Making a Wish to a Ghost

The full score for supernatural suspense novels is 10. So far, this one has a score of 7.5. It makes me stop and think about the twists and traps. The beginning of this book is very novel and the framework is also very good. If it is well written, it is likely to become popular. The disadvantage is that the number of words is too small and I can't see any problems. I hope the author can save some manuscripts. The first one is like this, the second one is like that, what should I do with the third one? Follow-up review: The author's new book "Reincarnation in the Starting Point" is very interesting. I don't know if it will go down if it opens too high. I can give it an 80%. It has more than 400,000 words, but the protagonist is still progressing too fast. After ten missions and more than 100 chapters, the protagonist has passed the seventh time. Further review: The third book, The Eunuch, has more than 600,000 words, and I can't hold back one chapter for half a month.

I think it's quite interesting. Really, I quite like it. I'm looking forward to the author's big update. But there are some problems with the writing at some points in the article. I remember which one said that Gu Shan's parents have been missing for 20 years, but Gu Shan was 18 when he joined Weiyang High School. Uh-huh, it just feels like the timing is a bit weird. I think the writing of the story is pretty good 🤔 Uh-huh, I take back what I said before. I'm a little disappointed. The ending is too sloppy, as if I'm trying to cope.

The story is wonderful, the writing and IQ are top-notch, and the finale is very interesting, but it's a pity that the ending is unfinished. The author still has great ideas, and I hope that the new book will be a success and the book will be written successfully and wonderfully.

The writing is quite good. There are many suspenseful parts in it that are very interesting and the plot is coherent. However, the white and fat part does make people feel a bit deliberate, and the female characters in the play are a bit stereotyped. By the way, isn't the female monitor in front of him dead? Why is it said later that ghosts cannot be killed? This is very confusing, I hope it can be explained later.

The previous one had the potential to be a masterpiece. It might be the author's first time writing a novel, so I'd better give it some encouragement. The early stage of this book is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write at least 1.5 Million words to complete the story. PS: Bro, if you keep writing poorly, I will definitely scold you in the comment section. @Young inaction is not inferior @young inaction does not feel inferior. Brother, you really failed to write. 😂 There is no problem with the structure of your story. The big problem with the two books is that the steps are too big. It's a bit like Mysterious Resurrection, but Mysterious Resurrection is almost finished after writing almost 2000 chapters. For example: Ghost Campus Tape, from origin to end, is enough for you to write 100 chapters. The source of ghosts is too large and there are too many types. The last Bell Tower was in a similar situation. One of the floors in it was fully written and at least 100 chapters started. Therefore, in your next novel, you need to reduce the number of complicated objects and don't expand the world view too much. For example, just write a clock tower completely, fill it up in about 300 chapters, and then end it. There may be two or three movies coming out later, or you might want to try combining the two works together to see if they can work wonders.

I finished reading the last book completely. If the ending was not so rushed, the previous book would definitely be five stars. I have been following this book to the latest chapter. The advantage is that the writing style is still stable, the plot is also very eye-catching and appetizing, and it is novel and not bad. The disadvantage is that the characterization is not as good as the previous book. I'm still wondering why the ghost classmate sacrificed himself to save the protagonist at the beginning of the ghost school chapter? There is no logical follow-up and no explanation. There are also a few teachers in the ghost school who are a bit scratchy, but the character development in the later chapters is much better. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. Very disappointed. The first book was a mess, so I started chasing the second one with high expectations. The second book is cut in half and is not as good as the first one. Why don't you explain it to the author?

I think the writing style of the author's second book is much better than the previous one, and the language and description are no longer like a novice. It's very interesting to watch so far. The protagonist's reaction is very sharp and his mind is clear. I'm very much looking forward to the next development. I hope the author will work hard 😘

Although this book sometimes has a lot of poisonous points, I have to say that the background setting is really novel and attractive. It is so great. I even think it is suitable to be adapted into an anime. It feels like a Chinese Harry Potter Japanese comic. I really like this world view. It's just a pity that it's too short After reading it, I don't know how to put it, but I feel empty inside. As I said, the background setting is really grand. If the protagonist maintains his early intelligence and develops, the story of this world will definitely have unlimited future. It's a pity, but at least it is finished, and it can be regarded as giving a hopeful ending, not counting the eunuch. It took me two days to read it, and my heart moved with the protagonist. I was really emotional. Every time I finish reading something, it is like saying goodbye, but the audience will finish the story, but the protagonist's story will not end. I feel that this kind of subject matter is quite uncomfortable and despairing, but the fire of human civilization will never be extinguished, and there is hope as long as we are alive.

I like the author's books very much. I followed the last one to the end. The beginning of this one is just as exciting as the last one. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. The plot of the last book was a bit broken because the plot progressed too fast in the second half. I hope this one can slowly advance the plot so that the book will become more and more exciting.

I feel that Chapter 133 is not about to be completed, but the beginning of the novice village and the beginning of the main story. My personal guess is: 1 The title of the book is Wishes to Ghosts. Before this chapter, Gu Shan was making wishes to the human Xiata. At the beginning, it was set that the person died and became a ghost. From then on, the object of Gu Shan's wish was the mysterious "Xia Pagoda", which corresponds to the title of the book. Two people, Xia Ta, explained the existence and memetic pollution ability of the final BOSS "It", as well as "a terrifying ghost" targeting the Lin family girls. These two ghosts correspond to the decisive battle between the main line and the Lin family line. 3. Something happened again at the Cecil Hotel. This completes the character settings of the Novice Village, such as "Fang Ning", Liu Hong, and Yang Tian. It also leads to some clues about Gu Shan's parents as the main plot. Some roommates may send them. Yang Tian at least shows his health bar. Gu Shan saves the day through his first real "wishing to a ghost". Speechless, I finished the book at the most exciting point