-star review (≧∇≦)
You give it to Ruda, latecomers hope that I can pin it to the top.
Not much else to say, just two words, a masterpiece! !
It can only be said that Mita's enthusiasm is low. Let's wait for the resurrection match.
Good looking: but why are there so few comments?
Tian Qiming is a character
A score of 8.9 Or above means that the unpopularity of the Mita circle has turned you from a famous painting into a treasure. The transition between dreams and reality is a bit stiff. Watching it for the first time may make you feel like "I missed a few episodes of the show I follow every week."
Sioux City is the highest and largest mountain in Tomato Mita fanfiction, and Tianqi Ming is the longest and farthest river in Tomato Mita fanfiction 👍
That's great. It's a rare thing. We can save it.
It's so perfect. It's not written by AI but by real people. What the author wrote is really good. It's a pity that the circle is too niche. Come on, author.
Very interesting and not boring
You never have enough of the author's books. Each chapter is longer than the last. One meter in the first part is divided into ten chapters, but in the next forty or fifty chapters it is not enough. How much foreshadowing has the author buried? How far can you see? By the way, I would like to ask, how many days does it usually take to update a chapter? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Quite a novel story
Come on author, it's great
Help Mita authors
Please keep updating the author. It is really one of the few high-quality works.
I have read many Mita novels, and most of them follow the original plot, but the ending is slightly different. This one is really different. I really admire the author's imagination. How he wrote more than 500 chapters and is no longer limited to the original plot really shines.
The most words I have ever seen
Not bad, good looking\(//∇//)\
Nice! (Detailed book reviews will be added later.)
The rare first-person perspective is more immersive (especially for someone like me who likes to listen to books before going to bed). At the same time, the world view is obviously more ambitious than other fan fictions, adding many interesting settings and details. The story scenes are no longer limited to Mita's world shown in the original work. There are many wider maps such as beaches, deserts, snowy mountains, modern cities, etc., And many new characters such as beaches and deserts have been added (but the relevant personal stories are a bit less). Crazy Mita is more humane and vivid than the original work. In summary, this is an excellent Mita novel that is both innovative and interesting, and the author's descriptions are also very detailed and attentive. Mita's popularity is really not rising now, but he can squat in peace mode. At that time, Mita's popularity should still be rising for a while, and some people will read related second creations and novels.
Very nice new Mita book,
Isn't it possible to change players in Crazy Mystery Tower? I was just thinking that many people have done the intimate actions he did to you. It's an alternative public measure.
The following is a personal evaluation and analysis of this book, which is subjective. Please read with caution if necessary: The old rule is to evaluate this book from four aspects: character, plot description, foreshadowing, and update speed. Characters: The control is just right. There is no deviation from the original work, but it also greatly enriches the characters' personal personalities. The interaction between the characters is also controlled very accurately, and there is no situation where the characters are completely different. Of course, this is not the point. The point is to continuously shape the character of the character in a long novel without making any mistakes. If we want to compare, only the Mirai Diary has more exciting characters than this one, and the other Tomatoes basically have none. Plot description: To be honest, I have never seen a book on Tomato with a more ups and downs plot than this Mita fanfic. Other Mita fans follow the main line, and at most there are little interludes and stories along the way. Look at this book, what do you mean there are more than 40 chapters in a short story? The problem is that he can smoothly carry out the plot after the end of the short story, so that readers don't feel a little uncomfortable. The control of the plot is simply not something humans have. Also, where did you get so many magical adventure stories? This completely avoids the reader's feeling of weakness in the later stages. The beginning of every story is the climax of the plot. The plot is absolutely wonderful and must be worked hard! Foreshadowing control: Let me give you an example. I currently understand three types of the title "Walker of Two Worlds": the old Mita world and the new Mita world, the dream world and the Mita world, and the Mita world and the real world. There will be more foreshadowing in the middle, but I won't say it for fear of spoilers. From this example, it can be seen that the foreshadowing is definitely controlled in this area. If you want to watch a battle of wits, you can read this book ( Update speed: two updates a day, which is definitely enough (눈_눈). Also, this is probably the most word-counted Tomato Mita fanfic at the moment. I haven't finished reading it for almost a month. It's definitely because I'm full of it. If you are short on books, you