Flying to 20,000 Years Later: I Can Make Falsehood into Reality

This is a collection of settings. The role of the protagonist is to introduce about 1% of the plot of various settings, which can be concluded in four or five chapters. The remaining chapters of the collection of settings are more than 200 chapters, which basically talk about the protagonist stacking setting buffs, supporting characters stacking buffs, and passers-by stacking buffs. It explains the protagonist and supporting characters, what skills and abilities they have acquired, what worldview and stream of consciousness they have perfected. Basically nothing else. This is not a normal novel. There is basically no personal description, no fighting scenes, and no battles of wits. Basically, only those who like set highlights can read it.

The settings are many and grand, but the problems are also huge. The definition of a novel itself is a description of different worlds, which is okay, but too many self-set descriptions will cause a great conflict between your enthusiasm and realistic results. To put it simply, complex and grand settings will not be remembered by readers, but will only drag down your own writing ability, causing you to want to write well and close to the setting, and then continue to drag down your creative enthusiasm. The enthusiasm will continue to disappear in the actual results and income, and ultimately leave the conflict that the grand setting cannot meet your actual needs. There are many ways to supplement a grand setting, but interesting stories are the foundation. Food must be eaten one bite at a time. Realistic results are the best success. Stories with regrets are life.

A small amount of plot is found among a large number of settings. It is written with care, but more like a diary for self-entertainment. Still setting up emmm

First of all, there is no doubt about the author's cultural background, which is quite impressive. It took a lot of effort to have a grand imagination and world view. The training system for various superpowers is very complete and well-matched with scientific basis. This is great. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The world view setting is bloated, not useless, but too detailed. It's so detailed that it feels like reading the manual of an electrical appliance. It will feel much better if you refine it a little bit.

It's a good book, and the setting is awesome [face covering]. Those who love reading the setting are in luck, but the plot is pitiful, which is a pity for me. After reading more than 200 chapters in the comments, there are still a lot of settings. There is too little plot [laughing and crying]. If you don't like it, just avoid it.

The logic is clear, the world view is grand, and the words give people a very comfortable feeling. There are no poisonous points at present. It is difficult for me to believe that this is written by a new writer on Tomato (ps: I suspect that the author is a great writer on other platforms, but unfortunately there is no evidence [shy]). Although the realm system of the story is not very new at present, a good story is interesting for people to read. Then there are two suggestions: 1. Both the supporting characters and the protagonist are very capable. I wonder if the author can grasp the scale and not let the combat power collapse. 2. This is a new book. I hope the author won't finish it badly. It doesn't matter if it's slower. Write the content well. You will be the No.1 In my heart. I don't know if the author of this book review can see it. If so, I hope the author will know that there is an unknown person looking at you, and I wish you to grow wildly in this unknown world and become a famous person. I'm lying to you. I wish you well even if you can't see it. I wish you a prosperous literary career.

The writing is very good, but the setting is too grand and complicated. It is more like an anecdote than a novel. Most newcomers will not be able to accept it. It is suitable for old bookworms. I like to read it. It is very beautiful.

After reading dozens of chapters, I can summarize: The author is experienced and has a great imagination. His writing style is okay and there are no poisonous points. I only worry about the world view. If the golden finger is too big, I can't grasp it. Is the author writing a novel? Are you writing a thesis?

It feels like it's suitable for old bookworms. It has good ability settings, depth and imagination. It doesn't feel like a Tomato book. It might have done better if it had been started at the beginning. It mainly suffers from the common problems of many authors, too many settings and too slow pace. It would be better if there were more battle scenes.

