Tsundere************

The layers are very good, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also perfect. However, I think the supporting characters can also be written a little more. The supporting characters cannot just become the modifications of the protagonist. The supporting characters can provide some foil and help for the protagonists to express their emotions. As a high school student, I am very interested in this kind of love, and the author's writing style is also very natural in the characters he can write about. The heroine's arrogance and arrogance are very suitable for high school students. The character of the male protagonist is also very consistent. After all, for people of my age, it is normal to be angry at others. Come on! ! ! ! !

The biggest problem is the emotional line between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. 1Progress is too fast 2 In the early stage, the female protagonist did not reconcile with the male protagonist so quickly. 3 Characters, people with backgrounds, they shouldn't have the same personality as the male protagonist when it comes to relationships. Everything else is pretty good

I have to say that the writing is really good, the writing style is really good, and the action description is also very good, although I have questions about some parts, such as high school students can fall in love, or when the male protagonist just comes over, why do other people have to introduce themselves? Aren't they sophomores in high school? There is also the issue of drinking and smoking. After the author's explanation, I can understand it a little better, but sometimes it seems that the male and female protagonists are so close to each other, but it feels weird when they think that they are still in school. But then again, this book is very good, you give it a 5 star! ! (◦˙▽˙◦)

Except for the quarrel at the beginning and the part about getting together, which I personally couldn't accept and agree with, the rest of the writing was so good, especially when they officially got together later, the corners of my mouth never dropped. The character of the male protagonist is so perfect, I really love it. Of course, the character of our female protagonist, the baby, is also great. It's a match made in heaven. I casually browsed through several other books by the author, and I still feel that this one is deeply in my heart. I hope it won't end too quickly. Even if I write thousands of chapters, I am still willing to follow it. It makes me happy [shy]

Can the author finish this book first? It's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying]

The emotions are described very delicately, and the characters are perfectly drawn. In short, it is a very interesting novel with great potential [Like] (The author remembers me)

Good-looking, love to watch, more updates [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Maybe it's because the daily descriptions of the male and female protagonists are a bit sparse, and the emotional outbursts in more than 20 chapters feel a bit abrupt [Thinking]

It's very interesting to see how the two of them fell in love with each other unknowingly. Speaking of which, author, are you really okay with updating 4 novels at once? Don't die suddenly (just kidding). Your health is the most important thing.

Come on, come on, come on

Nice looking, love watching When will both parties meet their parents? [Blow a kiss]

It's pretty. Come on.

It's so sweet, come on

So sweet, good-looking, love to watch [adoration] [adoration]

I want to raise a book author [laughs awkwardly]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good, come on author [like]

Not bad, good looking

Diabetes is out

Looks good, please update more! ! ! ‼ (•'╻'• )꒳ᵒ꒳

Author, why do I feel that the novels you write are very unique?

It's too sweet. I'm a layman and I just love reading sweet stories [laughing]

I would like to be called the god of male love

It's a very good book, why so few people read it? I like the story of Li Yichen and Jiang Xingmian very much (Hmm... I'm a little embarrassed that it took me so long to review the book)

They're all in such trouble, and you still can't seem to like each other?

Oh my god, it's so sweet and beautiful. I love watching it and want to watch it more.

Not royal, not royal at all [laughs crookedly].

I quite like it, quite sweet

Ah, the wedding is done now

Really pretty and sweet