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The plot and everything are very good, but I really want to complain in the comment section, and when I see the two men, I will do it [smile]

It looks good, but I don't have any complaints about it so far. The heroine is very smart and can directly prevent the enemy from counterattacking. There is no huge golden finger unlimited farming space that I hate, which is very unique. The original heroine also went offline very quickly, and she didn't look like an invincible Xiaoqiang. In terms of talents, the heroine is very talented in both sword and formation. She is not a traditional all-around genius. It is very novel and feels much more real. I like to watch talented heroines, but not all-around heroines. If I like to watch a talented heroine in one aspect, it's enough. If she has more talent, it feels like she's cheating too much. All in all, I really like this book so far. I finished reading it in one day today. Good luck to the author and update it quickly. I just don't know if the heroine will participate in the Holy Land Competition.

It looks good and is really attractive. Paired with music, as I listened and watched, I felt more and more fateful. I felt like I wanted to know what happened in Xie Hechi's previous life, so that the once unruly swordsman who broke through the four realms with one sword became Xie Wuxie, who everyone feared would be imprisoned for thousands of years. The storyline is a little different from what I've seen before. Looking forward to it, hehe.

Overall, it's really good to watch, and the foreshadowing is good. The missing star is because the male protagonist is stronger than the female protagonist, and I always feel uncomfortable. In the real world, the female protagonist is so rich, and the male protagonist's family background is still better than the female protagonist. First, the female protagonist's talent is so good, but in the end she is not as good as the male protagonist. Apart from this, it is still good.

This article is very well written. The plot is not sluggish at all. The "original heroine" was killed in dozens of chapters, and she has been following the upgrading path to become an immortal since then. The past and present life are all fate, and all the pitfalls the author buried have been filled in. It is very interesting! She thought she was traveling through time but was actually returning. The heroine is really smart. She guessed the real answer even if something went a little bit wrong. She even surpassed everyone and quietly laid out a grand chess game. The incarnation of the law of heaven thought he was the chess player but didn't know he was the chess piece. It's so cool! Mian Bao's masters in her two lives were both good and protective, and the friends around Mian Bao were also very good. They would trust her unconditionally and support her choices [Blow kiss] Xie Wuxie, he is really good, he is worth it, just keep seducing us Mian Bao, oh my, what else are we talking about as a little couple99

I really like reading stories about the heroine who is constantly improving and growing up. Especially this one has a wonderful plot. It's not just the heroine that attracts me, but the charm of other characters is the same. I like Su Yu, he makes me feel like Bai Yueguang. Zhilan Yushu, a humble gentleman, aloof and aloof to others, but he dotes on his younger brother. He is the proud man in this book, but he is not affected by the protagonist's light like other books. Everyone shines in their own areas of expertise, so I especially like to read group portraits. In addition, I saw some book friends saying that the emotional line in the introduction is weak, but the development of the male and female protagonists is too slow now. I think the love between Chi Mian and Xie Wunie is more suitable for a trickle to slowly merge into a big river. After all, the female protagonist is still immature and still needs to grow, and the male protagonist's body is still sealed. There are still many lines to bury. It's so strange that they love each other without clarifying many things. There are only about 100 chapters so far. Judging from this rating, I think it is not far away from being popular. I hope the author will continue to persevere and work hard to write words. The children will be waiting to be fed [laughs]

It's really good to read. The more you read the treasure novel, the better it gets. The content is also very novel, but it's too little. It's really not enough to read. [Crying] I'm here to ask the author for more updates. I like it so much. I hope I can keep writing and I will always like it. I finished reading it. In my memory, the introduction of this novel said that there is a competition. The heroine's formation of equality of all beings competes with the geniuses in the competition. Why has it been changed now [face covering] I did read this novel because I wanted to see the girls' formations and swords in the competition. I didn't expect it to be changed. The content was not written. The front is really good, but the back is a bit boring. Forget it, I will give it 5 stars. The front is really good, but the back is not interesting. There is no match I want to watch.

