Ghost, Ghost, Ghost, Ghost, so Many Ghosts

The full score for supernatural suspense novels is 10. So far, this one has a score of 7.5. It makes me stop and think about the twists and traps. The beginning of this book is very novel and the framework is also very good. If it is well written, it is likely to become popular. The disadvantage is that the number of words is too small and I can't see any problems. I hope the author can save some manuscripts. The first one is like this, the second one is like that, what should I do with the third one? Follow-up review: The author's new book "Reincarnation in the Starting Point" is very interesting. I don't know if it will go down if it opens too high. I can give it an 80%. It has more than 400,000 words, but the protagonist is still progressing too fast. After ten missions and more than 100 chapters, the protagonist has passed the seventh time. Further review: The third book, The Eunuch, has more than 600,000 words, and I can't hold back one chapter for half a month.

I think it's quite interesting. Really, I quite like it. I'm looking forward to the author's big update. But there are some problems with the writing at some points in the article. I remember which one said that Gu Shan's parents have been missing for 20 years, but Gu Shan was 18 when he joined Weiyang High School. Uh-huh, it just feels like the timing is a bit weird. I think the writing of the story is pretty good [Thinking] Uh-huh, I take back what I said before. I'm a little disappointed. The ending is too sloppy, as if I'm trying to cope.

The writing is quite good. There are many suspenseful parts in it that are very interesting and the plot is coherent. However, the white and fat part does make people feel a bit deliberate, and the female characters in the play are a bit stereotyped. By the way, isn't the female monitor in front of him dead? Why is it said later that ghosts cannot be killed? This is very confusing, I hope it can be explained later.

The previous one had the potential to be a masterpiece. It might be the author's first time writing a novel, so I'd better give it some encouragement. The early stage of this book is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write at least 1.5 Million words to complete the story. PS: Bro, if you keep writing poorly, I will definitely scold you in the comment section. @Young inaction is not inferior @young inaction does not feel inferior. Brother, you really failed to write. [Laughing and crying] There is no problem with the structure of your story. The big problem with the two books is that the steps are too big. It's a bit like Mysterious Resurrection, but Mysterious Resurrection is almost finished after writing almost 2000 chapters. For example: Ghost Campus Tape, from origin to end, is enough for you to write 100 chapters. The source of ghosts is too large and there are too many types. The last Bell Tower was in a similar situation. One of the floors in it was fully written and at least 100 chapters started. Therefore, in your next novel, you need to reduce the number of complicated objects and don't expand the world view too much. For example, just write a clock tower completely, fill it up in about 300 chapters, and then end it. There may be two or three movies coming out later, or you might want to try combining the two works together to see if they can work wonders.

I finished reading the last book completely. If the ending was not so rushed, the previous book would definitely be five stars. I have been following this book to the latest chapter. The advantage is that the writing style is still stable, the plot is also very eye-catching and appetizing, and it is novel and not bad. The disadvantage is that the characterization is not as good as the previous book. I'm still wondering why the ghost classmate sacrificed himself to save the protagonist at the beginning of the ghost school chapter? There is no logical follow-up and no explanation. There are also a few teachers in the ghost school who are a bit scratchy, but the character development in the later chapters is much better. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. Very disappointed. The first book was a mess, so I started chasing the second one with high expectations. The second book is cut in half and is not as good as the first one. Why don't you explain it to the author?

I think the writing style of the author's second book is much better than the previous one, and the language and description are no longer like a novice. It's very interesting to watch so far. The protagonist's reaction is very sharp and his mind is clear. I'm very much looking forward to the next development. I hope the author will work hard [Blow a kiss]

I like the author's books very much. I followed the last one to the end. The beginning of this one is just as exciting as the last one. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. The plot of the last book was a bit broken because the plot progressed too fast in the second half. I hope this one can slowly advance the plot so that the book will become more and more exciting.

