Dragon Ball: Super One Is Silver

A gift for women, a pretentious essay by a prophet

The most explosive core setting of this Dragon Ball fanfic! The iconic "blonde hair" of the Super Saiyan is directly replaced by the mysterious "silver white". Just imagining the image of silver hair soaring into the sky in the Super One form is enough to make old fans excited! The screaming opening of the ultimate great priest's defeat instantly raised the expectations to the cosmic level. The protagonist Lin Yuan takes off with the system in hand, and the perfect Saiyan bloodline + combat power surge package cannot be stopped at all. The author has a unique imagination: The Dragon Balls that the world is fighting for? The protagonist despises it like trash, and only strives for the strongest transformation! This kind of "Dragon Balls? Who wants it, who wants it" alternative protagonist is paired with a world-defying plug-in, which makes it feel refreshing. The expressions of the original characters beating their chests and regretting missing out on a planet are full of contrasting joy just thinking about it. If you are fed up with the traditional Super League routines and long for extreme cool stories with silver hair tearing the sky apart, stepping on the gods, and subverting the Dragon Ball combat power system, this book will definitely dazzle your titanium alloy dog ​​eyes!

I read the Dragon Ball comics when I was in school and I was very addicted. Unexpectedly, the author's entry point was very good, the plot was perfectly integrated, it was also very innovative, and the writing was very comprehensive. It looks better than the comics. The comics have too few words, the writing is very smooth, the descriptions are very vivid, and it is more comfortable to read.

It's okay. If the data is smaller, it will collapse later. You can probably write it to a comfortable state before the data collapses. When the data is large, Super Blue will start to collapse. On the female side, maybe because female authors are more emotional, they don't stop writing when they get excited, and they get excited about writing. As for early suppression, it's a small problem. Then, the integration of developing the potential of pure-blooded earthlings and the potential of mixed-race Saiyans is a very thoughtful idea. Although it is forcibly strengthened for earthlings, it is not a big problem. It is just a small matter of adding settings. When writing a fanfic, you are not afraid of adding settings and plots as conservatively as possible. What you are afraid of is randomly changing the basic settings and necessary main plot (for example, directly cutting off the original plot and story). The two most outrageous cases I have seen of Dragon Ball fans randomly changing the basic settings are to change the multiplier and transformation settings of the Super Series. One is Super One 4 times, Super Two 8 times, Super Three 32 times (holy guy, it's so outrageous), and the other is Super One 50 times, Super Two 50 times full power, and Super Three 100 times (which is also quite outrageous). I have read Chapter 200. Based on the paragraphs in the book, I feel that many readers of this book have not read Dragon Ball very much, and some have not even read it. It may be that most of the paragraphs are just like this. Most serious Dragon Ball fans are reading the book silently. When I read the comments, I felt like I was out of tune with other readers [face covering]

It's very interesting. It follows the plot up to the Frieza chapter. When you fight Frieza, you awaken the perfect Cyr bloodline. There are some poisonous points but not much. The author is also very active. Although the introduction says one girl, I'm a little confused about whether there are multiple girls or one girl? He is also ambiguous with other female characters... Of course, if there are more girls, I hope there will be No. 18, And the two from Little Demon World [face covering]

A very good Dragon Ball fanfic. The bloodline setting is very novel. The perfect Saiyan bloodline is so burning that it can swallow other energy and turn it into its own energy. It can also be used to break out into battles. The protagonist is very strong, but not invincible. There are also many original BOSS. Five-star praise encourages!

Yes, the writing is smooth and accessible. Highly recommend it.

My favorite anime since I was a child was Dragon Ball. At that time, I thought it was a pity because its combat power was a bit shaky later on, especially in Dragon Ball Super. This book completely makes up for my regret. The combat power setting is very reasonable and does not collapse at all. The transformation also maintains its value. I am quite satisfied. Five-star praise is given.

But people's physiques cannot be treated in the same way. When I was in junior high school, I was hit by a nuclear bomb and was knocked unconscious for two days before I woke up. Afterwards, I went to the cafeteria and ate 50 kilograms of rice and 30 kilograms of beef. Then I beat more than 50 classmates with my bare hands and went out to shovel a tiger. The physique of an athletic student is by no means unworthy of its reputation.