This book is really to my liking. I haven't found a fairy tale that suits my taste for a long time. I have been reading it for the fifth year. I really enjoyed reading this book, whether it is the writing or the plot. I don't have much literary talent. I don't know how to sum it up. I can keep following it as long as I read. I think the writing is quite good. It is smooth and fluent, and there is no ginger juice. I don't know how to put it. It is a good-looking article. If I just give up after reading it, it is definitely not to my taste. I believe the rating 🉑 is slowly going up based on my perspective after watching it for so many years 🍅 ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳ

There is cp! Group portrait article! Love, friendship, master-disciple relationship, everyone's image is very distinct, and the plot is very attractive, but it's too early, wow, wow, wow. Two chapters are updated every day. It's so hard.

It's super good-looking. The heroine Chi Mian, dressed as a scapegoat, left immediately, contracted with the divine beast Aotian, and found refuge with the sect Qian Zhongdu. She found the formation master Mo Qianqiu, and also learned the sword from "Wuli". She also had her Taoist companion Xie Wuxie, who was super handsome and loved her. There was also a group of like-minded friends who practiced together, killed the original heroine, and got the chance to get the Wuli sword. Tianjiao deserves to be called Tianjiao. Every senior brother and sister are very capable, and scum is scum. The memory of the past life may be a bit long, and it will feel a bit fragmented when you read it again. The third life is also a bit messy, and she came back in a daze. She is really smart, and her logic is always online. It is very interesting to watch. In the end, the conspiracy was broken and peace returned. The youth remains the same and the old friends remain forever. The if chapter is also very interesting. I like it.

I like it very much. The writing is also very good. I haven't read the back yet. I want to ask whether Su Yu and his brother are CPs. I'm a little bit offended and there is bl in the bg [crying]

It's pretty. The heroine has brains but not a virgin. Unlike some fairy tales that are ridiculously advanced as soon as they come out. The mythical beasts can sign contracts everywhere. This is the kind of novel where the heroine and the beasts grow up together. It is a group portrait novel. The image of each person in it is very distinct, and they are very distinctive. They are very friendly and united. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also very touching. Treasure novel! ! ! Hurry up, rush, rush The only drawback is that I searched for so many chapters in my memory, and I kept waiting for it to end. It was too cumbersome and I couldn't stand it anymore, but the early part was still very interesting.

It's really nice to see that there are no flaws now! ! ! But the male and female protagonists won't be tortured in the future, right? [Crying] Tens of millions of tonics are needed The front looks really nice! But the past life part is not as interesting as before (personal opinion, and I always feel that things between the male and female protagonists are very complicated. This makes me a little entangled. Because the previous life is so beautiful, I always ignore this issue, but in any case, I still support the author greatly. If you don't like it, don't criticize [Like]

All I can say is that it looks great! ! ! ! ! I personally think it's haha😋 I haven't watched much of it. Currently, I'm looking at the heroine's growth story. There are quite a few characters involved, but I feel like they're all little foreshadowing. I just don't know how to write them later. 😡😋🥰Then I like it very much. I hope the author will update a hundred chapters every day (although it is impossible😭😨😓🤗😲💋). Yes, it looks good

OK, this book is also awesome. I don't see any glitches in the whole story. It's really fun. It's not indecisive. The characters have their own characteristics and plots! ! ! Anyway, I wish you all a bright future!

