From the Start, One Song Called Foam Made My Ex-Boyfriend's Whole Family Cry

Not bad, watchable. That's right, I know the heroine wants to make others owe a favor, but giving away all the songs for free is a bit... 🙂 Moreover, after more than sixty chapters, I only wrote four songs and one piano song, which is a bit delayed, right?

It's okay, the emphasis is on promoting the song, which is in place, and the song is well integrated with the plot. Currently there are few words and few songs, but there should be more in the future. But there are some minor problems in the plot. Many of the heroine's operations in the early stage are indeed incomprehensible, and the heroine suddenly learns so much, don't people around her doubt it? It feels like the lack of transition seems too deliberate, but this is common in most system documents, and it is still within the acceptable range. Also, the copyright awareness is too weak. The heroine's family used to be an entertainment company. Logically speaking, she should know more about this, which is slightly inconsistent. How should I put it? This book is readable but cannot be studied in detail. It is somewhat idealistic. (Just for some personal thoughts, just look at the picture and you will get it 😜😜😜)

It's just too wordy.