The best among similar novels, it not only retains the setting of Goku and Gohan, but also makes the protagonist vivid, the competition scenes have a strong atmosphere, and the fighting scenes are exciting. The character portrayal is very good, not bad.

For me, who loved reading Dragon Ball and had a Dragon Ball dream since I was a child, this book is definitely a masterpiece. You can tell with the naked eye that it gets better and better after the Little Demon Realm chapter. Come on, author, I am looking forward to the next plot. I will keep reading the book [Like] Ahhhh, is this the end of Darkin Saru?

The story of the male protagonist traveling through the world of Dragon Ball is particularly eye-catching, and the writing is delicate without losing the passion and tension. He not only accurately restored the cheerfulness and purity of Goku, making the interaction between the male protagonist and them full of the charm of the original work, but also vividly outlined the fantasy and grandeur of the Dragon Ball world. He can also use vivid words to immerse readers in the Dragon Ball universe, which not only satisfies the fans' feelings for the Dragon Ball universe, but also makes this time-travel adventure extraordinarily real and engaging with his smooth narrative and full characterization.

The plot is compact and not procrastinating, with constant twists and turns, novel settings, deep foreshadowing, and full motivation to follow up! The pace is fast, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the emotions are delicate and moving, and the sweetness and abuse are well blended. It is a masterpiece of Tomato! Worth recommending

This is a super good-looking novel that not only satisfies my previous fantasies, but also fits the comics very well. Every time there is a fighting scene, the dubbing will automatically play in my mind. I have forgotten many of the moments in the anime over the years. Thanks to the author, I was so excited when I recalled it. Believe me, this is a very beautiful book, support the author

Excellent fanfic, reminds me of when I was a kid and secretly bought comics to read. The scene once triggered memories, it was a long time ago, However, this book brought back memories and is worth recommending.

I just wanted to find a book that would give me a stronger Saiyan bloodline, and this book completely touched my heart. [Shy] From the beginning, it seems to be quite ordinary, but once you get to the Little Demon Realm, the plot becomes exciting. The combat power is also set very stably. In short, I hope the author can continue. It's a very good book with a very good setting. Come on. It's my second brush, am I going to become a Super Sailor God? [What]

Okay, okay, Bulma is not the heroine after all. I have seen too many movies where Bulma is the heroine, so a sudden change is not bad!

This novel is very interesting. The protagonist Lin Yuan traveled to the Dragon Ball era. He systematically collected the Dragon Balls, made friends with big bosses, continuously trained and developed the perfect Saiyan bloodline, and became an invincible Saiyan. He also married a wife and had children. It can be said that he was very successful. This novel is ups and downs, exciting, very graphic, and the content is seamless and interlocking. It is a good novel about Dragon Ball traveling through time and becoming a strong man.

Nice! I loved reading comic books when I was a kid, and Dragon Ball is a set you can't miss. I didn't expect there to be such derivative novels. It's so appetizing. I really like it!

This book is super good-looking, with a novel idea, a plot that doesn't drag out, and fight scenes that are grand and shocking... The dialogues between the characters are also super interesting, and it's worth recommending! Good-looking [send heart]

This article is cleverly conceived, the rhythm is well controlled, the author's writing is delicate, and the fighting scenes are well described. Give it a five-star rating! Keep up the good work.

It's quite to my liking, and it's not interesting to watch if it's too invincible. This semi-invincible state is quite good and worth watching. I hope I can have a perfect Super Four form in the future.

The story is wonderful, I like it more and more. I like this book and have added it to my bookshelf. I will continue to follow it. Big cheers for the author! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] @

The author's ideas are novel and the subject matter is novel, making people fall into it unconsciously. It is really a rare good book.

The plot setting is unconventional, the characters are delicately described, and it is very beautiful.

Is the heroine Bulma?

The characters are very original and beautiful.

Not bad, okay

The author's writing style has its own characteristics and style.

It is a consensus that fan fiction is difficult to write, but this book is wonderful and allows us to feel the charm of the Dragon Ball world again. Love it!