can read this book, it's really good \(//∇//)\ A few extra words: The author's dream story: "Tea·Flower·Painting" How can I put it, this chapter gave me a completely different feeling from other Mita novels. The narrative is compact and the plot is coherent. It almost doesn't seem to be self-created, but like the original main line of miside. The whole big chapter perfectly depicts the personality traits of several characters. Needless to say, honey, the portrayal so far has been very complete [laughing]. The most important thing is the portrayal of the human-machine protagonist. Unlike other protagonists, the author is very successful in this chapter. It successfully narrates the psychological changes of the protagonist. People have peak periods and trough periods. This is something that other novels usually don't notice and don't describe. But our dear author not only noticed it, but also successfully made up for this shortcoming. This is high-quality Mita novels! [Cry][cry][cry]
I've been watching it for a few days, so let me share my opinion. The author added many of his own ideas based on Mita, and the novel settings and interesting innovations better enriched the story. Using "dream" as the medium, different types of novels are created based on Mita, showing the author's rich inner world and bold thinking creation. The description is appropriate and various techniques are used reasonably to show the author's richer Mita world. I think the description of the stalks is quite excellent. Its frequency and description have grasped the degree, and it is neither frequent and cumbersome nor boring. Although some of the characters are slightly inconsistent with the original work, it doesn't matter. The author himself is also active in the comment area, which is full of emotional value. This is a Mita fan novel that I highly recommend. Come on, author, I will keep following it [Like]
There are not many Mita novels that I can watch for a while without getting tired of them, and the life ahead is not boring at all, it is very interesting and highly recommended.
Even though it has the most words among Mita's fans, it still has no rating. Anyway, I enjoyed seeing it, so I will give you a five-star review (≧∇≦)
You give it to Ruda, latecomers hope that I can pin it to the top.
Not much else to say, just two words, a masterpiece! !
It can only be said that Mita's enthusiasm is low. Let's wait for the resurrection match.
Good looking: but why are there so few comments?
Tian Qiming is a character A score of 8.9 Or above means that the unpopularity of the Mita circle has turned you from a famous painting into a treasure. The transition between dreams and reality is a bit stiff. Watching it for the first time may make you feel like "I missed a few episodes of the show I follow every week."
Sioux City is the highest and largest mountain in Tomato Mita fanfiction, and Tianqi Ming is the longest and farthest river in Tomato Mita fanfiction 👍
That's great. It's a rare thing. We can save it. It's so perfect. It's not written by AI but by real people. What the author wrote is really good. It's a pity that the circle is too niche. Come on, author.
Very interesting and not boring
You never have enough of the author's books. Each chapter is longer than the last. One meter in the first part is divided into ten chapters, but in the next forty or fifty chapters it is not enough. How much foreshadowing has the author buried? How far can you see? By the way, I would like to ask, how many days does it usually take to update a chapter? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Quite a novel story
Come on author, it's great
Help Mita authors
Please keep updating the author. It is really one of the few high-quality works. I have read many Mita novels, and most of them follow the original plot, but the ending is slightly different. This one is really different. I really admire the author's imagination. How he wrote more than 500 chapters and is no longer limited to the original plot really shines.
The most words I have ever seen
Not bad, good looking\(//∇//)\
Nice! (Detailed book reviews will be added later.) The rare first-person perspective is more immersive (especially for someone like me who likes to listen to books before going to bed). At the same time, the world view is obviously more ambitious than other fan fictions, adding many interesting settings and details. The story scenes are no longer limited to Mita's world shown in the original work. There are many wider maps such as beaches, deserts, snowy mountains, modern cities, etc., And many new characters such as beaches and deserts have been added (but the relevant personal stories are a bit less). Crazy Mita is more humane and vivid than the original work. In summary, this is an excellent Mita novel that is both innovative and interesting, and the author's descriptions are also very detailed and attentive. Mita's popularity is really not rising now, but he can squat in peace mode. At that time, Mita's popularity should still be rising for a while, and some people will read related second creations and novels.
Very nice new Mita book,
Isn't it possible to change players in Crazy Mystery Tower? I was just thinking that many people have done the intimate actions he did to you. It's an alternative public measure.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Beautiful, no need to say more
I quite like Mitawen [Thoughts]