Very nice looking very nice looking. The structure is rigorous and the plot is compact, and every foreshadowing is unexpected and reasonable. Although there are some scene details that make people feel unnatural, the flaws are not concealed. The author's writing style is very solid and full of fantastic ideas. In Tomato, this is the first book that really made me uncomfortable to read. It's not that it's not well written, but that the author is really good at writing. He has completely dug out the fears deep in people's hearts and set up the scare points very well. Especially when watching documentaries, I used to be frightened by this kind of simulated horror documentary only when watching videos, but now this text describing it can actually frighten me. And this kind of fright is not comparable to a momentary fright. It is a kind of subtle, creepy fear deep in the heart of a person, slowly meandering and staring at you. When I think about this clip, this scary blurry scene automatically plays in my mind. In short, I really think this book has unlimited potential (although the popularity is a bit low, the author actually writes it very well! Maybe it's just not promoted enough, please go to the author) Many people are criticizing in the comments. I am not a rigorous thinker, so I have no way to refute it with evidence. In fact, maybe this book does have some logical fallacies (but I can't see it at all hhh), but at least it is perfect in terms of horror and horror. Readers who love supernatural horror novels, come and read this one! An absolute treasure. Oh, I can't do it anymore! I felt a little disappointed after reading Chapter 89. The murderous motive of this old Black Mountain monster felt weird. This also made me feel that the author had some foreshadowing for setting up. It was just weird and a bit blunt indeed. Because in fact, I personally feel that the old Black Mountain demon is a human being after all. It can be seen that his daughter also loves Gu Shan. As her father, normally she should also have a love-hate relationship with Gu Shan. After all, as a father, he must at least realize what his daughter's thoughts are, and look at the "relics" left behind by his daughter with more complex emotions. I feel that the author wrote the emotion of the Black Mountain Demon as simple pure hatred, which is not very consistent with the emotional motivation. The reversal of identities between Lin Shen and his sister is well written, but her involvement in the plan of this old Black Mountain monster is not very logical. Anyway, cheers for the author.

It's really good to read, but I hope it won't be finished hastily like the last one. This one has a copy, and it has 👻, and it also has the rules of killing, insight into the killing rules of ghosts, and the imagination is very wide open, and it can be reversed, reversed, and reversed again. I have been reading it now, and it is a good book.

The story is wonderful, the writing and IQ are top-notch, and the finale is very interesting, but it's a pity that the ending is unfinished. The author still has great ideas, and I hope that the new book will be a success and the book will be written successfully and wonderfully.

Writing about people is normal, writing about ghosts is like having divine help. It's quite good to watch, and the main storyline is also very good. Personally, I think I can give it a 9.8. I have learned the essence of horror. It is well worth watching. The beginning can be said to be perfect, but then the second copy of the Clown Detective Agency suddenly fades away, and there is no sense of tension at all. I hope the anchor can write better later.

Originally, there was no problem in giving nine points out of ten. After all, there is no first place in writing. Who doesn't have loopholes in language? The bad thing is that this is a suspense article, and the logic must at least be above the reader's understanding. Many places are not meticulous, and even the context is inconsistent. I think this is just an oversight on the part of the author. Maybe there is too much pressure to write words and push the plot every day, and some details are not perfect. But I still recommend reading it. The author's setting is very attractive, the sense of immersion is strong, and the male protagonist can also feel the boyish feeling. It's just that I think the author can be more perfect, and I hope you can be more perfect. May this book be a hit🔥

I think it's really good-looking, the plot is tight, and the atmosphere is quite scary, but author, can you write more, my heart hurts [smile] Every time I get excited, it disappears [smile][smile][smile]

Although this book sometimes has a lot of poisonous points, I have to say that the background setting is really novel and attractive. It is so great. I even think it is suitable to be adapted into an anime. It feels like a Chinese Harry Potter Japanese comic. I really like this world view. It's just a pity that it's too short After reading it, I don't know how to put it, but I feel empty inside. As I said, the background setting is really grand. If the protagonist maintains his early intelligence and develops, the story of this world will definitely have unlimited future. It's a pity, but at least it is finished, and it can be regarded as giving a hopeful ending, not counting the eunuch. It took me two days to read it, and my heart moved with the protagonist. I was really emotional. Every time I finish reading something, it is like saying goodbye, but the audience will finish the story, but the protagonist's story will not end. I feel that this kind of subject matter is quite uncomfortable and despairing, but the fire of human civilization will never be extinguished, and there is hope as long as we are alive.

