[One Female Lead] [Childhood Friend] [No System] [Lighthearted] [Superpowers] [Card Crafting]
"Aren't we friends? This is perfectly normal."
Su Yu looked at Bai Qianyu, who was applying medicine to him, and thought it was a little strange.
"Aren't we siblings? This is perfectly normal."
Su Yu looked at Bai Qianyu blushing in front of him and thought it was very strange.
"Aren't we married? This is perfectly normal."
Su Yu looked at Bai Qianyu in his arms and no longer thought it was strange.
Born at the Tomato Children's Welfare Home.
At six, he awakened the unstable Superpower of Random Creation and was judged to have a useless ability.
But Su Yu didn't see it that way.
He looked at the cards created using his Superpower.
Daring!
Description: Make a mental check. If your score is higher than the enemy's, they are forced to kneel for three seconds. (Ineffective if the enemy's mental score exceeds 40.)
A newbie's writing practice while I search for my style. This story is mainly comedic and lighthearted, with plenty of jokes and references. The worldbuilding may not be rigorous, so please don't nitpick. Thanks.
The author is too scared to read comments, so I don't reply to messages much. Sorry.
The writing is very good and I hope the author will continue to do so, but there are some areas that I feel are lacking. For example, the protagonist is obviously only six years old, but when I watched it, I felt that the protagonist was already 17 and 8. Of course, it is normal for the protagonist to mature as a time traveler, but other people gave me the same feeling. Although the author has written that children in this world mature prematurely, I still feel that the portrayal is too mature. Well... For the selfishness of readers, I hope that the protagonist can quickly transition to 17 Stage 8. Of course, if the author has a plan, just pretend I didn't say it. This book is very interesting and I like it very much. I hope the author's subsequent plots can be as attractive as now and I hope it will be updated faster (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)
The current daily growth stage is pretty good, starting from the age of six. Then I discovered that there was something wrong with no evidence. The person who helped get together was a seven-year-old classmate who was "used" (if you can't see the double quotation marks, you can leave). He had been protecting him secretly, waiting for the enemy to appear and then fighting back. This is so different from using children as bait and should not be said nonsense. Don't get too excited, as it's easy to make mistakes in judgment. It is quite easy to tell the difference between the situation where the protagonist is not killing indiscriminately and the situation where he is applauded when he is killing indiscriminately. It can be said in this situation where it is easy to distinguish. And there are quite a few of them here.
It's okay. The overall pace is relatively slow, but it's okay as a daily novel with fantasy elements. There are some minor logical problems, but it's still acceptable. It just seems that the protagonist is too young, and some time in the middle can be skipped directly. I feel better writing it from the age of 14 or 5. Things like love, love, and love are weird no matter how you look at it on a six or seven-year-old child. Also, the protagonist feels too weak, and his ability is One needs to be developed in the later stage and is difficult to directly affect the frontal battle. If you don't give him a little openness, I have a feeling that there will definitely be a lot of disappointing plots in the next one or two hundred chapters. I have come to Tomato to read novels. Sweetness and refreshment are what I want. If the follow-up is not as I expected, then I will give the remaining one star😏
It's a good-looking children's story, warm and everyday, the characters are very comfortable, and there is no sense of inconsistency in it. The male protagonist's personality is also relatively easy-going, gentle and a little silly. Generally speaking, it is mainly about daily life, supplemented by fighting.
I struggled to find a few novels among a large number of memes ꒰>< ꒱ The author is very good at making jokes. For example, Lao Da plays with paper airplanes and never crashes. There is an entry about paper airplanes that is faster when facing the Twin Towers.
You must keep writing, brother who writes sweet articles
The quality of recent new books is very good.
I feel like the book about weak lolita was pretty good, so why don't you continue writing about lily novels?
The daily episode is pretty good, give me some encouragement
It's so beautiful. Give me more updates. I love it so much. It would be better if the protagonist's path to becoming stronger is more detailed.