The settings are awesome and looks pretty good. [Laughing evilly] It's 300 chapters of Big Brother, and a month hasn't passed yet [smile]

It feels like it's a new genre. I've read more than a hundred chapters in setting flow [laughing and crying]. It's all densely packed with settings. The settings are very logical and interesting. It's better to slowly develop these settings in line with the development of the plot. Now it's a bit like eating VV soy milk. It's delicious but not filling my mouth [face covering]

The Hongda setting and world view are all huge settings. Wonderful superpowers, a work of God

The protagonist's ability planning and various aspects of settings are very good, especially the human race's ideological setting. It is rare to see the overall situation, there is no intrigue, and the protagonist and his team are actively cultivated, and there is no pretentiousness or slap in the face. The current shortcoming is that there are more than 100 pictures, and the setting and training system are still being introduced, and they are written around the development of superpowers. To put it simply, there are more than 100 pictures, and the practice has not started yet. But this is okay, as long as it is written well, after all, the development of super powers has solved the worries of the protagonist group. The advantage is that this is a rare human race with positive thoughts and strong strength. In other words, it is not the kind of novel where everyone from the human race will step on it. The protagonist has a stable development time and develops a magnificent world view. What I'm worried about right now is that it might be too long or that it won't be long. After all, there are too many settings and the protagonist's stakes are quite high. I'm also worried that the author may not be able to write the plot well. I hope there will be fewer game types and more worldview or plot development.

It can be seen that it is very exciting, both in terms of setting and world view. But after only reading a dozen chapters, I suddenly felt sleepy [face covering]. When there is no dialogue, the text is too much like the language used in papers. It is stiff, cold, and like an AI giving a dull introduction. It feels like reading a profound academic paper [facepalm]. I am not good at science and cannot learn [facepalm]... I am really sleepy [facepalm]. I plan to keep watching it to see if I can continue watching it.

A very good expository text, but unfortunately I was looking for a cool text. The settings are huge, the logic is reasonable, the writing is delicate, and the images are three-dimensional, but there are too many settings and I can't find anything interesting. I really can't stand it.

The world described by the author is so huge and magnificent that it simply dazzled me. The moment the serialization came to an abrupt end, I wanted to run to the author's mind and see what he would write next. Alas, I wish we could meet each other at the end~ Originally, I rarely rate the novels I have read, because most of them are just entertainment for me. But this book is different. I like these novel yet logical settings and details so much. They construct a fantasy and almost real world. So I hope the author can keep writing and don't want to be a eunuch~ (/make fist to encourage) Finally, the author will write more plots related to the protagonist's cultivation. I want to read it and like it~

How to say it? I would say that some biographies are mixed into the extraordinary essay, and the plot is too little. Generally speaking, if you want to achieve a masterpiece, you have to work slowly. The first hundred or even the first 200 chapters are mostly settings. Novel settings can indeed attract readers' interest, but huge settings will kill the readers' enthusiasm. In the end, readers are willing to stay. What attracts readers is definitely not the setting, but the wonderful plot. Okay In novels, good settings are never written directly from the author's mouth or in the book, but are summarized by the readers' enthusiasm for the novel, the advancement of the plot and the description of the settings. I hope the author can grasp the details well. I still hope to have a chapter with an extraordinary setting, which you can choose to skip or read, without interfering with the reading of the subsequent plot. When the subsequent plot involves these settings, simple metaphors or descriptions can be used, which is enough.

Um... How can I put it this way? The book is a good book, but there are so many names that I can't remember [face covering], but it's still worth reading.

The setting is really good and the world view is really big. But as mentioned in the comment area, the front part is full of settings, which makes the plot drag on. When I see the settings, I basically just glance at them and don't even look at them carefully, but it doesn't affect me at all to keep reading. The main reason for the low rating of this book is that there are too many settings. After all, it is a free novel. There is nothing wrong with writing it so long. However, the audience is much smaller on Tomato, a free and fast-paced software, and many people cannot read it. So come on, author [like][like]

A must-read for the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I think this book is quite good. The only bad thing is that the author is too slow to update. As for what they said, the introduction of the world view is too watery and wordy. I think it is quite good because it is easier to imagine with more details, although I know that the protagonist must be rising along the known system. , But I still want to say, can we come up with a cultivation system? Although it will be a lot of trouble if we do this, can we open an extra chapter to write about this? But now we should write more about what is known, otherwise no one will read it. I hope the subsequent writing will be more exciting, come on! [Learned]

