Random Life Starting from Mygo

Four stars, overall it's okay. If I don't engage in self-reduction, it's already better than many articles. In addition, I hope to have a perfect ending. Not everyone wants it, but those who have ambiguous emotional lines can afford it. Either there will be only one female lead and no ambiguity, or there will be a perfect ending with multiple female protagonists. If a stock trading article is ambiguous and only says at the end that it has a single female protagonist or no female protagonist, it will usually be criticized directly. There are 3 main things to pay attention to (personal senses) 1. - The plot lacks tension. When entering the key plot, the big twist of the dice is not enough, which seriously deviates from the behavioral logic of the characters. This is a common problem in dice writing. 2.——The dice content and options are added to the text, which affects the immersion. When the mood is getting better, a dice pops up, just like when someone suddenly discusses the soup and water that comes out during a meal. It is best to put this kind of content in paragraph reviews, and those who want to see it will naturally read it. The group running was originally a niche, but now I also run the group, read novels, and watch music shows. I really have to ask Haji to do all three. 3.——The design of the Anhe Pleiades line is a bit sloppy. Especially as a girl who played two games online and then posted a selfie online, and a series of very intimate behaviors after meeting, lacked the foreshadowing of emotions and experiences, and gave people the feeling of being cheap. It reminded people of the king of girls in life, who played games for a few days and then left together. In other words, if any passerby comes by, the heroine created will give people the impression that she can also post selfies and do these things.

I'm really high! ! ! There is no time to mourn. The next person to appear is the protector of the Red Lotus Demon Lord, the instructor of the Great Dream Immortal Lord, and the creator of the Dragon Clan. He resisted the invasion of the North Plains with one person, crushed the dazzling record of the Heavenly Demon Lord with one hand, and won the FMVP in the battle of heaven. He is the great magician with no health bar and only a progress bar. Lord Long, I can't die, I can't die. I still have powerful enemies to deal with, sins to pay off, and mistakes to correct. , I, Mr. Long, will never fall. I want to stand up. I want to stand up. I want to fight again. I am a traveler, a solitary figure between heaven and earth. I drink Dukang when I am happy, and I lean on the mountains and rivers when I sleep. Cultivate Taoguang throughout your life, and hide your ambition in your heart. Now I draw my sword, and the cold front shocks all the immortals.

You can write it well, but there are only two problems. 1. Multiple band members cross over, giving people a bit of a chaotic feeling. But this can advance the plot in a different way from the original work. 2. The plot progress is slow, and there is still too little to watch. This can be solved with more updates, but I am afraid that I will not be able to continue writing later.

The male protagonist still has quite a personality, much better than the common Asasi. I support him.

Wucao is actually An Kewen, with tears in his eyes~ Reminds me of the joy I felt when I was chasing [ Lie Huan Enter ] in Tieba a few years ago [face covering]

It's quite interesting. I hope it can break the fate of blood of the original male lead girl band fan Anke (referring to the tragic family background)

It's okay. Except for the first one which is quite difficult to stretch, the others all have their own style and are quite satisfying. If it is not set by the author himself. Then what this shakes out is really pretty good. If I change it a little bit, I might be wrong.

So does this book cut the Mujica setting? If it doesn't cut it, then let Hatsune know that Lao Lu and Xiangzi are living together, and she won't be able to make a big fuss. You can ask Lu Rui to teach the little sister to sing, and contact the gbc line

The protagonist's final outcome will not be to lose (the ground) and disappear (down) the bar (room) [sneaky laugh]

I felt very comfortable watching it, and the protagonist's personal charm attracted me more

Saving Guitar and Mortis is my only ambition in the world. Gu Shenmu doesn't need it. I don't care about others. I only want Guitar and Mortis, that's all. No matter what the cost, I will do anything...

I think it looks great! After all, Bundori's books contain too much history, and some of them are so idealistic that they are false and demonic. There are three books by Bondoli that I love to read, Random Life, Enjoying a Pleasurable Life, and Passersby in the Music Age.

Very good An Kewen, it made the corners of my mouth curl up crazily! Well, in terms of personal evaluation, there are almost 200 chapters now. The first half is 5 stars and the second half is 4 stars. Let me just mention two points. ① It is said to be an Anke text, but it is actually a fake Anke. After all, if the dice girl explodes, the book will collapse~ But there will be no Anke part from the beginning (this is the reason for the four stars) ②After completely putting aside Anke, I can see that it is actually a general fanfic. It can only be said to be at a medium level. It is difficult to say whether it is above or below. PS: After all, An Ke's life is gone, so many plot rhythms will feel weird~ In short, Sic Niang takes the blame! ! !

From a personal perspective, this is also a breath of fresh air in the band's writing. The main reason is that the protagonist, who is from rural China, feels quite real. In addition, he has a little luck and gets to know these girls. In addition, he himself is also transforming, changing himself and achieving success in his career. In fact, feelings are indeed a problem. This book doesn't talk much about the male protagonist's feelings. Each band girl also has several inner monologues that are particularly well-shaped.

Okay, it was fun to write

I hate trouble, but I take the initiative to get into trouble

It's pretty good to watch. It contains a lot of bands. It's quite interesting. The group running is also a highlight. I have to be a dice girl who can write (. It's also a good story. It's quite good.

Brothers, I really enjoyed reading this book in one sitting [laughing]. There is no peeing spot in the middle. It gets better and better as you go to the end. There are less and less plots to end the band [laughing] but it is still highly recommended👍

It looks pretty good at the moment, but it's obviously An Kewen, but the dice are too few, and you can add a little more.

Although I feel sorry for the author when I say this, I have forgotten the book after reading it for so long. Now I have more than 100 copies of it, and I have also forgotten the previous plot. Then I almost just watched it again, it was so cool.

Great, I just want to see Leziren being bound by gravity! ! !

Pochi's head tossing is also a famous dish that must be tasted. Can the author let Pochi perform it during the performance [laughter]

The protagonist is quite good-looking and has a good personality. The setting of the running group is not bad, but there are too many judgments at the beginning that affect the viewing, and there are too few or almost no judgments at the end. When it comes to the running group, there are people who don't understand and recommend to watch Station B (the master of Sankaibo who fishes all day long). Finally, I ended the band. Why is there no plot after the band [angry]

I finished reading it in about two or three days. It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, the author will update Kouga soon! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

It's great. I haven't seen a novel that suits my taste in a long time. It looks good. If the Anko setting was abandoned from the beginning, the popularity would be even higher.

The author and the book are very interesting [laughing]

Dice Girl tears up outlines and eats up subplots every day. It's great to be able to write so many. After all, one day Sic Girl's big hands may crush the plot to death [face covering]

This is the first time I read this kind of article. Considering the level of the dummy behind the hen card, I feel like I could pass it off and have more fun [laughter]

It looks good, it looks good, come on, author, everyone can do anything. If I can't see your update, Wadasi... One thing to say, compared to other tomatoes of the same type, it looks much better and looks very happy.

Apart from the dice-like choices, the storyline is actually quite good. It's just the end. The band hasn't performed in a long time, so what does that count? Throw it away after use. Author, you are a scumbag.