This book can be evaluated in three stages The first 50% are undoubtedly good-looking, with rigorous content and compact plot. In the last 35%, it started to collapse after entering the ghost painting. It was like Infinite Flow suddenly took on a supernatural revival script. The rhythm began to collapse, but it can also be said to be quite interesting. In the last 15%, the author simply started writing in his sleep, writing whichever sentence he dreamed about. When I saw the last chapter, I laughed with relief😄👍🏼

The author's writing is very nice, but it gets stuck at critical moments. It is recommended to update 5 times a day. You can add more gameplay in the following chapters. After all, ghosts are humans too. It would be better to write more about the protagonist being misled by ghosts and almost dying.

The book is indeed well written, but the more I read it, the more confused my mind became [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] because I felt that more new names and new scenes would appear in the back, which may be related to some of the previous things. [Like][Like][Like]

The story is very good. I was attracted by the small animation. Looking at it so far, I think only the transitions written by the author are poor. It's a bit confusing, but the plot logic is clear. It's a really good novel, but the transition is a bit stiff, so I can only give it 4 stars. I hope the author can bring a better experience to readers in the future OwO I'm convinced. When I saw the explanation of Shatta's background, I knew it. It felt vaguely unfinished. The main plot of the whole book had been explained. It was really hard for me to imagine how the author could continue the development. What would happen if the book ended completely unfinished? It can be seen that I want to write a very grand narrative world view, but I am not strong enough to do it, but this is not the reason for the unfinished work! I feel really bad. This is the first serial I've followed. It's so hard for you to lie to me. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] After explaining the background, it can definitely inspire the growth of the protagonist. Then write the line about the parents. When you write the parallel world later, I know that the circle will never come back. The original time The Chen Hong in this time is already dead. If I try to save him, I have no idea how to fill this hole. If I don't save him, it will be like watching a movie like this, a meaningless time travel. It is better to write a grown-up protagonist honestly. What's wrong with Gu Shan from other timelines coming back from time travel? I really can't stand it. . There is no follow-up to the Lin family curse line. Alas, I hope I should polish my writing skills more first. The story itself is still very good. I really like reading it. If there is a chance, this book can be rewritten. I will keep waiting... [Crying]

It is still so attractive and the Qing festival is very compact. The description is real, I hope this book can be a god, and it will be better than the previous book If this book is not popular, God will not tolerate it.

It's good to watch. I love watching it. The protagonist's IQ and the IQ of other characters are all online. The ghost's sense of oppression is also very strong. The first copy scared me a little bit. Haha. But it seems that so far, all ghost hunters have relied on tools to suppress ghosts. I just don't know how the protagonist's father suppresses ghosts at his level. I look forward to the following article. In addition, this book uses the setting of "ghosts cannot be killed", which is very good. Sometimes I get tired of traditional supernatural literature. However, this creates another problem, because in the setting of this book, "people have a chance to become ghosts after death." And ghosts cannot be killed, and there will only be more and more ghosts in the future. I don't know how the author will deal with this problem.

It's good-looking. I was attracted to it by watching the sand sculpture animation from station b. The novel is also good-looking. Every link is linked [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Generally speaking, the overall rhythm and flow of the article are better than the previous one. But I hope that since this book is about childhood sweethearts, it must be written well. Don't just go by the wayside like last time. [Sending Hearts]

The atmosphere and setting are actually quite good, and the writing is much smoother than the previous one. However, in some places, the plot progresses too quickly and the transitions are too abrupt, which makes the foreshadowing and suspense a bit far-fetched. But there is still a bright future to look forward to, and you can take care of it for a while.

