He was born cursed, with the karmic flames of the Asura burning in his very bones and blood, yet he must force himself to wear a robe as bright as the moon, striving for the faint hope that they might stay together forever.
She was born imprisoned, an immortal spirit-jade marrow embedded in her soul. Yet with fingertips untouched by a thousand years, she uses them to carve the ninety-ninth scar of self-sacrifice into her heart.
When Mu Qiuyu first encountered her,
a bargain quietly began to spiral out of control...
In this life-for-life wager, neither of them could have imagined
that in the final moment before the Asura fell into demonic corruption, the shackles would break with a sharp crack as he wiped away her tears.
“You give me eternal life, and I'll die for you.”
Real and objective, clear description, rich content, good article! The content is good and the structure is clear. I like reading it.
A decent traditional entrance, it looks really good