Pokemon: The Worlds Have Actually Fused!!

After reading it so far, it's still OK. The writing style is a bit immature, but the plot is still OK. I just took a look at the CP of Lu Xiyao and Xitron. Speaking of which, the Gu twins don't seem to show up at the end? Have you forgotten?

It's really nice to look at and the Pokémon are also relatively common Pokémon.

Good-looking, so good

Now it seems that the author's writing is quite good. Keep up the good work [Blow kiss]

Please comment! Please review! Regarding cp, I actually wanted to write about Citron at the beginning, but the emotional line I wrote was very rubbish. Later, after deleting, deleting, and changing it, it became no cp, so the introduction I wrote at the beginning was tentatively no cp, and I decided to write it later based on my feel. Then there was feedback from Baozi that it would not look good with CP, so I changed it to the main text without CP. After the completion, I might write a CP extra chapter, but it also depends on my touch. I really feel awkward when writing emotional lines 🤦 Regarding this article, I originally wanted to write about the process of the protagonist Lu Xiyao and the Pokémon working hard to become the Kalos Queen. In the middle, there will be gym competitions, league competitions, and various competitions. Then it changed a bit as I wrote it. From the setting of the protagonist having a prominent family background and having a wave guide, to encountering various high-quality Pokémon, and even adding various items to enhance the Pokémon, it became a bit like a Mary Sue. Originally, I wanted to write an imperfect protagonist, but unknowingly I wrote something very Mary Sue. Now I don't know how to write it, so I can only make mistakes and continue writing like this 🤦. I write this review to avoid lightning. If Baozi who can't accept it sees this review of mine, please run away [face cover]