I've finished watching it all. Sometimes there are too many flaws, but overall it's not a big problem. Let's talk about the male protagonist's relationship scene. It's currently a twilight zone. Now you can get along with Lin Shen as long as some special events occur. But if you want to write about brotherly love, you can also write it, and if you want to rise to the emotional line, there are different ways to deal with it. You can say that Lin Shen is actually a woman or something, or you can write it as a man and be a bl (is it still a bl after you are a pseudo-mother)? You can also write about a gender change due to certain events. Personally, I prefer to write the emotional line as a transvestite. Currently, I feel that this is the smoothest way🤔

It's really quite good, except for the group of scholars in the institute who listened to dangerous audios, had a grudge against each other, and finally died stupidly, and the abnormal objects and gods trapped on the first floor with glass that couldn't trap ghosts at all. The gods were much stronger than the drowned ghosts, but in the end, the trapped gods couldn't trap the drowned ghosts. The section of the institute gave people the feeling of intellectual disability. The rest is still very interesting and worth watching.

If you are not the author, why do you write it so beautifully? Why do you make me so want to stop? And why is the update so slow? Seeing Gu Shan from Gaoshen, I enjoyed your book so much. The quality is really damn high. Can it be faster? This is only a few pages, enough for who to read? And there is. Can this Gu Shan not be like Gao Shen? He didn't feel very strong in the end

The author's writing talent is still very high, the overall plot setting of the novel is mature, and the character creation is also good. If it were not for the hasty ending, the novel can be regarded as an intermediate online novel. However, the author has two big problems. One is that the novel has no outline and he just writes wherever he thinks, which leads to the end being unfinished. Second, Lin Shen was forced to be written as a female, which not only caused the novel to be significantly less interesting, but also made the characterization awkward and awkward to read. But as long as the author insists on writing, it will be easy to make a living from online writing with your talent.

This book is really good and very attractive to me. Except for the principal of the Hunter College, the Black Mountain Old Demon and others have some problems, everyone else is pretty good. I really hate the protagonist who endures it. When you meet those annoying people, can you just confront them? Don't tolerate it, but the main character The character's personality is quite likable and his views are very upright. Keep up the good work. I hope the protagonist will not be bound by the Hunter Academy and leave when it's time to leave. There are a lot of foreshadowings buried now. I hope the author will fill them in one by one and don't leave it unfinished. One sentence has great potential.

Well written, the above part is actually very well conceived, but the ending is too hasty. There are many parts that I like very much. Same here. At least write down this big framework completely. There are many parts that I like very much and it's very interesting. Come on, Baozi, I really like this. There are some short stories interspersed in it. It's very interesting.

The author actually wrote it very well. The story and plot settings are actually pretty good and exciting, but I don't really watch them and always feel like I'm feeling a chill behind my back. It's even more stupid to know that ghosts can't be destroyed_(:з∠)_ It's just that I don't quite understand why ghosts in the traditional sense are not eliminated? You must know that China has been plagued by wars and hunger to this day. If ghosts cannot be eliminated, it is impossible for humans to survive to this day. Not to mention these, in reality there are not only Buddhism's salvation of the dead, Taoist practices, or the Northeast's invitation to immortals, but why is it not introduced in the book? Is it because there is no such thing in the book? Also, if supernatural incidents have occurred frequently in recent years, and then the country intervenes in an attempt to develop weapons to eliminate ghosts, then in addition to scientists such as Professor Qi and others, experts in this field should also be invited to study together, right? After all, the living people are the most important. And through the introduction of the latest chapter "The Cursed Ghost", it feels less like a ghost that can be eliminated in the traditional sense, and more like Cthulhu in the cloak of a ghost. Only the Legend of Cthulhu can have that sense of despair that cannot be looked at directly, imagined, or whispered. _(:з∠)_Anyway, I will follow it to the end, but I hope the ghost can still be eliminated, otherwise it will be too despairing And if it can't be eliminated, then we have to explain what to do with the ancient people who became ghosts in the past, hhh