Really really really really really really beautiful! ! ! ! ! The author must not abandon the trap, the child is already scared [almost crying] It's been a long time since I found a fairy tale that appeals to my taste. Please give me a lot of support from the author [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's really beautiful! Super invincible and beautiful! So pretty! ! ! ! ! When I read the introduction, I thought that the heroine was developing like a dog, but I didn't expect that she was getting stronger and stronger, and there was no temporary compromise, it didn't exist at all! A protective master, a close friend, a lovely contracted beast, a lifelong lover... The author really loves the heroine! Moreover, the writing style is super good, the pace is fast and not draggy, and the foreshadowing is short but incisive, not the kind that goes round and round🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Mark.156 Overall it's pretty good, and the plot doesn't have any surprises for a picky person like me, so I give it five stars. There is still room for improvement in the writing. There are not many group portraits. Except for the heroine team, the people in the sect have never been able to tell who is who. The sect competition is mainly a group of people eating melons and chattering, but the duel does not take up much space, and the fighting scenes described do not make people feel very passionate. The advantage is that there is no female competition, there are not many brainless characters, and the heroine's IQ is also online

Good looking, Chi Mian and Xie Wunie are finally happy The ups and downs of the first half of life will also be cured. It is fascinating and has a knife. I really like the youthful atmosphere in the book, the micro-group portraits, the masters are all very good, the right path is always the right path, and I have no regrets in my heart The young couple is so sweet

Here I go, this is my second book review, and there really aren't many that I can really comment on, but this one is really good, and I've just read a little bit of it now. And then, the heroine is not overly talented, but she also has that kind of energetic beating, anyway. The plot is very exciting, it's very interesting to watch, and then, as the author said, the male protagonist appeared very late, so for those who want to see the emotional line, actually, um, read it with your temper, the plot is very coherent, I really recommend reading this book!

Very pretty! Both the male and female protagonists are pretty good to drink. In the beginning, the heroine has no memory, but the hero has memory! Later, the heroine recovered her memory, but the part about recovering her memory took many chapters! ! It's really good-looking, but there are a lot of relationships that are a bit unclear. Let me tell you, it was really funny when the heroine met the heaven in his world and knelt down and called her mother.

AUV, faster and faster, it's so beautiful, I want to put you in my supreme bookshelf. The writing is good, and the plot is interesting. It's different from the cliche plots I usually watch. This group of portraits is also very well written. There are no friends who turn against each other. Everyone is She helps each other and is warm-hearted. She won't be provoked by a few words. She is very warm. Even if they are from different sects, everyone is very friendly. Some people are also very funny. I like humor haha. Chi Mian is also very smart. There are not many female protagonists like this. The brain is terrifyingly smart, and it suits my taste so well. The venomous mouth is good, and venomous mouths are fun. Aotian and Jiyuan are also very good. They are both very cute monsters. Even when he was fat, he always took on the image of Teacher Maomao. No matter what, they are very cute. The whole book is super It's interesting. Everyone is very vivid. I'm looking forward to the plot after the male protagonist's memory is complete. Come on, don't be tired, don't be idle, please update more, and don't finish it. It's super good-looking. You are the best [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss] I purposely read the entire article to evaluate it, hehe.

It's really good to read. I've never written a book review, but I really love this book. It's so good and beautiful [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] I've been reading a lot of literature for a long time. This is the only one I've read in two months. I recommend it [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's super pretty. The heroine is very strategic and powerful. My favorites among them are Zihu and Baize. Aotian is really similar to Tianlu. They are very cute and stinky gadgets. By the way, I also like Wuli very much. This kind of person is full of a touch of human-machine feeling [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This book is very good. I have been reading it for about ten years. I feel that this book is written very logically and I can't guess what the next step is. It seems very refreshing. I really like this book. I like Su Wan's concept of making friends and his unreserved love for his friends. He is the young master of the Su family. I like Lou Jian. Although he is an alchemist who doesn't like to talk, he can always use elixirs when his friends are hurt. I like Chu Jiu. He is the eldest brother of the sect but he doesn't put on airs. He is willing to admit defeat even if he loses. He will share his experience with Chi Mian and the others for the sake of the sect. And Su Yu is Su Wan's elder brother. He is the favored son of heaven and a brother-controller. He is also very good to his younger brother's friends. These are the heroine's friends in the second life. In the first life, his junior brother Xuan Yu really believed in his senior sister Chi Mian unconditionally. In the first life, even though his senior sister was temporarily gone, he still used forbidden techniques to make himself live longer in order to allow his senior sister to have acquaintances as companions when she came back, as well as Lou Julang, Liu Miao, and Yan Bo. His friend line is really good. The love line and the male protagonist are also very good. There are two masters who are really protective of their shortcomings and have a master's love. I feel like the ending is a bit empty, but it's pretty good in the end. It's calm in the end.

