Ghosts, Ghosts, Ghosts, So Many Ghosts!

The full score for supernatural suspense novels is 10. So far, this one has a score of 7.5. It makes me stop and think about the twists and traps. The beginning of this book is very novel and the framework is also very good. If it is well written, it is likely to become popular. The disadvantage is that the number of words is too small and I can't see any problems. I hope the author can save some manuscripts. The first one is like this, the second one is like that, what should I do with the third one? Follow-up review: The author's new book "Reincarnation in the Starting Point" is very interesting. I don't know if it will go down if it opens too high. I can give it an 80%. It has more than 400,000 words, but the protagonist is still progressing too fast. After ten missions and more than 100 chapters, the protagonist has passed the seventh time. Further review: The third book, The Eunuch, has more than 600,000 words, and I can't hold back one chapter for half a month.

I think it's quite interesting. Really, I quite like it. I'm looking forward to the author's big update. But there are some problems with the writing at some points in the article. I remember which one said that Gu Shan's parents have been missing for 20 years, but Gu Shan was 18 when he joined Weiyang High School. Uh-huh, it just feels like the timing is a bit weird. I think the writing of the story is pretty good [Thinking] Uh-huh, I take back what I said before. I'm a little disappointed. The ending is too sloppy, as if I'm trying to cope.

The writing is quite good. There are many suspenseful parts in it that are very interesting and the plot is coherent. However, the white and fat part does make people feel a bit deliberate, and the female characters in the play are a bit stereotyped. By the way, isn't the female monitor in front of him dead? Why is it said later that ghosts cannot be killed? This is very confusing, I hope it can be explained later.

The previous one had the potential to be a masterpiece. It might be the author's first time writing a novel, so I'd better give it some encouragement. The early stage of this book is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write at least 1.5 Million words to complete the story. PS: Bro, if you keep writing poorly, I will definitely scold you in the comment section. @Young inaction is not inferior @young inaction does not feel inferior. Brother, you really failed to write. [Laughing and crying] There is no problem with the structure of your story. The big problem with the two books is that the steps are too big. It's a bit like Mysterious Resurrection, but Mysterious Resurrection is almost finished after writing almost 2000 chapters. For example: Ghost Campus Tape, from origin to end, is enough for you to write 100 chapters. The source of ghosts is too large and there are too many types. The last Bell Tower was in a similar situation. One of the floors in it was fully written and at least 100 chapters started. Therefore, in your next novel, you need to reduce the number of complicated objects and don't expand the world view too much. For example, just write a clock tower completely, fill it up in about 300 chapters, and then end it. There may be two or three movies coming out later, or you might want to try combining the two works together to see if they can work wonders.

I finished reading the last book completely. If the ending was not so rushed, the previous book would definitely be five stars. I have been following this book to the latest chapter. The advantage is that the writing style is still stable, the plot is also very eye-catching and appetizing, and it is novel and not bad. The disadvantage is that the characterization is not as good as the previous book. I'm still wondering why the ghost classmate sacrificed himself to save the protagonist at the beginning of the ghost school chapter? There is no logical follow-up and no explanation. There are also a few teachers in the ghost school who are a bit scratchy, but the character development in the later chapters is much better. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. Very disappointed. The first book was a mess, so I started chasing the second one with high expectations. The second book is cut in half and is not as good as the first one. Why don't you explain it to the author?

I think the writing style of the author's second book is much better than the previous one, and the language and description are no longer like a novice. It's very interesting to watch so far. The protagonist's reaction is very sharp and his mind is clear. I'm very much looking forward to the next development. I hope the author will work hard [Blow a kiss]

I like the author's books very much. I followed the last one to the end. The beginning of this one is just as exciting as the last one. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. The plot of the last book was a bit broken because the plot progressed too fast in the second half. I hope this one can slowly advance the plot so that the book will become more and more exciting.

Very nice looking very nice looking. The structure is rigorous and the plot is compact, and every foreshadowing is unexpected and reasonable. Although there are some scene details that make people feel unnatural, the flaws are not concealed. The author's writing style is very solid and full of fantastic ideas. In Tomato, this is the first book that really made me uncomfortable to read. It's not that it's not well written, but that the author is really good at writing. He has completely dug out the fears deep in people's hearts and set up the scare points very well. Especially when watching documentaries, I used to be frightened by this kind of simulated horror documentary only when watching videos, but now this text describing it can actually frighten me. And this kind of fright is not comparable to a momentary fright. It is a kind of subtle, creepy fear deep in the heart of a person, slowly meandering and staring at you. When I think about this clip, this scary blurry scene automatically plays in my mind. In short, I really think this book has unlimited potential (although the popularity is a bit low, the author actually writes it very well! Maybe it's just not promoted enough, please go to the author) Many people are criticizing in the comments. I am not a rigorous thinker, so I have no way to refute it with evidence. In fact, maybe this book does have some logical fallacies (but I can't see it at all hhh), but at least it is perfect in terms of horror and horror. Readers who love supernatural horror novels, come and read this one! An absolute treasure. Oh, I can't do it anymore! I felt a little disappointed after reading Chapter 89. The murderous motive of this old Black Mountain monster felt weird. This also made me feel that the author had some foreshadowing for setting up. It was just weird and a bit blunt indeed. Because in fact, I personally feel that the old Black Mountain demon is a human being after all. It can be seen that his daughter also loves Gu Shan. As her father, normally she should also have a love-hate relationship with Gu Shan. After all, as a father, he must at least realize what his daughter's thoughts are, and look at the "relics" left behind by his daughter with more complex emotions. I feel that the author wrote the emotion of the Black Mountain Demon as simple pure hatred, which is not very consistent with the emotional motivation. The reversal of identities between Lin Shen and his sister is well written, but her involvement in the plan of this old Black Mountain monster is not very logical. Anyway, cheers for the author.

It's really good to read, but I hope it won't be finished hastily like the last one. This one has a copy, and it has 👻, and it also has the rules of killing, insight into the killing rules of ghosts, and the imagination is very wide open, and it can be reversed, reversed, and reversed again. I have been reading it now, and it is a good book.

The story is wonderful, the writing and IQ are top-notch, and the finale is very interesting, but it's a pity that the ending is unfinished. The author still has great ideas, and I hope that the new book will be a success and the book will be written successfully and wonderfully.