[Quick travel + system + double heroines + 1v1 + double A]
[Villain Master vs Demon Lord's Disciple]
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"Master, you are well." Miaoyin's waist is slender, and the beams of the red pavilion are dark.
My heart skipped a beat, this is the demon clan.
The black robe was dragged on the ground, and Lin Xi's century-old resentment surged out, and he could no longer hide it.
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Water droplets fell, and the lingering sound surrounded the dungeon.
Lin Xi's thin red hands gently pinched her face. "Accident? Master, I'm not dead."
Blood spurts out and Bai Yong dies.
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"The True Path of Cultivation" six-star difficulty.
In the past, the cold and aloof Master was tortured to death. He is indeed her good disciple... Who has already practiced the magic way.
Reader comments
This introduction is inappropriate, I have no desire to read it, and it can even be said to be a bit irrelevant. I forced myself to read a few chapters and summarized the awkward points of this book.
First: Introduction to Master Qing Leng. The word "Qing Leng" is used inappropriately. It should be "evil". The heroine traveled through time to replace this master. The heroine is not "cold", and the original master cannot afford to be "cold".
Second: the cp combination is strange. According to the first impression of "Qing Leng Master" vs. "Demon Lord's Disciple", the heroine is this master, and I don't want to watch it. It is difficult for someone to write the feeling of a "cold" person as the protagonist. What's more, as a time traveler, it's even harder to feel cold. After reading a few chapters, it turns out that the heroine is a normal woman and does not match the character profile.
Suggestions:
Modified the introduction, the vicious master, in the direction of redemption to make up for his predecessor. Male videos have had similar routines (the vicious master covets the qualifications of his apprentice, and his scheme is discovered by his apprentice. The apprentice becomes disheartened and wants to kill the master. The protagonist travels back in time to replace the original master, and in order to avoid being killed, he begins his own redemption.)
Let's be honest:
I even want to see the demon lord's apprentice force Master Qing Leng to submit, and Master Qing Leng was forced to resist and welcome, and finally found that he was tempted. [Eat melon]
The logic is clear and the writing is smooth. The two protagonists do not do boring things, and they are very decisive in doing things. Although the article is short from the beginning to now, the content is very concise. Generally speaking, there is nothing poisonous. It is refreshing to read [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
At the same time, the author will pay attention to his health when updating, stay up less late, maintain good energy, and write according to the current quality to the end. I believe that the rating of the final book will not be low [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
I enjoyed reading it. I skipped through it. I felt that either the master was a yandere or the apprentice was a yandere later on. It's really not possible to have both yanderes. My xp was very enjoyable.
I'm confused about my fighting power, but I'm here to see the master and disciple having an awkward fight.
……Fine
Is it he? [Stunned]
I don't comment on the writing style, but the relationship between the two is very interesting, I like it better
This introduction is inappropriate, I have no desire to read it, and it can even be said to be a bit irrelevant. I forced myself to read a few chapters and summarized the awkward points of this book. First: Introduction to Master Qing Leng. The word "Qing Leng" is used inappropriately. It should be "evil". The heroine traveled through time to replace this master. The heroine is not "cold", and the original master cannot afford to be "cold". Second: the cp combination is strange. According to the first impression of "Qing Leng Master" vs. "Demon Lord's Disciple", the heroine is this master, and I don't want to watch it. It is difficult for someone to write the feeling of a "cold" person as the protagonist. What's more, as a time traveler, it's even harder to feel cold. After reading a few chapters, it turns out that the heroine is a normal woman and does not match the character profile. Suggestions: Modified the introduction, the vicious master, in the direction of redemption to make up for his predecessor. Male videos have had similar routines (the vicious master covets the qualifications of his apprentice, and his scheme is discovered by his apprentice. The apprentice becomes disheartened and wants to kill the master. The protagonist travels back in time to replace the original master, and in order to avoid being killed, he begins his own redemption.) Let's be honest: I even want to see the demon lord's apprentice force Master Qing Leng to submit, and Master Qing Leng was forced to resist and welcome, and finally found that he was tempted. [Eat melon]
The logic is clear and the writing is smooth. The two protagonists do not do boring things, and they are very decisive in doing things. Although the article is short from the beginning to now, the content is very concise. Generally speaking, there is nothing poisonous. It is refreshing to read [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] At the same time, the author will pay attention to his health when updating, stay up less late, maintain good energy, and write according to the current quality to the end. I believe that the rating of the final book will not be low [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
I enjoyed reading it. I skipped through it. I felt that either the master was a yandere or the apprentice was a yandere later on. It's really not possible to have both yanderes. My xp was very enjoyable.
I'm confused about my fighting power, but I'm here to see the master and disciple having an awkward fight.
……Fine
Is it he? [Stunned]
I don't comment on the writing style, but the relationship between the two is very interesting, I like it better