HP Parent Generation Curse Deep Sleep

The world view is complete and grand (at present), the newly-built magic system is very novel, and the magic with sand as the core gives people a mysterious and distant feeling. The character of the protagonist is also quite plump, with a very warm and reliable image. I feel that a bunch of problem teenagers of the previous generation need this kind of person to lead their healthy growth (I personally feel that many of their sorrows In addition to the necessity of the times, the rest is caused by character), the author's writing is also good, delicate and vivid, but a little suggestion, the author really likes to use dashes, which is actually harmless, because I watched it slowly the first time and didn't pay much attention, but I can find it after skimming the second time (I have no right to comment on the author's habits, just a suggestion) Then there are some questions. I want to know if the author wants to write a female protagonist. In theory, the author's writing power should be enough to support a plump and reasonable female protagonist, but I don't dare to bet because there are too many overturns, so I really, really don't recommend it. This is already a very good book (still just a suggestion, it depends on the author's wishes) (Why do you think the author is a little bit interested in Hazel, a growth-oriented heroine? I feel that his brother is not simple, and he also used some pen and ink to write). And, dear, author, this is probably not a short story, please don't give up (I haven't seen an author who is still in school finish even one book [almost crying]), come on, come on

This book is very interesting! It is a very thoughtful book among HP fans. The first is a common problem in HP fanfiction - there is no way to balance the famous scenes in the original work or movie with the protagonist's own role, or the protagonist cannot be well integrated into it. But in this book there is no such sense of inconsistency at all.

It's good but won't last long. It's said that after two years of preparation, there should be no interruptions in updates. Fusion of the soul of the time traveler makes the magic power strong? In short, he is very strong and has a stable character. He is of mixed Middle Eastern and Chinese descent, with soft facial features, but was born in England. I have a younger sister, and my good friend at the beginning didn't go to school. ⚠It's a fate update. I've saved it for a long time and even forgot about the plot. In fact, I have a good impression, but I still recommend saving it.

It's super beautiful, just like the book says "You can't meet people who are too amazing." Then this book is about not meeting people who are too amazing. This book is really beautiful and the characters of each person are also very interesting.

Well, I feel that the plot is quite normal. No major changes have been made, but it still satisfies the regrets. The emotional line is also very eye-catching. I can't say it is particularly delicate, but it is still very attractive.

The protagonist of this book finally doesn't just follow the main plot, he has his own friends and his own circle. I read this book very comfortably and smoothly. I hope it can maintain this quality forever (I will support you as the author *^_^*)

The writing looks very mature! It's not the kind of out-of-the-box fun writing. It should be very nice [laughs] I'll come back to take a closer look after I finish my college entrance exam [shy]

It's so beautiful. This is the most beautiful fanfic I've ever seen. It doesn't overly belittle anyone, nor overly praise anyone. It's correct guidance, and it's viewed rationally. Everyone has their own characteristics. The protagonist is strong but not brainless. He won't be bullied and won't bully others at will. I want to say it but I don't know how to say it. Anyway, it's beautiful.

I think this article is also very good. Although it is not the kind of cheating all the way from childhood to adulthood, the protagonist does not have a deep family, and from the perspective of the protagonist, we can also see some problems with the decent protagonist group. We are not saying that the characters should be perfect, and flaws can make the characters more three-dimensional.

I fell in love directly. This book made me understand deeply or understand things that I didn't understand when I read the original work. It gave me a deeper understanding of the characters. All in all, for me, the characters in this book are not OOC, have no weird points, and are very nice.

Wow wow wow wow, the plot is reasonable and interesting, it hit my mark, the main character is pretty, good books and good food, the author is good at cooking, I don't have much education, in short, I didn't read it before to pass the time, but now I am struggling to read it every day, I hate myself for reading it too early and having too few books.

It's really, really beautiful. I don't know how to describe it. Please forgive me for my poor Chinese and lack of dictionary. I don't know what words to use to describe this book, it's just so special and wonderful. Hmm... The plot is also very novel. It is really rare to see this kind of book. It can even be said that I have never seen this kind of book. The layout is very precise and the writing is also very good.

A very perfect book. The writing style is mature, the characters are three-dimensional, and everyone is very vivid. It does not feel like the templates of current novels are applied, and there is no forced torture plot of "forcing new words to express sorrow". This book can be regarded as a companion during the period of literary shortage (I am really tired of the routines of current novels)

Very nice, I like it

A great movie-watching book. The characters are well controlled and there is no OOC. It is one of the few good movie-watching books I have ever seen. I hope the author will not trick me into killing me and write it well. I beg you.

So far, I am quite surprised by the way this book shapes people.

Highly recommended. It's so well written. I'll go. Okay, now I read this every day when I open my eyes.

It's so well written!!!! I really like this book.

Nice! I hope the author can keep writing!

This is so beautiful! Big brother, I will follow you forever

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful novel. I'd like to support it with five stars.

It's a great description based on the progress I've seen so far. I look forward to continuing it. Coming direction

This book fulfills my fantasy, it's so beautiful!!!

Absolutely beautiful, I highly recommend this.

The image of the heroine is quite good, and she's well portrayed!!!

Ahhhh, it's so good, the darkness creeps, but the word count is too few, it's not enough to read!!!

It's so well written and awesome ww. It was recommended by HP's other fan fiction series. I've only roughly watched the complete series of HP, so I can't be called a fan if I'm intermittently.

It's really beautiful. This hp fanfic is the top one in my heart!!! Bai Yueguang, who understands the heart?

It's great to read, I love to read it, Super Invincible Explosion is so great to read, this is the first book about Harry Potter fan fiction that I've read, and I feel like it's the ceiling for my reading.

This is a very top-notch book in the HP series. It was a pleasure to read.