The setting and writing style are quite interesting. It is not the kind of science fiction novel that flows from the flow. I can feel that the author is quite careful and wants to show the world in his mind to the readers bit by bit. But because of this, I have a worry. The background design of the power system world is very grand, and the plot advances very slowly. If all these background settings are used and it continues to advance at this speed, I feel that at least 5 million will be the bottom line. But on the other hand, according to the plot, it takes 50 years for outstanding humans to graduate 20,000 years later. The protagonist group, a group of primitive people, have to participate in the highest-level dungeon after half a year of training. In terms of outline, it is very fast. If I like to watch the story develop slowly, I feel that the plot structure is too rushed. If I like to watch the story quickly, I will feel that the pace of advancement is too slow. The author is still a detail-oriented person who pays attention to power and logic, which can easily lead to a situation where readers are not happy with both parties and I feel tired from writing. Author, please pay attention. I quite like your world view and don't want you to be a father-in-law.

It's really awesome that I finished reading it. After reading Chapter 38, I couldn't help but turn to the latest chapter. It's still so boring. Starting from chapter 38, I can actually pick up chapter 249. There is no progress in more than 200 chapters. At this speed, are you going to write a tomato version of the school beauty's personal master? Or do you follow some Chinese directors and feel that readers are not important?

The overall feeling is good. Very rigorous. It's just that the pace is super, super, super slow. It's probably because the pace was too slow that the rating dropped. It's all setting and no plot.

The setting is good, but there are too many setting supplements mixed into the plot, which makes readers lose interest in reading. There are many explanations and supplements about extraordinary knowledge. In fact, readers will not pay much attention to these at all. The world view is very grand. However, the plot cannot keep up, and the progress of the plot cannot keep up with the foreshadowing of the settings, leaving readers dazzled by the grand worldview and settings. The author is very imaginative, the subject matter is very novel, and the character of the protagonist is also very cautious, so I think this is a book with great potential.

The writing is very good, and the setting is interesting, but I feel that most of this book is just setting, and the pace is slow. There are close to 200 chapters so far, and it feels like the entire plot is still in a state of foreshadowing and has not yet unfolded. It is recommended that the author either speed up the pace or update four or five chapters a day. This will definitely attract more readers to come and watch

It's really awesome to be able to write such a novel. If I didn't use AI, the author's writing power and vocabulary would be so great. However, there are too many settings, so much that the plot progress is very slow. Basically, it is either on the way to make up for the settings or in the process of making up the settings. The settings are also mixed with many arcane words. Quantum reading is basically impossible [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] It does increase the difficulty of reading to a certain extent. But the settings and everything are very novel. I hope the author can work hard [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] It would be nice if there was more plot behind it

There is nothing poisonous about it, and the author's writing is good. Settings take up a lot. A teacher explains it in language, and her explanation in language only lasts one chapter. It's completely unnecessary.

1. The settings are too big and the world view is too grand. If two books are updated every day, it is not enough to fill in the settings. Therefore, most people will keep books on their bookshelves, which is not conducive to reading. 2. The description of the protagonist is too little, preventing readers from paying attention to the protagonist, and it is too collective to highlight the specialness of the protagonist. 3. Digging too many holes may lead to omissions later. 4. It is recommended to focus on the perspective of the protagonist, with the protagonist as the core, and only by being detailed and strategic can there be tension (such as the Lord of Mysteries) In short, update more, the more and faster, so that the world settings can be filled in, and the main line can be promoted, so as not to lose readers (I hope there is an outline)

This setting is really awesome. I have read 150 chapters so far. The world view is very grand and rigorous. It is not impossible for many platinum writers to write such grand and rigorous writing. It's just that it's very easy to collapse in the later stages. Hope the author keeps it up, I really like it. Worship the boss.