The past cannot be changed, but the future is right in front of us. Sunshine, bright. The future is promising. Facing the slowly setting sun, the laughter of the teenagers seemed full of vitality. The story continues, and they may experience ups and downs, but at this moment, the young people are full of energy and running towards their future! Thousands of years of waiting have finally come true. From then on, the sky was high and the sea was vast, and there was no more worry. Reincarnation is a circle. It is both parting and the beginning of reunion. My love, please wait for me. "I wish you a happy return - a great success!" Dozens of figures rushed in all directions with swords. I don't know who laughed first, and the teenagers laughed one after another. The bright and bright laughter that belongs exclusively to the young man floats in the wind. Qian Chongdu has ushered in a new day. The young man was unruly and promised to be the best in the world. The past is all gone, and there will be no separation from now on. The breeze blows the hair, which is the time when young people are unruly. The original intention has changed, the sword's heart has been broken. It's not the same as when a young man was unruly. The frost cracks the sky, and the fourteen states are cold

The protagonist is not an all-around talent! The heroine is good at two things! Teammates also have their own areas of expertise! Grow together! The plot is not boring and makes people explore the story. The sect is very united and the atmosphere is very good! The relationship between the male and female protagonists in the past life has not been restored until now, and it is gradually progressing

@Hanjiansu The author looks at me, I'm coming, I'm coming, I'm coming [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Good-looking good-looking friend [blowing kiss] Nerve endings dance wildly when you feel good [full] When I was being abused, I just asked my friend to give me some air [crying] The emotional scenes are very, very, very well written. The key is that the most exciting emotional drama is not just about love See group portrait here Friendship: Generation: Prodigy of the same generation, brothers and sisters The second generation: friends in their youth, senior sisters and brothers, and geniuses of the same generation. See here for the family relationship that heals and supports each other. Family ties: The masters and uncles of both generations are very good. Modern heaven is also a very good existence It depends on the level of Shuangwenxiang, some parts look sadistic The whole original text is actually just a tool. Killing that stupid 🥚original heroine is... Slightly satisfying. The whole book so far doesn't feel like a holy mother. Tianjiao Xiang, Xiu Xian, look here I am rather picky about immortality writing, and the author's immortality writing is very to my liking. The plot flows as smoothly as if Kaisero was used The worldview is reasonable and not empty-handed There is no doubt about Mianmian's talent. No matter how you look at the process of cultivating immortality, it is all advanced. It's so cool to watch the stories of a group of geniuses... If you are confused about life, you can read here (I don't mean to praise the author or mislead others, it's just for me personally) Mianmian has clear ambitions, is not easily disturbed by fake people, and does not easily doubt herself. She is very inspiring to people like me who reflect on themselves whenever something happens. To summarize, @Hanjiansu I love you author [blowing kiss] Chi Mian, I love you😘. In another world that I can't see, you will definitely be happy.

The plot of the book is very good, but the author always writes typos and some wording. The logic is not bad. The overall feeling is good to me. I hope the author goes a little too far when connecting the plot, otherwise the plot line will be very confusing. This is just a personal suggestion. I have finished reading it [Like]

Looks good, I know how to use it twice The author writes so vividly and interestingly! ! ! The supporting characters are also very three-dimensional! ! The foreshadowing in the front is continued later. This is awesome. It's Master who killed me with a knife. I cried to death. Wuwuwu. Fortunately there is a side story The emotional line is also very good. As someone who likes to watch non-CP movies, I think it's very wrong. Don't worry, sisters.