Vegetto: I'm Invincible, You Can Do Whatever You Want

Yes, my rating for you is - ten stars! If I say too much, it will be spoilers, but one thing is that this author really has a thorough understanding of the various main plots, theatrical versions, and extra chapters of Dragon Ball, and his writing style is not weak. I like it very much.

The last time I felt like this, apart from playing the mod of Super Universe 2, I was watching Hyper Dimension Battle, but the 2.5 Vegettos in Hyper Dimension Battle were really difficult [smile]

(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 12 Sense of substitution 1, Attractiveness 1, Plug-in O, Setting 2, Writing style 1, Imagination 2, Rhythm 1, Main line 1, Personality 1, Logic 2 Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: The protagonist is invisible at the beginning, and the sense of immersion is reduced. The plot of changing skins (Cell and Broly) makes it less attractive. The highlight of this book is the characters and the author's setting of Dragon Ball, but the protagonist is unclear and the character rating has dropped. The author should slow down the plot a bit and keep pushing it to a higher level. The setting will slowly appear flaws and the overall evaluation will plummet. ─────────────────── #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Tenth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Special recommendation (+4 points) 2. Recommended (+2 points) 3. Acceptable (+1 point) 4. No points will be deducted (O points) 5. Not recommended (X points) 6. Personally unacceptable (XX points) 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang·Online articles that I personally can't find any fault with 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 "recommendations" (+2 points) (2) Excellent Internet articles that most people like, personally 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 "recommendations" (+2 points) (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items are "acceptable" (+1 point) (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items are "acceptable" (+1 point) (5) The next one in the list: Internet articles recommended by individuals 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items "no points deducted" (O points) (6) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Highly Not Recommended Internet Articles 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items "not recommended/X" (-1 point) One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Internet articles that are very unacceptable 1. The first stage: total score -10 points or less 2. The second stage: total score - 20 points or less

Is the author here? I haven't read it yet. Let me ask a question. It is the power setting of the God of Destruction. According to the comics, God's Control Skill is actually an amplification skill, and the amplification multiplier is much stronger than Deep Blue's. Although the comics haven't said it yet, according to Beerus' revelation, the God of Destruction has actually never used his full strength, and has never shown his strength in the ultimate state. He only relied on his normal strength to crush 2 Super Blue. In this case, the comparison with the God of Destruction cannot be based on the strength after transformation, but the normal strength. In that fan comic, Vegetto even used the God Control Technique, but Gillian on the opposite side relied on his own hard power and did not use any skills to improve his strength at all. The gap is still obvious. It's so delicious that I can't help but teach Jillian how easy it is to be myself...

Regarding the Dragon Ball series, I can say that this is the best book I have ever read, especially about the use of God's power, which is not found in other Dragon Ball fan novels. By the way, author, I just want to ask about the breath of God and the power of God in Dragon Ball. Does it mean that when you have the breath of God, you already have the power of God, but they don't know how to use it? After all, God's power is the sublimated power of God's breath, but I have seen some characters who can use God's breath and God's power at the same time. So I was wondering if they have the power of God, but they don't know how to use it. As long as they find the right method, they can use the power of God. Take Kaio Shen, he obviously can't destroy God's destruction, and he can't use the ultimate will power. Piccolo, who merged with the god in the previous book, doesn't know God's control skills, but he can use God's power. So take a look at my guess, is it right? If what I said is wrong, could you please tell me.

Please support the author's new book [Sending Hearts]

All the books written by this author are huge What the hell, it's going to be a mess at the end. It's either a fit or a fusion.

This author's settings and understanding of the various Dragon Ball series are really comprehensive. It is more ambitious and has his own understanding of the world view than the average Dragon Ball fandom. This book can also be regarded as a continuation of the previous book. Because I was attracted by the previous book, it is very interesting to follow. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Love] [Love] [Love]

As for the female lead, I think Womi is quite good.

Those who came here from the beginning of the first week will continue to follow the updates until the end of the first week. I feel that the author's writing style and ideas are among the top three among all Tomato and Dragon Ball novels. It may be a bit confusing for those who haven't read the weekly program first. Personally I feel pretty good

The best Dragon Ball novel I have ever read. Every setting is clearly written, and the bugs in the original novel are also explained reasonably. GKD

It's a pity that there is a female protagonist

It's a thoughtful Dragon Ball novel

It's a very interesting invincible article, so it's not that the invincible article is not good-looking, it just depends on the author's skill.

I've only read two chapters. The subject matter is quite novel. I personally like it for the time being.

It's very good, and very innovative, but there will be Time and Space Police in the future, it depends on how the author writes it.

The heroine Ios Tova Ao Mi Bulma

It's quite interesting, not too bad.

The inner one is the distinctive characteristics of the object

The content is very innovative

Come on! I'm optimistic about you!

When will this deity appear?

78 Author, updated by chance [laughs], I, the invincible Vegito, have been banned! [Smile] What I think is interesting is that the author updates as he pleases. It would be better if the author plays less games and updates more [laughs]

I'm an old reader. Let me support you.

I can't say that I use the word "good" to evaluate it. I can only say that it is "super good".

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

At first, I thought that fused humans couldn't be classified as high or low, but then I found out that Vegito was the protagonist, so that was fine. I almost forgot the title of the book [face covering]

Can you take old Broly to play? I saw a book before that set it up as the new Broly's brother, and then used the Dragon Balls to repair his personality flaws. Got it,,,

One thing to say, the description of Zombie Dragon Ball is very good, I think it is a bit red and warm.

A true grandmaster will look forward to the future, rather than just pretending to be cool and not promoting future generations. Z-Time Goku's character design is very full. It just so happens that your protagonist inherits the grandmaster spirit from Akira Toriyama.