A Random Life Starting with MyGO

Four stars, overall it's okay. If I don't engage in self-reduction, it's already better than many articles. In addition, I hope to have a perfect ending. Not everyone wants it, but those who have ambiguous emotional lines can afford it. Either there will be only one female lead and no ambiguity, or there will be a perfect ending with multiple female protagonists. If a stock trading article is ambiguous and only says at the end that it has a single female protagonist or no female protagonist, it will usually be criticized directly. There are 3 main things to pay attention to (personal senses) 1. - The plot lacks tension. When entering the key plot, the big twist of the dice is not enough, which seriously deviates from the behavioral logic of the characters. This is a common problem in dice writing. 2.——The dice content and options are added to the text, which affects the immersion. When the mood is getting better, a dice pops up, just like when someone suddenly discusses the soup and water that comes out during a meal. It is best to put this kind of content in paragraph reviews, and those who want to see it will naturally read it. The group running was originally a niche, but now I also run the group, read novels, and watch music shows. I really have to ask Haji to do all three. 3.——The design of the Anhe Pleiades line is a bit sloppy. Especially as a girl who played two games online and then posted a selfie online, and a series of very intimate behaviors after meeting, lacked the foreshadowing of emotions and experiences, and gave people the feeling of being cheap. It reminded people of the king of girls in life, who played games for a few days and then left together. In other words, if any passerby comes by, the heroine created will give people the impression that she can also post selfies and do these things.

You can write it well, but there are only two problems. 1. Multiple band members cross over, giving people a bit of a chaotic feeling. But this can advance the plot in a different way from the original work. 2. The plot progress is slow, and there is still too little to watch. This can be solved with more updates, but I am afraid that I will not be able to continue writing later.

I'm really high! ! ! There is no time to mourn. The next person to appear is the protector of the Red Lotus Demon Lord, the instructor of the Great Dream Immortal Lord, and the creator of the Dragon Clan. He resisted the invasion of the North Plains with one person, crushed the dazzling record of the Heavenly Demon Lord with one hand, and won the FMVP in the battle of heaven. He is the great magician with no health bar and only a progress bar. Lord Long, I can't die, I can't die. I still have powerful enemies to deal with, sins to pay off, and mistakes to correct. , I, Mr. Long, will never fall. I want to stand up. I want to stand up. I want to fight again. I am a traveler, a solitary figure between heaven and earth. I drink Dukang when I am happy, and I lean on the mountains and rivers when I sleep. Cultivate Taoguang throughout your life, and hide your ambition in your heart. Now I draw my sword, and the cold front shocks all the immortals.

The male protagonist still has quite a personality, much better than the common Asasi. I support him.

Wucao is actually An Kewen, with tears in his eyes~ Reminds me of the joy I felt when I was chasing [ Lie Huan Enter ] in Tieba a few years ago [face covering]

It's quite interesting. I hope it can break the fate of blood of the original male lead girl band fan Anke (referring to the tragic family background)

It's okay. Except for the first one which is quite difficult to stretch, the others all have their own style and are quite satisfying. If it is not set by the author himself. Then what this shakes out is really pretty good. If I change it a little bit, I might be wrong.

So does this book cut the Mujica setting? If it doesn't cut it, then let Hatsune know that Lao Lu and Xiangzi are living together, and she won't be able to make a big fuss. You can ask Lu Rui to teach the little sister to sing, and contact the gbc line

The protagonist's final outcome will not be to lose (the ground) and disappear (down) the bar (room) [sneaky laugh]

I felt very comfortable watching it, and the protagonist's personal charm attracted me more