Dragon Ball: Starting with a Planet

A gift for women, a pretentious essay by a prophet

The most explosive core setting of this Dragon Ball fanfic! The iconic "blonde hair" of the Super Saiyan is directly replaced by the mysterious "silver white". Just imagining the image of silver hair soaring into the sky in the Super One form is enough to make old fans excited! The screaming opening of the ultimate great priest's defeat instantly raised the expectations to the cosmic level. The protagonist Lin Yuan takes off with the system in hand, and the perfect Saiyan bloodline + combat power surge package cannot be stopped at all. The author has a unique imagination: The Dragon Balls that the world is fighting for? The protagonist despises it like trash, and only strives for the strongest transformation! This kind of "Dragon Balls? Who wants it, who wants it" alternative protagonist is paired with a world-defying plug-in, which makes it feel refreshing. The expressions of the original characters beating their chests and regretting missing out on a planet are full of contrasting joy just thinking about it. If you are fed up with the traditional Super League routines and long for extreme cool stories with silver hair tearing the sky apart, stepping on the gods, and subverting the Dragon Ball combat power system, this book will definitely dazzle your titanium alloy dog ​​eyes!

It's very interesting. It follows the plot up to the Frieza chapter. When you fight Frieza, you awaken the perfect Cyr bloodline. There are some poisonous points but not much. The author is also very active. Although the introduction says one girl, I'm a little confused about whether there are multiple girls or one girl? He is also ambiguous with other female characters... Of course, if there are more girls, I hope there will be No. 18, And the two from Little Demon World 🤦

I read the Dragon Ball comics when I was in school and I was very addicted. Unexpectedly, the author's entry point was very good, the plot was perfectly integrated, it was also very innovative, and the writing was very comprehensive. It looks better than the comics. The comics have too few words, the writing is very smooth, the descriptions are very vivid, and it is more comfortable to read.

It's okay. If the data is smaller, it will collapse later. You can probably write it to a comfortable state before the data collapses. When the data is large, Super Blue will start to collapse. On the female side, maybe because female authors are more emotional, they don't stop writing when they get excited, and they get excited about writing. As for early suppression, it's a small problem. Then, the integration of developing the potential of pure-blooded earthlings and the potential of mixed-race Saiyans is a very thoughtful idea. Although it is forcibly strengthened for earthlings, it is not a big problem. It is just a small matter of adding settings. When writing a fanfic, you are not afraid of adding settings and plots as conservatively as possible. What you are afraid of is randomly changing the basic settings and necessary main plot (for example, directly cutting off the original plot and story). The two most outrageous cases I have seen of Dragon Ball fans randomly changing the basic settings are to change the multiplier and transformation settings of the Super Series. One is Super One 4 times, Super Two 8 times, Super Three 32 times (holy guy, it's so outrageous), and the other is Super One 50 times, Super Two 50 times full power, and Super Three 100 times (which is also quite outrageous). I have read Chapter 200. Based on the paragraphs in the book, I feel that many readers of this book have not read Dragon Ball very much, and some have not even read it. It may be that most of the paragraphs are just like this. Most serious Dragon Ball fans are reading the book silently. When I read the comments, I felt like I was out of tune with other readers 🤦

A very good Dragon Ball fanfic. The bloodline setting is very novel. The perfect Saiyan bloodline is so burning that it can swallow other energy and turn it into its own energy. It can also be used to break out into battles. The protagonist is very strong, but not invincible. There are also many original BOSS. Five-star praise encourages!

My favorite anime since I was a child was Dragon Ball. At that time, I thought it was a pity because its combat power was a bit shaky later on, especially in Dragon Ball Super. This book completely makes up for my regret. The combat power setting is very reasonable and does not collapse at all. The transformation also maintains its value. I am quite satisfied. Five-star praise is given.

Yes, the writing is smooth and accessible. Highly recommend it.

But people's physiques cannot be treated in the same way. When I was in junior high school, I was hit by a nuclear bomb and was knocked unconscious for two days before I woke up. Afterwards, I went to the cafeteria and ate 50 kilograms of rice and 30 kilograms of beef. Then I beat more than 50 classmates with my bare hands and went out to shovel a tiger. The physique of an athletic student is by no means unworthy of its reputation.

Excellent fanfic, reminds me of when I was a kid and secretly bought comics to read. The scene once triggered memories, it was a long time ago, However, this book brought back memories and is worth recommending.