Swallow************

The author still needs to work harder

Finally a serious Devouring fanfic, high praise, I hope the author can keep writing and don't be a eunuch.

Except for some poisonous spots, overall it's okay

There's nothing wrong with the logic and it's well written.

It's well written and thoughtful, and there's nothing wrong with it overall.

The main narrative line is consistent with the original work. The protagonist is a bit too kind in the early stage, but it gets much better later on. You can see the growth trajectory. It is good. It seems to be written with care.

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

The plot of this book is well written. It would be better if the protagonist in the wilderness area was more ruthless.

Not bad, close to the main line, not superficial, and more reasonable. It has a level of fandom that meets psychological expectations, but also feels that the emotional core is vague. . .

The content and plot are good and full of certain philosophy of life. I personally think it's better than other fanfics

Check in and see Chapter 29

Quite exciting, quite beautiful.

Dear author, you must keep writing!

This is the first time I've seen the main writer Yan Shen Clan in detail. This direction is amazing👍

Very good, no random writing, the talents and skills of each starry sky beast are introduced very reasonably.