[Non-traditional cool article]+[Genius Club]+[Semi-invincible]+[Reject AI writing]
I read a lot of novels, but I was left with some depression in my heart. I couldn't express it, and it was difficult to read Chang Xin often, so I decided to try to write one myself, a time traveler that is neither a joyful novel nor a sadistic novel. It is not a systematic time traveler.
My name is Qianqiu, and I am the 85th person who doesn't think I can join the genius club. My research field is imaginary numbers and quantum, and my wish is eternal life. I don't know why I destroyed 20 nearby star systems at once, and I don't know why I suddenly became the Lord of Extinction. Really.
Reader comments
Does this start to suppress the combat effectiveness? There won't be any amnesia drama, right?
It's pretty good so far. The setting is a little bit on the side of Beng3 (iron is biased towards the tree of imaginary numbers to weaken the quantum sea), that is, the quantum sea is linked to the world bubble, which is divided into the intrinsic world and the parallel world. The iron whole is the tree of imaginary numbers. Under the theory, the world is similar to the sea of trees. Different worlds are originally isolated but can be connected, which is the universe.
There are already many commanders in terms of combat power, but the upper limit of Yaliluo's combat power is not high, and the star core Cocolia is also far weaker than the commander, so the creation engine will be disabled after a few hits. Even with the addition of old civilization technology, it cannot reach the commander. I hope the plot development will be completely different by then, otherwise it may be too bland (sp Dan Heng, Lao Yang Jinling Envoy level).
There is also the problem of switching perspectives in multi-line narratives. When I first watched it, I didn't react to this perspective switching. After paying attention to it later, it still felt a bit abrupt. I suggest adding some transition settings. For example, you can connect the projections in the consciousness space mentioned in the previous thread of the Memory, so that every time the perspective is switched for foreshadowing, it will be interrupted every time, leaving a suspense break and so on. This can not only make the plot more natural, but also attract readers. After all, I think the main plot at this stage should actually run on the confrontation between different slices. There are several guesses about the later plot outline setting, I hope it will not collapse.
Please update as soon as possible, or I'll go to Guanshan to order some wine [smile]
I still hope that the author can write about some of the reversible fates in the Bengtie story, such as the exterminator, the Star Reacher, and the rescuer. He can also write about some of the weird federations in the Bengtie story, such as the Tarlac Federation.
Nice. I love reading it but it doesn't update often. I hope the author can be more diligent.
Does this start to suppress the combat effectiveness? There won't be any amnesia drama, right?
It's pretty good so far. The setting is a little bit on the side of Beng3 (iron is biased towards the tree of imaginary numbers to weaken the quantum sea), that is, the quantum sea is linked to the world bubble, which is divided into the intrinsic world and the parallel world. The iron whole is the tree of imaginary numbers. Under the theory, the world is similar to the sea of trees. Different worlds are originally isolated but can be connected, which is the universe. There are already many commanders in terms of combat power, but the upper limit of Yaliluo's combat power is not high, and the star core Cocolia is also far weaker than the commander, so the creation engine will be disabled after a few hits. Even with the addition of old civilization technology, it cannot reach the commander. I hope the plot development will be completely different by then, otherwise it may be too bland (sp Dan Heng, Lao Yang Jinling Envoy level). There is also the problem of switching perspectives in multi-line narratives. When I first watched it, I didn't react to this perspective switching. After paying attention to it later, it still felt a bit abrupt. I suggest adding some transition settings. For example, you can connect the projections in the consciousness space mentioned in the previous thread of the Memory, so that every time the perspective is switched for foreshadowing, it will be interrupted every time, leaving a suspense break and so on. This can not only make the plot more natural, but also attract readers. After all, I think the main plot at this stage should actually run on the confrontation between different slices. There are several guesses about the later plot outline setting, I hope it will not collapse. Please update as soon as possible, or I'll go to Guanshan to order some wine [smile]
I still hope that the author can write about some of the reversible fates in the Bengtie story, such as the exterminator, the Star Reacher, and the rescuer. He can also write about some of the weird federations in the Bengtie story, such as the Tarlac Federation.
Nice. I love reading it but it doesn't update often. I hope the author can be more diligent.