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The plot is really good, but the part about Sun Wukong is easy to attract people to criticize. I suggest you change it, otherwise you will be scolded when you watch it later. I will give you a suggestion here. There are some sayings that Sun Wukong was born from the Sky-Matching Stone. Then you can just push Sun Wukong directly to Nuwa. You see, if you have a mother, then you must have a father. [Sneaky laugh] Fuxi is not very good. Later, some more were introduced in the Tribulation of the Gods, such as the Red Legend. After all, the internal officials in the late Shang Dynasty were not very good. There must be corruption. It would be better to create a new one, and then come out. It must have technology. Later, we will add more technology to it. As for the so-called destiny black bird, it can be changed after descending to Shengshang. After all, the Tribulation of the Gods has nothing to do with our human dynasty! [Shy] @

I think it looks pretty, but not as watery as you said? It looks very smooth, without any impatient mood. I guess you read too many invincible novels that only talk about love and battle. I think this kind of rhythm is pretty good. Come on.

How many magical powers will it take to use up the Golden Immortal's mana?

Is it possible that the elder brother is tired and only updates this point for the younger brother? If the elder brother has such an attitude, it would be better not to update it at all. That's all, my brother is always so free and easy, but my younger brother is angry, and it seems that I am being careless and unreasonable!

I can write about the follow-up Journey to the West and The Age of the Nine Uncles at the End of the Law in the future. Here are my thoughts 1. Journey to the West accepts Sun Wukong as a disciple and subsequently disrupts Journey to the West 2. In the era of the Nine Uncles at the end of the Dharma, Yang Xuan was reincarnated into the era of the Ninth Uncle at the end of the Dharma until his merits were perfected. Of course it's still the single heroine Yao Ji

Great book, this is not normal

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's okay, keep working hard, as long as it's not too watery

The writing is obviously pretty good, why is the rating so low?

Very well written, keep it up

In your panel about Yun Xiao, I thought it was Yun Xiao who was the heroine.

Well, this book contains almost all my yearning for the prehistoric times. I can only say that it is good and not too violent.

I don't know how to write a review of a book, I can only say it's great

Okay, it's a very nice book. The author's writing is good.

Why is the score so low? It shouldn't be!

Good looking, good characters

This book is worth reading.

Not bad, keep up the good work

Looking forward to the follow-up works

Very good looking

It's not bad so far, keep up the good work

Well enough. Strange angle

Well written, keep it up

Well written and very interesting

Not bad, the settings are non-toxic and can be viewed

If the author could write more, I would like to read novels like Journey to the West and not novels like System

If the front doesn't work, you can still look at the back.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Pretty good, come on

It's okay, looking forward to the follow-up plot